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Deadly Vs choppa--city
Yes, As U wished.
I made a new on in Elevated FL because. We both have over 5 wins. Rulez: 10 lines Due: 20 min from now. No show: DQ blah!! Goodluck. We gonna talk about MM Vs Da Army. After we dont with this. |
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blow yo brains out head,and spit yo lame shit back at u instead..............
u cant think of creativity in yo verse cuz yo vision is dead............... go 2 msn n chats and work on yo lyrics then come back with better skilling........ yo visions is fake u prolly thought Dp was 4reel when she said u her sexual healer........ da computer a freeze on yo verse it get so embarrased of u acting.............. so go do a new username when i make u disappear like the otha 4 jacksons......... even yo hippo avatar tellin u 2 leave he waving u 2 get off wit his hand.......... deadly vision beat me???? dass when ali stop shaking and christopher reeves stand...... yo shit need practice,yo open mics not hype,shit is wat MM about............. i reverse yo verse,cuz da day u beat me is when grand master flash come back out.... |
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^^Faggot!! ,Even hawaians got sweeter Punch!~youz on usher nutz like a chipmunk.. I guess its true what they say,"FAGGZ HANG WIT THE WEAKER BUNCH!".. Quote:
^^I'll have a heater crush ya thoughts cuz you winnin this is only in your imagination.. Even P diddy aint FEELIN YA SHIT,when youz sprung off dylon ya MASTERBATION!.. 14-2 rec? dont Fidget bitch, Im "Dropping" All Over The "Bedrock!!" Like "Pidgeon Shit"... A Warrior?? C'mon ua bitch And Slit Your Wrist, You To Easy To "Penetrate" Like Your Girl's "CliT"... Quote:
^^Dont Stay Shocked You Aint Benevelant... You On A "Strict" "Diet" Of "Gay Men" So Stay On Ya "Read-Ya-Men-t"... There Goes Ya Reign…I’d Steal Ya Girl… But I know Her “Head-Bites”.. You a fag yo whole Flow Makes Me “url” and I aint Talkin about Web-sites.. |
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uppin the votes nice drop................................
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punches vison:14-2 rec? dont Fidget bitch, Im "Dropping" All Over The "Bedrock!!" Like "Pidgeon Shit"...
A Warrior?? C'mon ua bitch And Slit Your Wrist, You To Easy To "Penetrate" Like Your Girl's "CliT"... personals vison:14-2 rec? dont Fidget bitch, Im "Dropping" All Over The "Bedrock!!" Like "Pidgeon Shit"... A Warrior?? C'mon ua bitch And Slit Your Wrist, You To Easy To "Penetrate" Like Your Girl's "CliT"... metas vison:^^Faggot!! ,Even hawaians got sweeter Punch!~youz on usher nutz like a chipmunk.. I guess its true what they say,"FAGGZ HANG WIT THE WEAKER BUNCH!".. multies vison:There Goes Ya Reign…I’d Steal Ya Girl… But I know Her “Head-Bites”.. You a fag yo whole Flow Makes Me “url” and I aint Talkin about Web-sites.. ^^^not really multie but somewhat structure choppa: bars wasnt too stretched wittiness choppa: his punches didnt hit hard but was funny though overall i gotta go with deadly vison peep links |
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yo both these were good verses but i was feelin choppa's verse betta
punches choppa had like a 8.5 and deadly had a 8 vocab goes to deadly flow and structure goes to choppa vote=choppa city |
^^Playa am sorry to say this but,U have to have 5 wins to vote in here.
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haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa uppin dis shit .........
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Mannnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn What HAppened to Elite voters man. Didnt kno it take that long fo people to vote in elevated.
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damn lol choppa i think this was a weak verse from u u could of came alot harder..ur shit was simple a newb could of spit that..it was nice but sum shit did not make sense and i was like huh..and sum shit didnt rhyme
but all in all it was pretty good 5/10 deadly...nice idea on quoting his lines..that shit was sick im feelin dat idea..........ur lines was pretty sick too....nice punches...ok vocab...shit was nice 7/10 vote deadly |
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choppa...
standard flow...pretty good concept....cept a couple of the words didn't rhyme and shit....but overall decent to average flow and structure...didn't come as hard as you ussually do...you are alot better then this verse...but it was okay... deadly... was off and on ...but when it was on it was HOT...people don't think your structure/flow is good...but it's just because they don't know how to read or something...because it was good...and hot disses...funny shit good job it was a pretty close battle but i gotta give it to deadly |
choppa - started well.. pretty obvious concept but still a nice name flip.. but u fell off after that.. the 'hippo', 'Jacksons' an 'computer freezin' lines were all wack an old.. the 'ali and reeves' line was bad too.. Christopher Reeves can stand.. the majority of the verse was stretched.. cut out the un-needed words to neaten it up an add a flow..
DV - your 'quote' punches were rubbish.. u didnt actually incorporate the first two quotes in the punch.. and you spoke of 'penetratin your girls clit'.. how? plus it's a wack 'sex' line.. closer was also weak.. nothin stood out.. too many played 'sex/gay/dick' lines.. flow was literally non-existant. v/ choppa. Edged it in a weak battle. Vote on one of these or be bugged until you do: http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121238 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=122505 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121685 |
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Im sorry, he has five wins. Vote- Choppa Eyeronik- your lines were strechted, so next time u say someone has strecthd lines, you have no room to talk. like illtalic said, your quotes suck. you punches were ok, some hit, some missed, flow was below average. wordplay was decent, work on vocab. Choppa- ok verse, dont put so many ........... , ruins ya struct. ya punches were decent, your wordplay was ok, your flow was nice. your verse had ok personals, as he did also. well pretty close battle, but since ruth used a masturbation line, choppa wins, if ya didnt use that, it woulda been a tie. vote- choppa. |
choppa - started well.. pretty obvious concept but still a nice name flip.. but u fell off after that.. the 'hippo', 'Jacksons' an 'computer freezin' lines were all wack an old.. the 'ali and reeves' line was bad too.. Christopher Reeves can stand.. the majority of the verse was stretched.. cut out the un-needed words to neaten it up an add a flow..
DV - your 'quote' punches were rubbish.. u didnt actually incorporate the first two quotes in the punch.. and you spoke of 'penetratin your girls clit'.. how? plus it's a wack 'sex' line.. closer was also weak.. nothin stood out.. too many played 'sex/gay/dick' lines.. flow was literally non-existant. v/ choppa. Edged it in a weak battle. ^^^I AGREE...CLOSE BATTLE............. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe |
even yo hippo avatar tellin u 2 leave he waving u 2 get off wit his hand..........
deadly vision beat me???? dass when ali stop shaking and christopher reeves stand...... yo shit need practice,yo open mics not hype,shit is wat MM about............. i reverse yo verse,cuz da day u beat me is when grand master flash come back out.... some hot shit by choppa, nice structure, it read well and i enjoyed reading it you need a few mor em multies to improve the flow and a few more personal but other than that its tiight You On A "Strict" "Diet" Of "Gay Men" So Stay On Ya "Read-Ya-Men-t"... There Goes Ya Reign…I’d Steal Ya Girl… But I know Her “Head-Bites”.. You a fag yo whole Flow Makes Me “url” and I aint Talkin about Web-sites.. u had some funny shit there but the gay jokes are waaaay played, they aoint effective no more, flowed ok, good meta's structure was awful tho so hard to read v/choppa beter structure and an easy to read verse |
let me no if i can vote choppa...cuz im in DV crew and you mite bitch so let me no if its coo if i vote
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da new rulez said no crew votes didnt it ..............
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yea, anyways Strobe made an announcement that said if you vote for someone in ur crew, you will be warned, then the next time you will be banned.
As for the battle. IT was a hot one. I was feelin' both verses. I do however think that Choppa won this one by a slight margin. Deadly, You had some good punches in there, but the quotes made it kinda hard to read. The flow was a little shaky in some parts too. Overall, I give it a 8/10 Choppa, hot verse. I was feelin' it all. You had good hard hittin' punches. Your flow was very good as well. You had a nice opener and closer too. Good job. I give it a 9.5/10. v=Choppa |
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big props to both of yall
yall did your thing deadly-nice verse quoting his lines and shit made that interesting dogg- you had some nice punches and personals nice vocab and a nice opener and closer choppa- nice verse too struc was better that deadly's your flow made me laugh dogg nice punches and personals up in there and a hott opener and closer vote= choppa cuz his punches hit harder and made me laugh |
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