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SPuL™ 05-05-04 05:58 AM

SPuL (12-2) v.s CreaTiviTie (24-3)
 
aiight, here are the rules:
10-20 lines
No Crew, d/r, or hate votes
No feeding;
I spit first
Spit 30 min after check in

Aiight, I woke up at 5 today to do some homework, and I drank a lot of coke, lol, so I'm up. So I'll start keyin' up right now. Give me 20-30 mins.

SPuL™ 05-05-04 06:27 AM

ok, here goes nothin':

So disconcerted wit yo name, you went and modified it once
Prepare to suffer a loss, then go transfigure yo name to “dunce”
U even changed what was under you profile, lol, now I should laugh
Losers like you are so irritatin’, like a student when he lets out gas
Jus like Michael Angelo… you wanted to construct a Clas-sic
U even change yo crews, now I’ll frame you up jus like a class-pic
Spellin’ for you is tough… you need a betta eye presciption
Mispellin’ yo own rap name, you wished you was “Master of diction”
Every line in my verse is blazin’. I’ll have you runnin’ out the door
Reckon when you get yo ass back in, yo right will say “four”
KO’ing fools like you, for me… is considered so much fun
Every line in my verse is Murderous… my Methodz will have you done
Do you ever stay on topic? Your verses remind me of ADD
Yo, three plus one be four, but ADDition this not be (his losses)
Only battlin’ newbies to get all yo wins, is considered really wack
Ur afraid of a challenge, like Shaggy. You wanna Scobby Snack?
Raw is Sacramento, and you think you “Tuffa than African feet”
After I jus poked it, it broke. I guess you're pretty weak
Suck at spellin’ so much, why does your high school let you pass?
See the first letter in each word… cuz “SPuL jus merked your ass”

aiight, ur turn. 30 mins after check in. PEACE

SPuL™ 05-05-04 04:48 PM

uppin' for CreaTiviTie

Status 05-06-04 11:16 AM

aight hello..kinda busy didnt really get on yesterday.......but let me do this school thing then i will get back to this.pce...and it wont be prewritten dont trip....

Status 05-06-04 12:10 PM

Im bout to murder this Hindu…lol. check his picks


See when I bring the beef spul runs back to his religion//
Have him praying to Allah, but I mite not forgive ~ him//
I spit ill shit out of dis world, when im in Extra Terrestrial form//
Kid ur weak I could have murdered u wit a sympathetical~poem//
fucked around on dis computer, like im verbally havin cyber~sex//
while you’re here to kill newbs egos, im here to inspire~vets//
spul thinks hes HELLA DOPE becuz he strectches his lines//
but while Im levitating my skills, your record just declines//
my lyrical sword and shield will soon revile my true skills//
im forced to kill when my force field brings ur rhymes to a yield//
kid im a Master of Ceremony and u think you a Mic Checca//
u merked me? ur liar, so get on ur knees and pray to meeca//
you truly reppin your crew, brining lyrics to destruction//
MM jus blow up in ur crews face, causing havoc & corruption //

Status 05-06-04 03:17 PM

can we get some votes.....c'mon now why are you guys gonna battle here and vote in regular frontlines...

SPuL™ 05-06-04 06:06 PM

nice spit, uppin' for votes.

SPuL™ 05-06-04 06:38 PM

aiight,uppin' for votes. Also, CreaTiviTie, I'm christian jus to let you kno. :thumbup:

quickpunch 05-06-04 06:56 PM

hmm

spul-what happened? wasnt really feeling ur battle 2day....ur flow and structure was good..ur vocab is a lil too kiddy try 2 stretch it up....ur punches did hit however werent all that but u get my vote cause u were original and creative....

Creative-u barely lost this one...if u had spit more lines i would have given it to u...ur flow and structure was good i was hoping at the end ud finish strong...but the mecca line didnt work for me...so thats why i gave my vote 2 spul

VOTE ON THIS...

QUICKPUNCH VS BORN2SPITT

PoLiFicK 05-06-04 09:29 PM

okk nice drops by both of u fellaz wit some descent punches and a round of good battling

spul

bestline-Suck at spellin’ so much, why does your high school let you pass?
See the first letter in each word… cuz “SPuL jus merked your ass”

nice closer wheeww

worsteline none

ooverall yo verse gets a 9.6/10

creativity

bestline-See when I bring the beef spul runs back to his religion//
Have him praying to Allah, but I mite not forgive ~ him//

descent

worsteline-fucked around on dis computer, like im verbally havin cyber~sex//
while you’re here to kill newbs egos, im here to inspire~vets//

sex jokes played

overall yo verse geta 9/10

winner goes 2 spul no doubt about it

Sean.C 05-07-04 01:17 AM

hmmm good battle
spul
Opening:5/10
Closing:5/10
Punches:7/10
Flow:8/10
Metas:7/10
Multis:4/10
36/60 you had good flow and and structure liked how ya put "PUL'' ya know that dope
but i think ya didnt come wit that much of a starter or a finisher ya had some good punches good all around.....

Creat.
Opening:7/10
Closing:6/10
Punches:6/10
Flow:7/10
Metas:6/10
Multis:5/10
37/60 you had a good opener and closer good punches and struct but like quick i say you need a few more bars then you would have kilt him square ive seen better from both ya good battle id like to see more battles like this

SPuL™ 05-07-04 06:06 AM

aiight, 2-0 me. I don't kno, but Koopa couldn't vote. Maybe he doesnt' have 5 wins, or h didn't poll. But uppin' for votes.

Sean.C 05-07-04 10:30 AM

ya i dont got 5 wins yet but it was a good battle so i wanted to put my oppinion down

CounTREE Jay 05-07-04 11:29 AM

Flow:Close, gotta go wit Creative though, his shit just flowed better
Punches: Creative, all the hundu shit was funnie as hell, but Spul Master of Diction was a nice bar
Vocab: Spul, but it was close
Multis: Creative
Personals: A lil' more to Spul
Opener: Definately Create
Closer: Neither was really that good, but Creative's was betta

Fav Bars

Spul:

Spellin’ for you is tough… you need a betta eye presciption
Mispellin’ yo own rap name, you wished you was “Master of diction”

Creative:

fucked around on dis computer, like im verbally havin cyber~sex//
while you’re here to kill newbs egos, im here to inspire~vets//

It was madd close, but I expected a lil' more outta Spul, Seemed like he had madd just down parts in his verse, that he was just fillin'

Creative had less, but his shit maintained throughout.

Vote/ Creative

Status 05-07-04 12:03 PM

upin for votes...and mecca is where the people pray.....like thats where they have to pray.........and mic checca..aight peeps think thata MC stands for mic checcka..you get it

SPuL™ 05-07-04 08:19 PM

yea, I ain't hindu, but whatever. Uppin' for votes.

Raphael 05-07-04 08:47 PM

aight check it

i dont got much to say because there isnt much when there is fake punches in the verse

Quote:
Originally Posted by SPuL
Click the link to see my pics. Also, I AM indian. 75% black, 25% indian. But if you look at the pics closely, you will see a gold cross around my neck. I ain't hindu. I got ONE god, only. I'm christian.


so that would make all of creativities punches fake because all he talks about is HINDU...

so my vote goes to spul...no hate

if you want a more detailed vote lemme know...

SPuL™ 05-07-04 08:49 PM

aiight, thanks for votin', didn't kno you would use that PM. anyways, uppin' for votes.

Raphael 05-07-04 08:51 PM

but it was for proof...

SPuL™ 05-08-04 12:09 AM

oh, aiight. Uppin' for votes.

Status 05-08-04 12:12 AM

uppin for votes............................................. .

SPuL™ 05-08-04 12:37 AM

yo, uppin' for votes.

SPuL™ 05-08-04 12:51 AM

uppin' for votes.

-Zone Out- 05-08-04 01:54 AM

Spul get this for more consistent punches
it was a even battle
and its not much I can say about it
but if Creative would have had more punches in his verse
he would have won
good battle from the both of you
v/spul

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe

Daclassic 05-08-04 02:03 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Koopa Troopa
hmmm good battle
spul
Opening:5/10
Closing:5/10
Punches:7/10
Flow:8/10
Metas:7/10
Multis:4/10
36/60 you had good flow and and structure liked how ya put "PUL'' ya know that dope
but i think ya didnt come wit that much of a starter or a finisher ya had some good punches good all around.....

Creat.
Opening:7/10
Closing:6/10
Punches:6/10
Flow:7/10
Metas:6/10
Multis:5/10
37/60 you had a good opener and closer good punches and struct but like quick i say you need a few more bars then you would have kilt him square ive seen better from both ya good battle id like to see more battles like this


hey koop why didnt you place a vote...if spul got 36 and creativitie got 37 then that should be a vote......

Status 05-08-04 02:05 PM

he needs more post and wins..or just post............................

Daclassic 05-08-04 02:10 PM

the classic vote
 
spul: okay you had a well structured verse. Flow was pretty fair. vocabulary was okay...But your punches werent that hard hitting....mainly because most of your verse contained fillers. you brought creativity with that spelling at the margin sh.t...but now that is getting played. what you need to work on is combining personal punches now that is a deadly combination. and multies and sh.t like that.

Creativity: you had a good structure also. flow was a little better then spuls. vocabulary a little better too. Your punches were okay..but ive seen better. this was close but due to your lack of bars you put down...but lyrically you got it.......I don't think these people know how to vote...or they just dont understand a verse....peace

v/creativitie

Status 05-08-04 02:12 PM

finally a real vote....uppin for votes...............thanks for the votes peeps

Triple_N 05-08-04 02:57 PM

Not a really good battle
spul:
Opening:5/10
Closing:5/10
Punches:7/10
Flow:8/10
Metas:7/10
Multis:5/10
37/60 coulda came alot harder on this one, closer was tight though

Creat.
Opening:6/10
Closing:6/10
Punches:5/10
Flow:7/10
Metas:6/10
Multis:5/10
35/60 opener an closer was ok but rest was weak, you had some played punches too, spul didn't really do much better, jus more oriniginal
Vote: Spul

Willa 05-08-04 02:57 PM

ok spul r structure could use work in spots creative ur structure was good a ll around
spul ur flow was good creative urs was good but stuck in 1 place ood vocab from both um punches spul u had better punches especially how u did the thing down the side u did like double punches lol creative urs hit hard 2 but not quite as hard good battle id like 2 c more creativeness from both though

Status 05-08-04 02:59 PM

who you voeting for me or him........................

Willa 05-08-04 03:07 PM

y does it matter ur a lil bitch u black listed me after usaw my breakdown lmao ur the fakest bitch on this site scared 2 take a loss lmao

Status 05-08-04 03:08 PM

wat the fuck are you talking about.......i dont have anyone on my black list.......

Status 05-08-04 03:09 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by will a peer
y does it matter ur a lil bitch u black listed me after usaw my breakdown lmao ur the fakest bitch on this site scared 2 take a loss lmao

wat the fuck you gettin hella heated about..calm down......now i mite put you on my black list

Daclassic 05-08-04 03:16 PM

hmm i find this one funny............................................. ...

SPuL™ 05-08-04 03:16 PM

yo, Triple_n jus told me you PMed him askin' him to change his vote. WTF? You prolly did Blacklist will a peer, cuz you was afraid to let her vote, even though she didn't post who she was votin' for. LMFAO Man, I lost ALL my respect for you, for what you are doin'. Man, really. Records don't mean shit. Everyone kno's ur good, so it doesn't matter if you get another loss. But seriously, what you did is pretty low.

Daclassic 05-08-04 03:18 PM

now this is really getting funny............................

Status 05-08-04 03:19 PM

wat the fuck............. hold on let me see if will is in my black list and then i will tell you wat i told triple n..........



aight look this is wat is aid..and i ment it like that was a d/r vote.........

why you vote agianst me man change tha vote and i will return the favor


and i all ways say return the favor...........

Willa 05-08-04 03:19 PM

whats so funny daclassic ur afraid 2 take a loss creative lol
One of the competitors has specified that you may not vote on this battle i no its not spul cause i voted in 15 battles last nite and 1 was his so its obviously u

Status 05-08-04 03:19 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Daclassic
now this is really getting funny............................


your a dummy ..lol.................................


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