MarvolousJ1009 Vs FatAL_LyRikzZ
 

Check Check...U Know Rules

jea..checkin....now u gota check in and first da 3 is a t.k.o soon as u check in ima drop

Alright Yo Check CHeck(IN)!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!..........

beefin with jay? nah u not able da size of my gun a make u tear quick-
u "take bars from da cat in da outlaws" datz y they call u "fatal lyrikzz"-
(think about it)

i got some dude in cali dat clap ya moms then clap u and ya sista-
ya record's sad u couldn't get a "strong win(d)" if u battled in a "twister"-

after im done clappin da ratchett,ya fam a be at ya wake grabbin ya casket-
quit rap u just makin a "ass" out yaself on da "net" like u "sat in da basket"-

you say u nice? i cant tell by ya record u gotta convience me yo-
dogg cuzz u suck and u got no "hott-lines" no more like "ms.cleo"-

u think u could jay?? nah i'll dump trey's and probly sit in a cell-
i could give a fukk if niggaz is gassin u and say ya spittin is well-
dunny but after i "bus(t)" all u gettin is a "1 way ticket" da hell-
ya boys aint gon be "throwin pennie's in water" but they gon be in a hospital "wishin" u "well"-


ya verse is 2nite dunn..

Fatal Is My Game Aint Believe Me Read My Name
Actin Like You Dont Know After This U Better Run FOr Shame
Time Is Tickin Like A BomB ima KO YOu
After This I Leave Ya "MESSED UP" Like A Bad Hair-Do
LEavin You ROtting Like Corpses Gettin Rotten
Leavin You Mysterious In Public U Gonna Get Forgotten
Y Would you Want To Battle Me IN The First Place
Really,Thou I Leave My FingerPrints Planted In YA Face
Ill is My Game Just Check These BARS
Counting So Many Wins I Cant Even Count That Far
Keepin It Real Never Fake I Remain To Stay Dope You Hearin This ?
Zoomin So Fast Next Time Read My Name FATAL LYRIKzZ

You Like That LOL

IITE Votes NOw PLzZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

lol nigga did a song....dat was creative tho...UPPIN 4 VOTES PPL

Uppin For VOTES !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

PLz Uppin For Votes I Will RETURN THE FAVA !!!!!!!

Upppppppppiiiiiiiiiinnnn Vote Ppl!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!........

I'm Goin For Fatal, He Got Better Flows
He Lives Up To His Name
But Marvelous Had A Wack Flow And Confusin
His Rhymes Were Big Ass Words And His Lines Were Too Big
It Takes Time To Read It
This Is My Rating:
Fatal:7/10
Marvelous:0/10

Alright 1-0 Appreciate The Vote...............Still Uppin

this is an obvious win yall come on.

BREAKDOWN

FATAL
u didnt even battle man that was a verse bout ur self and a weak one at that, a battle is supposed to be against the other guy not juss all self-glorification. come on now.

MARVOLOUSJ
u murdered this man, wat a shame. u wasted such a verse on this. sick verse homeboi. the punches were hard. flow was aight tho. the metas, vocab, multis, and wordplay were all off the chain

VOTE-MARVOLOUSJ

Alright 1-1 Still Uppin THOU !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

opener-Marv.
strcuture-Fatal & Marv. both on that one, well done
punchlines-Fatal
creativity- Fatal
personals-Marv. "i got some dude in cali dat clap ya moms then clap u and ya sista-
ya record's sad u couldn't get a "strong win(d)" if u battled in a "twister"-"
The overall is self-explanitory, sorry dawg but
But as for the topic of battling go I am going to have to go with Marv, cause he stuck to the topic of battling and that is very important.

yo infamous j ya crazee dunny lmaoooo....but i could see u wanan give me hate cuzz i aint vote 4 u okay

IP: 3240 794D


beefin with jay? nah u not able da size of my gun a make u tear quick-
u "take bars from da cat in da outlaws" datz y they call u "fatal lyrikzz"-
(think about it)

^^ QUIT WIT DA DAMN "GET IT" stuff...lol..decent opener tho


after im done clappin da ratchett,ya fam a be at ya wake grabbin ya casket-
quit rap u just makin a "ass" out yaself on da "net" like u "sat in da basket"-


^^ Nice wordplay

dunny but after i "bus(t)" all u gettin is a "1 way ticket" da hell-
ya boys aint gon be "throwin pennie's in water" but they gon be in a hospital "wishin" u "well"-
^^ solid closer w/more good wordplay




From: CaLiFoRniA !!!!!!!
Status: Online
IP: 6C7A 3231


Fatal Is My Game Aint Believe Me Read My Name
Actin Like You Dont Know After This U Better Run FOr Shame

Decent opener...

Aiyo dawg, SPELLING YOUR NAME OUT DOWN THE LEFT SIDE OF YOUR VERSE IS GAY AND POINTLESS, NOT TO MENTION UNORIGINAL AND PLAYED.


Flow Tie
RHymes Mar
Punches Mar


Vote: MARV

3-1 Ok Yo MArv Thats Not K.O Right Cuz I Got A Vote....And U SAID FIRST 2 3-0 But Right Now Its 3-1

The Breakdown..........

Punches: Marvelous..... ur shit was koo u had better punches,fatal was too loose he wasnt hittin as hard
Flow: that was a tie both flows were off yall were pausin between lines and shit so elevate on that
wordplay: Marvelous i like you wordplay it was hott, fatal i didnt like how you bolded out your letter that gets annoyin i got told something about that because i used to do that and i stopped so elevate on that

so im gonna have to give this battle to marvelous for having more in his spit plus his punches came harder than fatals
V=Marvelous

ALSO I VOTED ON THIS SPIT CAN YALL CLOSE THIS BATTLE OF MINE ITS OLD AS HELL!!!!!!!! but can yall vote on it(thanks for repayin the favor)
heres the link

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=111956

aight uppin 4 more votes ppl.............................

Marvelous came wit a battle verse and F/L wuz more of a poem style to it.
Marv your punchez and wurd play wuz very nice.
But F/L I liked your creativity.


vote Marvelous J