LyriCal havok vs Murderous Mask
 

aight heres the rules
10-20 lines
no D/R
no crew
no hate
basically house rules

and plz explain ur votes

oh and ur got till noon tomarrow schools out

I Said 16 lines , dont change the rules so it reminas 16 lines... if you do more it wont count cheater.

aight im bout to drop

Im bout to test ur “Murderous Methods” nobility//--1
And at the same time prove my deadly versatility//--2
Im an intelligent vigilant that no one can suppress//--3
But for you it aint the same, how can a “mask be Murderous”//--4
How am I supposed to battle someone that doesn’t “exist”//--5
Even in this battle “Jason kidd” cant throw you an “assist”//--6
Ur verse is like “love letters” coz all they do is “miss me”//--7
Dis battle is “uneven” like the eyes of “Shannon Doherty”//--8<<ScareTactics
You couldn’t be “hot even if you were Satans right-hand-devil//--9
Even then you would be “too far south” to be anywhere near my level//--10
You should “invest” some time in ur rhyme before it gets “mortgaged”//--11
You writing rhymes is “unsafe” like using “Los Angeles Storage”//--12
im rippen this pussy, leavin him wet wit some diseases//--13
after this battle he will be banished like the jews did jesus//--14
listen kid, im not ur average vet, im invunerable against ur "D/R tactics"//--15
you couldnt drop shit if you were taking hits of "profolactics"//--16<<E-lax

LMAO
ok i`ll key something up...... your luck theres no such thing as slips on RB.

haha sorry i had to change something i forgot to change before i posted

this nigga.........man you going on 2 hours past ya dumb fuck...nig cant even tell time

Shut the fuck up you dumb fuck , i went to eat during writing my verse ill finsh it now you fucking moron if im 2 hous late... you posted your verse one hour ago.. dont make me use more personals bitch hold your dick up.

nigga had to go take some flintstone vitamins~~ haha

Will SOME ONE PLEASE FIND THE PUNCHES IN YOUR VERSE
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Bitch back down , You lost to my member , so please tell me who stinks?
Ha, how you gonna battle the MM’s.. when ur elevating on the blueprints
I wont use euhpusim you`ll sleep quick… Flash forward when you arm drops…
And you wont get up , Resurrection impossible … even with a alarm clock..
Incredibly dumb , he came to my forum …calling me out , why?
When you made a thread in my forum…. Spelling banishment without an I…

^^^
You`ll leave and pack your bags & go …plus you bars are played.
This aint not games , if u wanna play .. Hop on old rb`s.. ARCADE.


unconfident bitch your 4 –1 , you`ll get whored son.. Man forget it…
At the previous post I laughted , minutes later.. Look How he edits..(his verse)

I break necks , ^^ how u gonna be dope , when u get propped from fake-vets.
Murking Huh? If you stuck your dick up phats ass then gave him a pay-check.
Pulling you harder than a sling shot , Corrode you with all diseases..
Lyrical , Havoc . . that’s just wackness separated in two different pieces
You`ve lost your rep , I`ve enhanced mine … So I know why you hate-it.
Claim you’re a vet? When your admitting that you suck to creativte.


I EDITED this SO I COULD ADD THE URL LINKS IN

aight lets get some votes on this shit

Upin please xplain votes....

Break down if possible
if not make a comment then make an overalll
Punches
Personals
Creativty
Multis
Metas
Etc..

ya thats why you challenged me, and i accepted...You then you backed out. And that was the worst feeding a structure on the market.

you mean quoting you moron , i`m not even gonna add you to my black-list it would be stupid.
& Phat mic you said you wanted to finsh your battle first i dint see that you had done after this is done i`ll battle you

ok, put i pm you too. we can get this squashed after this battle...wait you'll be banned

No i wont be banned , moron.
Because theres no such things as slips , as i posted
either way if there was i would not be banned no i dont want to say so please shut the fuck up .......
Voteeeeees.

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Im bout to test ur “Murderous Methods” nobility//--1
And at the same time prove my deadly versatility//--2
um..no punches there weak.........

Im an intelligent vigilant that no one can suppress//--3
But for you it aint the same, how can a “mask be Murderous”//--4
lol good hit at him.......masks ARE NOT murderous

How am I supposed to battle someone that doesn’t “exist”//--5
Even in this battle “Jason kidd” cant throw you an “assist”//--6
ok i guess nothin spectacular

Ur verse is like “love letters” coz all they do is “miss me”//--7
pretty good u shoud've used this is the punch,NOT the set up line.......
n u should've said,ur PUNCHES are like love letters.......not verse

Dis battle is “uneven” like the eyes of “Shannon
Doherty”//--8<<ScareTactics
GAY

You couldn’t be “hot even if you were Satans right-hand-devil//--9
Even then you would be “too far south” to be anywhere near my level//--10
GAY

You should “invest” some time in ur rhyme before it gets “mortgaged”//--11
You writing rhymes is “unsafe” like using “Los Angeles Storage”//--12
DONT LIKE THIS WORDPLAY ESPECIALLY THE FIRST LINE

im rippen this pussy, leavin him wet wit some diseases//--13
after this battle he will be banished like the jews did jesus//--14
GAY

listen kid, im not ur average vet, im invunerable against ur "D/R tactics"//--15
you couldnt drop shit if you were taking hits of "profolactics"//--16<<E-lax

prophylactic is condoms or a preventitive measure of some sort NOT exlax son............ closing is weak


Will SOME ONE PLEASE FIND THE PUNCHES IN YOUR VERSE
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Bitch back down , You lost to my member , so please tell me who stinks?
Ha, how you gonna battle the MM’s.. when ur elevating on the blueprints
doesnt make sense.......sucks

I wont use euhpusim you`ll sleep quick… Flash forward when you arm drops…
And you wont get up , Resurrection impossible … even with a alarm clock..
ummm....i see the content ,but i really dont think this is a hard punch at all......i think it sucks

Incredibly dumb , he came to my forum …calling me out , why?
When you made a thread in my forum…. Spelling banishment without an I…
SUCKS....not hard hitting........

Quote:
Originally Posted by LyriCal HavoK
nah i wanna battle him...and only him
and...i wont be the one leavin

^^^
You`ll leave and pack your bags & go …plus you bars are played.
This aint not games , if u wanna play .. Hop on old rb`s.. ARCADE.

OMG,THIS IS THE WORST LINE IN THIS BATTLE...IF U WANNA PLAY GAMES GO TO AN ARCADE? HAHA,U CANT BE SERIOUS

Quote:
Originally Posted by LyriCal HavoK
haha sorry i had to change something i forgot to change before i posted

unconfident bitch your 4 –1 , you`ll get whored son.. Man forget it…
At the previous post I laughted , minutes later.. Look How he edits..

GAY....word of advice...ppl use quotes to make their verse better,..here it made it ANNOYIN cuz it didnt prove SHIT..........n u overused it anyway

(his verse)
Quote:
Originally Posted by Phat Mic
oh shit,Lyrical is back...He's about to start murkin. lol. Lyrical Pm me when you can. This is gona be interesting.

I break necks , ^^ how u gonna be dope , when u get propped from fake-vets.
Murking Huh? If you stuck your dick up phats ass then gave him a pay-check.
WTF?kid u dont even make sense

Pulling you harder than a sling shot , Corrode you with all diseases..
Lyrical , Havoc . . that’s just wackness separated in two different pieces
umm..this is possibly ur best line.....n its still weak........

You`ve lost your rep , I`ve enhanced mine … So I know why you hate-it.
Claim you’re a vet? When your admitting that you suck to creativte.
sorry son,the link doesnt work...u should've quoted him here,not the other spellin shit n editing son..............would be a good personal,but cant be sure it actually happened.........




well,both verses are far from good........but,lyrical spit first......so u had the uppper hand mask......n he used ur name well in his verse,i'd say that was prolly the best line in this whole battle........n the love letter line,it needed work but it was ok...he had some weak wordplay,but its more than i can say for u.......u talked too much about editing n spelling n u quoted stuff till i got sick of readin ur shit,n that arcade line was so horrid,it took points away from u..............n ur closing could've helped u win,but the link aint workin so theres no proof,so imma have to rule that as a fake personal......so based on ur best line n his best...n ur gay arcade line no the non-working link......imma give this to lyrical......i'm out

nice blacklisting me mask... i expect our battle

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aight yo check it

both of yall had some nice verses but lyrical just hit harder with his shit vocab was there and personals that scare tatics shit was gay though mm dropped a nice verse
too but his punches and personals just didnt hit as hard

vote=lyrical havok

drop an honest vote on this

http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...t=122880&page=2

ok da idea of pasteing quotes is jus wackk 2 tell da truth lyrical came wit some vocab y u were usin baskic shit from quotes|


lyrical-

bestline-Im an intelligent vigilant that no one can suppress//--3
But for you it aint the same, how can a “mask be Murderous”//--4

nice

worsteline-none

overall yo verse gets a 9.6/10

mask

bestline-You`ve lost your rep , I`ve enhanced mine … So I know why you hate-it.
Claim you’re a vet? When your admitting that you suck to creativte.

dat was tite

worsteline-Bitch back down , You lost to my member , so please tell me who stinks?
Ha, how you gonna battle the MM’s.. when ur elevating on the blueprints


wack start

overall yo verse gets a 8.7/10

maybe its me but da quotes throw off yo flow

winner-lyrical

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you up'd your battle 20 fuckin times
you're gonna be DQ'd

MEtaphysik please shut the fuck up , I Blacklisted you because you blacklisted Me.

^^blacklisted you because your hoe ass always
hating on me so go suck a rick...yes rick lmao

Can you please sustain yourself from talking shit?
Thank you.

battle me..you blacklisting gully

Well, besides the fact that you "t"y_pE -- Li"k"e THI*S//!!1, and that you post "Respectible losses/wins, AND the score of the match...

Besides all of that, you suck at battling, now lemme break it down for you.



Im bout to test ur “Murderous Methods” nobility//--1
And at the same time prove my deadly versatility//--2
self glorification. No punch. Anyone can say, "Its the new fad//Im bad//" Also, it had no metaphore, no cliche, no wordplay, AND was ended with "//'s" at the end...
Im an intelligent vigilant that no one can suppress//--3
But for you it aint the same, how can a “mask be Murderous”//--4
Ok, first off, Murderous and suppress dont rhyme...You attempted a punch but failed horribly. Also, you try and make things stand out. People aren't stupid, or its just so rediciously far-fetched from the battle, that it makes no sence.
How am I supposed to battle someone that doesn’t “exist”//--5
Even in this battle “Jason kidd” cant throw you an “assist”//--6
Again with the quotations...another weak attempt at a punch. You show no complexity at ALL. None, nothing.
Ur verse is like “love letters” coz all they do is “miss me”//--7
Dis battle is “uneven” like the eyes of “Shannon Doherty”//--8<<ScareTactics
Dont explain things...
You couldn’t be “hot even if you were Satans right-hand-devil//--9
Even then you would be “too far south” to be anywhere near my level//--10
Not a punch, another self glorification line.
You should “invest” some time in ur rhyme before it gets “mortgaged”//--11
You writing rhymes is “unsafe” like using “Los Angeles Storage”//--12
Ok, your using quotaions on words, but they don't relate to anything, not even the other quoted words...
im rippen this pussy, leavin him wet wit some diseases//--13
after this battle he will be banished like the jews did jesus//--14
...your only attempt at a punch that skidded a hair on his right sideburn. Very weak and uncreative. Played played played...
listen kid, im not ur average vet, im invunerable against ur "D/R tactics"//--15
you couldnt drop shit if you were taking hits of "profolactics"//--16<<E-lax
no..


^ Quoted by C.

LMAO you all are dickriding & hating fucks fuck you

v/ EU.

Lyrical - way too basic.. punches were childish.. played concepts were really bad i.e. `Jason Kidd` line.. structure`s basic an rhyme scheme is more so.. personals were either played or weak.. name flip early on was disgustin`.

Emcee - stretched lines.. too many quotes.. but punched much harder.. personals were a tad wittier.. fresher concepts.. harder more original all round basically.

tough battle to judge but MM takes it......he came personal as hell and that is what gave him this victory......it was close......u both had nice punches but MM's were more effective........Lyrical u had a nice verse........u just didnt have enough to take this one......

v/MM

Thanks for fuck sake good votes none of that dickriding bullshit & that latinwhores hate vote was incredible upin . . .

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