~~XxToXiCXxVeRbZ VS T12U3 K1LlA ~~
 

This Is The Rulez
No Crew Votes
No Dick Ridin Votes
No Hatin Votes
We Each Spitt Once
U Spitt First
10-15 Lines
No Feedin
most post ur rap within 30mins after check in...

Hold Up Homie What Crew U On Homie// Is It Da Army

naw dogg i quit da army look at my sig thats the crew im in now

O Aight I Know Why Cuz Of Puerto Rico Nelly Huh?

Aight Check In Check In//

Be ready and at ya best
The celebrity match of death
Heart snatched through your chest, cardiac arrest In all disrespect
I'll snatch you by your neck
and do a suplex and step
Crack your neck while I break your arms, catch your breath
Then I asked the ref, 'how many cats is left?'
One on one, Come get did
All I have is a pen and punish you kid
Abdomen punctured and look what I did to his wig
Wanna live then I stab 'em in the lung with his rib
Every word I say detach a vertebrae from your spine
Rematch wherever we meet at, any place anytime
Get your snot-box smashed with a 9
Smacked with a rhyme, push your forehead to the back of your MIND//

After beating you its fair to say that I've dismantled half your crew,
Ima make you murder public news by fucking burying you on "PayPerView"*/

This battle's been over as soon as I showed up so there aint no need for me to pass the mic,
Cos If victory crossed your mind then you more confused than a retarded hermaphrodite/

omg nigga u went past the line limt cant u see it says 10-15 lines u got wut 20 lines and thats not in the rulez so u should be d/qd for not going bye the rulez nigga if ur going to battle at least read the fucking rulez dumbass

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O My B Homie// Yo Let Me Go Again// But Its Going To Be Different Homie

No Dogg Keep 15 Lines And Get Read Of The Rest Iight U Cant Make A New Rap Just Get Thorow Away Some Lines

Aight Fam// So U Want Me To Take Out Da My 1st Verse And Make A New One

Yea Nigga Dont Take All Fucknig Day Shit Hurry The Fuck Up

ayo, in this rap game im all alone, i aint GOT~NO~COMPETITION/
I MURDER~THE~OPPOSITION when I DROP~MY~COMPOSITION (in case you aint know a composition is a piece of writing)
I got you freestyling like you jaw has LOCKED~POSITION/
My SINGLE~PROPOSITION is that your COCK~IS~MISSIN
Im spittin insane viruses, and you just a PROPHYLACTIC/
you rhymes dont even flow but my FLOW~IS~INTERGALACTIC
Imma "crucify" "this guy" so he's on my LIST~OF~THE~DEAD/
put him in a coffin so i can PISS~ON~HIS~HEAD
Just replying to his verse was enough to INTIMIDATE~HIM/
lyrically DISCRIMINATE~HIM before I ELIMINATE~HIM 8 LINES

WHEN U REPLY Be ready and at ya best
The celebrity match of death
Heart snatched through your chest, cardiac arrest In all disrespect
I'll snatch you by your neck
and do a suplex and step
Crack your neck while I break your arms, catch your breath

OVERALL=15 LINES

Check In..............

Aight Aight// Damn I Think I Messed Up// Oh Well//

Im blunt with my words and aint bad wit the disses either//
Fuckin niggas up wit my speeches like I boned the english teacher//
You better smoke some trees as a ghost writin tool//
Toxic you couldn't write on a higher level if this was college rule//
But to be honest, I dont be feelin ur shit when u write//
So ill leave a virgins pussy on ur mind so u can *think* that ur tight//
Green with envy, punches useless cuz im searing ur retina preventing the skill to see //
Dogg You couldn't spit in the "present" if you were under a Christmas tree //
Toxic you thought you were pretty tuff you looked at me and "roared"//
I proved I can kill you with 8 fingers 2 thumbs and a "keyboard"//
Toxic I got you under "raps" like a gift under the tree//
I make a mess of you like I forgot to lift the seat when I pee//
I got this battle won look at the damage I did//
Toxic couldn't beat me if I was one of Joe Jacksons kids//

Aight Aight Aight// Nice Drop// Yo Nigga U Hot// I Wonder Why Da Hell Da Army Let U Go Fam// But Its All Good No Beef//

Votes Votes Votes People

But to be honest, I dont be feelin ur shit when u write//
So ill leave a virgins pussy on ur mind so u can *think* that ur tight//
.....THAT WAS NICE.............REAL QUIK WITH THAT PUNCH

Yo i thought this was a real solid battle but overall the meta is betta ya heard and true killa hit it off yo toxic i really dont have much advise for ya but maybe just elevate the metaphor a bit but still yo you did drop nice and first....

Yo Uppin For Some Votes Plz Explain Well!!

aight check it

this was a nice solid battle on both sides
Toxic dropped a nice verse tried to use some meta's up in there-had some nice
punches and personals-not a very elab vocab struc was
but your flow was nice

Killa dropped a nice verse -used a nice vocab -his punches and personals hit
harder and his over flow was just better

toxic you didnt lose this by much just work on hittin harder with your punches
and personals

Vote=True killa

ok breakdown for true killa!
overall verse *8.5*
good structure nice flow good punches good meta4's
breakdown for toxicverbz
overall verse *7.5*
bad structure,bad flow,fair punches,no meta's
flow:true killa
punches: true killa
strcucture: killa
meta's : killa
my fav line:Im blunt with my words and aint bad wit the disses either//
Fuckin niggas up wit my speeches like I boned the english teacher//
nic meta phore
least fav line:I'll snatch you by your neck
and do a suplex and step
Crack your neck while I break your arms, catch your breath
in the beggining toxic elf-glorified his self nice battle
v/true killa!

Yo Uppin For Some Votes Plz Explain Well!!

Cmon Ppl Stop Sleeping On My Battles Every Time I Fucking Battle My Shit Gets Slept On Where Then I Go To Front Lines And See Other Ppl Getting Votes On There Battles Cant I Get Some Fucking Votes On My Battle?

Be ready and at ya best
The celebrity match of death
whack bad opener
Heart snatched through your chest, cardiac arrest In all disrespect
good made up for opener
I'll snatch you by your neck
and do a suplex and step
wtf
Crack your neck while I break your arms, catch your breath
Then I asked the ref, 'how many cats is left?'
ok that was gay
One on one, Come get did
All I have is a pen and punish you kid
cuz you are messing up
Abdomen punctured and look what I did to his wig
Wanna live then I stab 'em in the lung with his rib
wig and riba didnt rhyme
Every word I say detach a vertebrae from your spine
Rematch wherever we meet at, any place anytime
that was tight
Get your snot-box smashed with a 9
Smacked with a rhyme, push your forehead to the back of your MIND//
good scond line whack

After beating you its fair to say that I've dismantled half your crew,
Ima make you murder public news by fucking burying you on "PayPerView"*/
tight best line
This battle's been over as soon as I showed up so there aint no need for me to pass the mic,
Cos If victory crossed your mind then you more confused than a retarded hermaphrodite/bad ending
you was good but work on punches


Im blunt with my words and aint bad wit the disses either//
Fuckin niggas up wit my speeches like I boned the english teacher//
that was off the change yo good opener
You better smoke some trees as a ghost writin tool//
Toxic you couldn't write on a higher level if this was college rule//
hott shit hott shit!
But to be honest, I dont be feelin ur shit when u write//
So ill leave a virgins pussy on ur mind so u can *think* that ur tight//
best line to me yo best line
Green with envy, punches useless cuz im searing ur retina preventing the skill to see //
Dogg You couldn't spit in the "present" if you were under a Christmas tree //
that was good but kind of put you back.
Toxic you thought you were pretty tuff you looked at me and "roared"//
I proved I can kill you with 8 fingers 2 thumbs and a "keyboard"//
no this is your best line fuck that you got two great lines.
Toxic I got you under "raps" like a gift under the tree//
I make a mess of you like I forgot to lift the seat when I pee//
weird but hott oh just got it lol
I got this battle won look at the damage I did//
Toxic couldn't beat me if I was one of Joe Jacksons kids
i think this is the best battle ive seen. you got this yo but toxic had good rhymes but you got it.

this person had a better flow and had good structure as well as some decent metas:



Im blunt with my words and aint bad wit the disses either//
Fuckin niggas up wit my speeches like I boned the english teacher//
You better smoke some trees as a ghost writin tool//
Toxic you couldn't write on a higher level if this was college rule//
But to be honest, I dont be feelin ur shit when u write//
So ill leave a virgins pussy on ur mind so u can *think* that ur tight//
Green with envy, punches useless cuz im searing ur retina preventing the skill to see //
Dogg You couldn't spit in the "present" if you were under a Christmas tree //
Toxic you thought you were pretty tuff you looked at me and "roared"//
I proved I can kill you with 8 fingers 2 thumbs and a "keyboard"//
Toxic I got you under "raps" like a gift under the tree//
I make a mess of you like I forgot to lift the seat when I pee//
I got this battle won look at the damage I did//
Toxic couldn't beat me if I was one of Joe Jacksons kids//

Vote: True