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Lyrical Demon 04 05-05-04 11:01 PM

Da Demon Vs Da magican 07
 
you know da deal

no dickriding
no crew votes
no freeposting
detailed votes

u spit first

10-20 lines

u want it you got it dammit!!!!!!!!!!!


Lyrical Demon = Big Man = Unknown Assassin = DQed.

Lyrical Demon 04 05-05-04 11:02 PM

spit dammit

Lyrical Demon 04 05-05-04 11:04 PM

if i dont spit 2night ill be sure to spit 2morrow

Da MaGiCiAn 7 05-05-04 11:06 PM

NA sone i been sayin u go first u cant change da shit now

Lyrical Demon 04 05-05-04 11:08 PM

you challenged me nigga you go first

Da MaGiCiAn 7 05-05-04 11:09 PM

I told u da rules and i said u go first so drop ya shit..

Lyrical Demon 04 05-05-04 11:11 PM

you challenged me nigga you go first ok

Da MaGiCiAn 7 05-05-04 11:18 PM

nigga stop stallin drop yo shit..

Lyrical Demon 04 05-05-04 11:21 PM

imma drop ma shit 2 morrow weather you like it or not im not even i da mood right now and i aint got no fresh matarial so imma do dis 2 morrow holla

Da MaGiCiAn 7 05-05-04 11:24 PM

damn nigga u iz scared

Black Haze 05-06-04 01:44 PM

dat nigga shook lolz

Lyrical Demon 04 05-06-04 07:54 PM

checkin in

Lyrical Demon 04 05-06-04 08:36 PM

Oh no! imma murder this cat
instead of a rabbit try pullin a brain outa hat
your rhymes is like a car that need to be fixed
your rhymes is like bleach and ammoina......it just dont mix
dis guy a newbie and he'll lose real quick
only thing you spit is nut,straight from a dick
im big time nigga yo ass is too small
i dont know about rappin, just stick to vollyball
You could never beat me, no matter what you say
Unlike James Bond you won't live to "Die Another Day
This shit is for leisure..if force was skill then ya pressures a feather..
Coz ya like a male virgin with a ruler..ya taking desperate measures!!
Kid thinks he's better.. I got him laid out n he's bitchin
Sure you elevated Kid.. now you're in sitting position
magican couldn't punch.. so he kicked but his knees gave out
Then he went in for the kill.. but the moron never came out
hes the creation but his elavation just keeps going back
theres a thin line between dope and wack..and magican just feel in the gap
i'd never feed of magican..wouldnt want my mouth getting dirty
31 votes against magican..he wont loose cause he deleted thirty

Lyrical Demon 04 05-06-04 09:25 PM

uppin 4votes

Da MaGiCiAn 7 05-06-04 10:11 PM

iight to tell da truth dat was sum wack shit..

Da MaGiCiAn 7 05-06-04 10:18 PM

Nigga u still wont Flow Hot even doe ya name is Lyrical Demon//
Nigga u shouldnt exist in dis world like a spiritual Seamon//.......--
U seriously wanna battle so i aint gonna Play yo//
i thought it would be alot harder 2 get ma First K-O//........--
Ya flow is Weak and borin like a Fake Bitch hit//
U aint hard at all u like a Freshly Baked Biscuit//......--
Yo i think u must be a rookie cause u challed Da magician A.K.A da Ghost//
To tell da truth afta dis Line i wouldnt be suprised if he was affriad 2 post//......--
Nigga im rippin u like a Dorito bag half open//
U wanna win but all dese people can rely on is his Fag ass Hopin//........--
Da punches will leave u wit scars and bruises//
Dis nigga so sorry when he battles himself he still loses//.......--
Flo,Rhymes,Structure is sumthin this slacker lacks//
ya whole style looks like u found it in da bottom of some cracker jacks//....--
U aint gonna win this battle even tho ur a biter//
Ya spits couldnt be hot if ur tongue was a lighter//......--
U aint a true G..jus cause u rockin a red or Blue-T//
nigga ur like a movin Target like ya shirt says Shoot me//....--
Ur Wacka then a 'Wack' 'Cat' wit W-A-C-K tatooed on his 'Back Pack'//
tell me wut do u 'Strap' 'Jack'? u couldnt be "TRUELY DOPE" if ya nickname was "Crack Fact"//....--
New to RB? For u it stands for New to Rappin'//
U got a Belt and a dildo n dats da onli things u'll eva be strappin'//.....--
U ma bitch now i got u sayin 'I'm sorry i steped on ur shoes sir'//
Yo u couldnt win if i was an Auto-matic loser//......--
If i had da flu i still could smell defeat 2//
Da dots at da end of each lines could of Beat u//....--
He said dat im wack so im tryna stay calm//
Dick ridin? yo sluts are bad stop learnin from ya mom//.....----
Im tellin da truth yo u couldnt be hard if ya knick-name was Erection//
Ma flow is sick enough it will give u and infection//
Imma Rip u...Wut r u expectin?//
Da only way u would win dis is if it was a 'You Suck' election//

¤FIINIISHA¤

He scared 2 battle me u see how dis Lier stalls//
Ya shit coudlnt Be hot If u shit out Fire Balls//

Da MaGiCiAn 7 05-06-04 10:20 PM

Uppppppppppin fo votes holllla atcha BOOIY

Lyrical Demon 04 05-06-04 10:24 PM

man you garbage

Da MaGiCiAn 7 05-06-04 10:26 PM

nigga i ripped u...And nigga u supposed 2 put ya real name in da damn Battle thread name....u aint gonna get a lost u scared of a loss yo

Lyrical Demon 04 05-06-04 10:27 PM

you even spit tha same verse ol prewritin motherfucker

Lyrical Demon 04 05-06-04 10:28 PM

you weak as hell

Da MaGiCiAn 7 05-06-04 10:35 PM

Nigga i told u I was gonna do dat shit so shut da fuck up....I told u imma rip u wit da same Verse...U had 2 make a longa 1 and u did so its ova let da votes take place n shit so we kno who da real champ is

Da MaGiCiAn 7 05-06-04 10:43 PM

Upppppin fo votes yo fa real drop some explained votes...

Da MaGiCiAn 7 05-06-04 11:42 PM

yo where da fuck iz da votes i wanna close dis battle already dang ....

Lyrical Demon 04 05-07-04 08:02 PM

upppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppin 4 votesssssssssssss

Lyrical Demon 04 05-07-04 08:12 PM

upin 4 voots damm

Lyrical Demon 04 05-07-04 11:15 PM

uppin for votes

Lyrical Demon 04 05-08-04 12:02 AM

uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp pin 4 votesssssssssssssssssss

Enhance 05-08-04 07:07 AM

vote = lyricaldemon
he came harder with better punches and his structure was better plus he made more sense and he dint cheat like da magician did because he had like 20 lines more
punches = lyrical
flow = lyrical
creativty = mag
multis = mag
but flow and punches r the most important
vote = lyrical demon/

Lyrical Demon 04 05-08-04 01:57 PM

thanx 4 the vote upppppppppppppppppin 4 votessssssssssssss

Optimal 05-08-04 02:22 PM

quit swayin dude and drop ya shit................................

Optimal 05-08-04 02:25 PM

Da mad=g got this he came way harder and had complex punches....demon u had hack lnes because didnt fiish u thught and u dint fill u punches.

My vte: da Mag

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Lyrical Demon 04 05-08-04 02:58 PM

thanx for the vote optimal uppppppin 4 votessssssssssssssssssssssss

Lyrical Demon 04 05-08-04 06:33 PM

uppin for votes

Lyrical Demon 04 05-09-04 11:07 AM

uppin 4 votes

Lyrical Demon 04 05-09-04 06:40 PM

uppin dis thread or battle what eva u wanna callit

Lyrical Demon 04 05-10-04 06:01 PM

uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp pppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp ppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp

Da MaGiCiAn 7 05-10-04 11:18 PM

AY YO PLEASE VOTE FO DIS BATTLE CAUSE I WANNA HAVE A RECORD SON holla back sonz

Lyrical Demon 04 05-11-04 11:37 PM

Uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp pppppppppppp

Unknown Assassin 05-11-04 11:44 PM

i think the lyrical demon won this battle.i felt that his verse made more since than magicans but only by alittle.magican you shoudent have focused so much on makeing your verse long and you should have focused on your punches.i also chose demons battle because his punches were sharp and funny and they made since.but your opener needs a little more work demon.magican you could have easly won this battle if you just made your punches better and made since but demon also won caues his flow was better.


ma vote demon


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