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accomplishment 05-05-04 06:35 PM

Phat Mic versus Accomplishment
 
yo lets do this... 15 lines... aight b....

drop by friday night...

virt 05-05-04 07:07 PM

hmmmmm. todays wed. Drop by tomarow at noon...If that is ok with you cuz 3 days is too much time.

accomplishment 05-05-04 10:45 PM

aight how bout tommrow at 9:30 at night cuz i got college till 3 then i'ma go play ball till like 8 aight...

virt 05-06-04 12:40 AM

Fuck it... right now


The Penetration Is Lyrical, you have a better chance cummin harder collabin with vibrators…
co-oppin(coop) with dilldoes is the only way you blow up… Like TNT and mine-raiders
could give a fuck about your confidence simply I've rotted wits
he Drops more soap than prisons no wonder why his assholses anonomous
Ya similar to the way an orphan writes cause no body wants your words
Spice the beef a taste is easy for you being grouped with a Collective Prodigy of herbs
Drench ya hand in "hepatitic-juice", and you still couldn't connect wit a "ill-punch",
get "real-sun(son)", cuz you jus' spittin heat equivalent of "tannin booth's", killed-much...
You've got more played punches then fighting with one handed bitches
Always the same, two days, deff in sight with no chance of landing landing hits
Fuck a clone Phat mic's a organziation for the supreme
Just like three days ago you instant message fililng to be a employee
Well consider this day that i started the "hostile takeover", this win won't become a refusle
your garbag and you could have better lines if you played a def kid in a musikal
I'll put you back in your hood broke, i do crack so don't think that i will ever choke
MM is a joke... you should be named Jay Z, for "the rock" i that just smoked

virt 05-07-04 10:19 AM

man what the hell...

virt 05-08-04 10:21 AM

Man get this no show the fuck outa here....

Killah Bwoy 05-08-04 12:52 PM

that was ok verse but stretched as fuck..............

accomplishment 05-09-04 01:25 AM

YO check dis

YO lyrcal talent is whatya lack...quick to meet ya demise...
kill dis cracka jack...rip out his soul...and say fuck dis prize.../
Claim the d bitch..em's gotcha surpressed off his purple pills....
but you aint hard...ya bitch ass could'nt clime auburn hills.../ (part of da d... it isnt hard)
leashed bitch...pop till ya realise shit i'm ya master...
kids gangster...his ghostwriter isnt as hard as casper.../
"white kongs" your title weak cracker rapper and he flaunts it...
its not just the name you steal but the rhymes from malibus most wanted.../
when i'm stompin on his head lyrically you can't handle me...
and the wieght on my shoulders...like diet coke...zero calories.../
yo stretched lines like armstrong in his prime...
and not the fact that that is a shitty style...it used to be mine.../
now i switched shit up...a lil shorter...and more harsh...
well tommrow phat mic will stop with his 60 sylabal bars.../
dis is my mission for methods...
...mask you fuckin must be jokin...
cuz after my verse i got phat mics internet connection CHOKIN...


yo bitch...

virt 05-09-04 01:28 AM

ok thanks for droping i didn't want to DQ you...

and by the D i don't mean detroit...

accomplishment 05-09-04 01:10 PM

Dallas... damn that would have been even better oh well

Diagnose 05-09-04 03:31 PM

damn im gonna battle this guy..shyt..this is gonna be hard to win..aight..here's my vote
phat mic:
Spit: 7/10
punch:7/10
multi: ?/10
vocab: 8/10
total: 22/40

accomplishment:
Spit: 8/10
punch:8/10
multi: 7/10
vocab: 7/10
total: 30/40

aight phat..you had some good personals and shyt..but i didn't feel u as much as accom..his punch and personals jst had more then enough ta kill u...both of ya are good...I don't even think u guys need to improve cuz both of ya are like are skilled enough to beat anyone in this site..aight...vote accom...

Diagnose 05-09-04 03:32 PM

can u plz return the favor...
this link is like my weakest battle cuz i went easy on the guy...i jst went wack all the way...

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=122054

Diagnose 05-09-04 03:33 PM

Y can't I vote......??????I have like 11 wins..why can't i vote?

e.coli 05-09-04 07:58 PM

accomplishment took this battle

it was close....the punches and creativity were about even so accomplishment took this with his metas he had some nice ones......phat your closer was dope though but accomplishment was too much for u

accomplishment 05-09-04 10:05 PM

yo upp for voters

accomplishment 05-10-04 08:48 AM

up for votes

CounTREE Jay 05-10-04 09:24 AM

OK.

Flow: Accomp. Phat, your shit was madd stretched, threw your flow of like all fuck.
Punches: Accomp. He just came harder, and Phat had a few that just didn't make that much sense. "could give a fuck about your confidence simply I've rotted wits
he Drops more soap than prisons no wonder why his assholses anonomous" - WTF?
Personals: Accomplish. The White Kong shit was hot
Vocab: Phat
Opener: Accomp, it was aight, Phat's was MADD stretched
Closer: Accomp. Phat was talkin' about smokin' crack, WTF is that about?

Fav Bars:

Phat:

Ya similar to the way an orphan writes cause no body wants your words
Spice the beef a taste is easy for you being grouped with a Collective Prodigy of herbs

I just liked the Orphan part, that was pretty sic

Accomp.

"white kongs" your title weak cracker rapper and he flaunts it...
its not just the name you steal but the rhymes from malibus most wanted.../

Hard Personal

Phat, get rid of the stretched bars, and come wit harder punches and better wordplay.

Accomp. Hit wit some harder punches, I've seen betta outta both of y'all.

Vote/Accomp

~CJ~

accomplishment 05-10-04 02:58 PM

mc. get busy... uppin

Shadows edge 05-10-04 04:34 PM

aight, I basically agree with CJ... that "white kong" line was fire, the rest of this battle was sort of blah... Phat you really gotta cut down on your lines, accomp had a nice personal about that too.... not quite 60 syllables but too damn close.

v/ accomp

hit back my battle with marv.. in ELF...

accomplishment 05-10-04 09:33 PM

up for votes people damn

accomplishment 05-11-04 12:33 PM

up for votes on this one .

accomplishment 05-11-04 09:01 PM

upppppppppppppppppppppppp for votes

accomplishment 05-12-04 02:55 PM

up for votes... come one.. by the way this guy was prevelously Phat Mic.. and his title said White Kong... just so ya'll know

L.E 05-12-04 03:41 PM

A'ight...this was an a'ight battle...

Phat Mic...or whateva ya name is now...some lines you had was dope as fuck...but most of the verse was not up to your usual standards. Structure was a lil' hard to read...so that threw the flow off. Overall, a'ight verse, but you coulda spit better.

7/10

Accomplishment...dawg, you never cease to amaze me. This wasn't your best battle, but that shit about Malibu's Most Wanted...haha...that made me laugh dawg, that shit was dope. Flow could use a lil' werk, but otha than that...dope verse.

9/10

Vote- Accomplishment.

No hate.

L.E 05-12-04 04:08 PM

Yo, dawgz could you plz return tha favor? Thx...

http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...926#post1282926

accomplishment 05-12-04 06:14 PM

upp people seriously vote on dis shit.. 4-0 accomp hit dis uup emcees

accomplishment 05-13-04 01:21 PM

upp come ya'll hit dis up

FlowIntelligent. 05-13-04 02:32 PM

breakdown:

phat mic:

The Penetration Is Lyrical, you have a better chance cummin harder collabin with vibrators…
co-oppin(coop) with dilldoes is the only way you blow up… Like TNT and mine-raiders
^^good opener a lil stretched 6/10
could give a fuck about your confidence simply I've rotted wits
he Drops more soap than prisons no wonder why his assholses anonomous
^^lmfao nice bar 9/10
Ya similar to the way an orphan writes cause no body wants your words
Spice the beef a taste is easy for you being grouped with a Collective Prodigy of herbs
^^good bar stretched again 6/10
Drench ya hand in "hepatitic-juice", and you still couldn't connect wit a "ill-punch",
get "real-sun(son)", cuz you jus' spittin heat equivalent of "tannin booth's", killed-much...
^^ok punch 6/10
You've got more played punches then fighting with one handed bitches
Always the same, two days, deff in sight with no chance of landing landing hits
^^good shyt 7/10
Fuck a clone Phat mic's a organziation for the supreme
Just like three days ago you instant message fililng to be a employee
^^gay bar 4/10
Well consider this day that i started the "hostile takeover", this win won't become a refusle
your garbag and you could have better lines if you played a def kid in a musikal
^^another wack bar 4/10
I'll put you back in your hood broke, i do crack so don't think that i will ever choke
MM is a joke... you should be named Jay Z, for "the rock" i that just smoked
^^ok closer orijinal 6/10

overall: 48/80

accomplishment:

YO lyrcal talent is whatya lack...quick to meet ya demise...
kill dis cracka jack...rip out his soul...and say fuck dis prize.../
^^ok opener nothing too hott 7/10
Claim the d bitch..em's gotcha surpressed off his purple pills....
but you aint hard...ya bitch ass could'nt clime auburn hills.../ (part of da d... it isnt hard)
^^ lol good bar 7/10
leashed bitch...pop till ya realise shit i'm ya master...
kids gangster...his ghostwriter isnt as hard as casper.../
^^ok bar 6/10
"white kongs" your title weak cracker rapper and he flaunts it...
its not just the name you steal but the rhymes from malibus most wanted.../
^^good personal hottest bar 10/10
when i'm stompin on his head lyrically you can't handle me...
and the wieght on my shoulders...like diet coke...zero calories.../
^^another hott bar 7/10
yo stretched lines like armstrong in his prime...
and not the fact that that is a shitty style...it used to be mine.../
^^hott punch good bar 7/10
now i switched shit up...a lil shorter...and more harsh...
well tommrow phat mic will stop with his 60 sylabal bars.../
^^ok punch 6/10
dis is my mission for methods...
...mask you fuckin must be jokin...
cuz after my verse i got phat mics internet connection CHOKIN...
^^good closer 7/10

overall: 57/80

vote: accomplishment he came harder with the punches good wordplay structure and flow

~!1!~


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