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SUPERVILLAIN vs. Mad Dog
the rules:
no crew votes. no dickriding votes. no hate votes. all votes must be explained. no recycled rhymes. no biting. 10-12 lines max. verses due tonight (now). you spit first. ..........i think that'll work. :shoot: mad dog, i would have preferred battling you without peeping your work (you vs. bigneks), sometimes i like the element of surprize, but you wanted an honest vote first, so you got one. since we already agreed to a battle beforehand, we're still gonna do it. come with your best shit. good luck guy.:shoot: s.v. |
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chin check 1,2,1,2.
s.v. dangerous..........crhyme sindicate |
Opponents beware of this fake supervillan/
Offences include being a bitch...and actin feminine/ How the hell can u call me out...and expect to win/ U'll get squashed like a coke can...made of alluminum/ Ur rap aint a contest...bitches be pukin at them/ The only way u'll be sick...is if i give u food poisonin/ Ur best to no-show now...coz i dont label u a foe/ (foe = challenge) I guarentee u only spit best...when u choke/ Now let me give u an honest vote...just to make things clear/ I've already won this battle...ur response'll just kiss my rear/ Weak i aint even try but lets see wot u got... |
"watch me turn this dark knight into bright day.............follow me and you might need shades." - s.v. dangerous
(verse) mad dog...how can i blame you for your rage mutt?// you cute little thing...all bark and no bite, thats symptoms of a spayed pup,// rabid beast? or just jizm on the lips of this average freak?// im a savage king, ruling everything on this atlas, please call the sire, his majesty...// the only way that you could be even considered as hotter,// is if i put you on a 4 foot leash...6 feet from your dish of water,// (in the summer) i'll beat ya with a tail-pipe to a duelly, just to defeat you unusually,// its worth the jailtime and the ticket that i get for this animal cruelty...// dont feel brave, 'cuz you live up to your name and only chase pussies,// im not talkin' 'bout the nookie kind rookie, but r.b.'s famed wussies...// beware of the hollow-tips engraved with your name, pointed at your face in a loaded weapon,// just keep your fingers crossed and pray that today, all dogs get to go to heaven!!!// (ha! im the drunken master! this was just a quick freestyle appetizer to warm me up for the crew league entree. nice spittin' mad dog........now lets get these votes in playboy.) supervillain of the crhyme sindicate!!! |
v/ wack.
This was painful to read.. both verses were bad in different ways.. nothin flowed.. no decent concepts for punches.. very basic structures an rhyme schemes.. no quotables.. punch for punch you were both even.. but Villain gets this battle cos each of his punches were personal.. only weak name flips but at least they were typed specifically for his opponent.. Mad Dog jus` randomly typed horrible attempts at vague disses. v/ Villain. Vote on one of these or be bugged until you do: http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121238 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=122505 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121685 |
thank you for that beautiful feedback my friend..........some day illtalic, i aspire to become as dope as you. (cough)
s.v. |
This was lopsided... My vote goes to Super...
Heres how i break it down SUPER - Better Punches, Better Rhyme, Better Flow MAD - You gatta elevate... aluminum doesnt rhyme with win, and supervillain doesnt rhyme with feminine. Just elevate and ull be better hopfully My vote goes to Super.... He took this one to the bank for sure. |
uppin' for more fair responses and votes my fellow battlecats!!!
much love powder. thanks for the honest vote cutty. ........once again, good try mad dog. keep on keeping on playboy. s.v.........c.s. |
aight but depend on how u say it uppin#1..........
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uppin# 1..........................................
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uppin' for honest votes!!!
..........supervillain the kingpin, c.s. |
uppin' for honest votes!!!
..........supervillain the kingpin, c.s. |
uppin' for honest votes!!!
..........supervillain the kingpin, c.s. |
Opponents beware of this fake supervillan/
Offences include being a bitch...and actin feminine/ GAY ..HOW DOES SUPERVILLAN N FEMININE RHYME How the hell can u call me out...and expect to win/ U'll get squashed like a coke can...made of alluminum/ OH DEAR GOD *PULLIN MY HAIR OUT* SUUUUCKS Ur rap aint a contest...bitches be pukin at them/ The only way u'll be sick...is if i give u food poisonin/ WTF? Ur best to no-show now...coz i dont label u a foe/ (foe = challenge) I guarentee u only spit best...when u choke/ JESUS U SUCK Now let me give u an honest vote...just to make things clear/ I've already won this battle...ur response'll just kiss my rear/ NO COMMENT VILLAIN mad dog...how can i blame you for your rage mutt?// you cute little thing...all bark and no bite, thats symptoms of a spayed pup,// HMMM..LOL U SHOULDA LEFT OUT THE CUTE LIL THING PART rabid beast? or just jizm on the lips of this average freak?// im a savage king, ruling everything on this atlas, please call the sire, his majesty...// NOT FEELIN IT the only way that you could be even considered as hotter,// is if i put you on a 4 foot leash...6 feet from your dish of water,// (in the summer) DONT LIKE IT i'll beat ya with a tail-pipe to a duelly, just to defeat you unusually,// its worth the jailtime and the ticket that i get for this animal cruelty...// LOL FUNNY dont feel brave, 'cuz you live up to your name and only chase pussies,// im not talkin' 'bout the nookie kind rookie, but r.b.'s famed wussies...// THIS IS WEAK beware of the hollow-tips engraved with your name, pointed at your face in a loaded weapon,// just keep your fingers crossed and pray that today, all dogs get to go to heaven!!!// GOOD CLOSE!!! THE FIRST LINE IN UR LAST BAR WAS WEAK,BUT THE CLOSING MADE UP FOR IT OK,UR ANIMAL CRUELTY LINE AND CLOSING TOOK IT VILLAN.....MAD DOG........UMMM,I DONT EVEN KNOW WHAT TO SAY ABOUT UR VERSE,U TALKIN ABOUT RETARDED STUFF IN THE WHOLE THING....DOUBT THERE IS HELP FOR PPL LIKE U |
Opponents beware of this fake supervillan/
Offences include being a bitch...and actin feminine/ How the hell can u call me out...and expect to win/ U'll get squashed like a coke can...made of alluminum/ Ur rap aint a contest...bitches be pukin at them/ The only way u'll be sick...is if i give u food poisonin/ Ur best to no-show now...coz i dont label u a foe/ (foe = challenge) I guarentee u only spit best...when u choke/ Now let me give u an honest vote...just to make things clear/ I've already won this battle...ur response'll just kiss my rear/ IT SHOULD HAVE SAID....... to all Oppenents u should know this man u best beware fake supervillain over there gets burned like electric chairs offences include bein a bitch and actin type feminen why the fuck you call me out u couldnt've expected to win WITH WHAT I WAS WORKIN WITH IT AT LEAST FLOWED On the other hand here was the other guy mad dog...how can i blame you for your rage mutt?// you cute little thing...all bark and no bite, thats symptoms of a spayed pup,// rabid beast? or just jizm on the lips of this average freak?// im a savage king, ruling everything on this atlas, please call the sire, his majesty...// Yo maddog i shall not blame for your a mutt in rage all bark no bite, symtoms of a pup that needs to be spayed Rabid beast ,nuthin cummin from the lips of this average freek im a savage king, rule everything on the atlas just call me your majesty ..........yall just need structural improvement and better word choice for flow and always preview, but now comes vote time and for this im gonna leave it alone i hope u2 the best of luck and keep striven |
thank you for your honesty battlecats........i'll do what i can to improve. one love (our culture).
s.v. |
I agree this was a pretty one sided battle but only cause SV came correct.
Opener- SV mad dog...how can i blame you for your rage mutt?// you cute little thing...all bark and no bite, thats symptoms of a spayed pup,// Punches- SV, the whole pup thing really hit hard, and was a nice personal and punch on its own Personal- again SV, almost the whole thing was a nice personal, Mad Dog you had one or two but they didn't hit hard. Flow- neither of you had good flow, but its a battle and its not really important Multi's- same as above Closer- personally I thought SV's previous line was tighter but I"ma still give it to him cause i wasn't feel'n the whole "kiss my rear" bit |
Mad Dog nice verse. villain i don't know what planet you on. that verse was ass. it was long and lacked punches. you need to step it up a couple of notches. Mad Dog you won b/c you had punches, lote of multiples and a smooth floe. nice battle kid.
vote=Mad Dog |
Super - Good spit man, good flow... niice personals.. and some hard hitten punches.
Best Line - dont feel brave, 'cuz you live up to your name and only chase pussies,// im not talkin' 'bout the nookie kind rookie, but r.b.'s famed wussies...// Worst Line - rabid beast? or just jizm on the lips of this average freak?// im a savage king, ruling everything on this atlas, please call the sire, his majesty...// Mad Dog - Alright spit man, you had some good flow going and some good punches now and then. Best Line - How the hell can u call me out...and expect to win/ U'll get squashed like a coke can...made of alluminum/ Worst Line - Ur best to no-show now...coz i dont label u a foe/ (foe = challenge) I guarentee u only spit best...when u choke/ OVERALL - Pretty weak battle, but i will have to give my vote to Super.. he had a better flow and harder punches.. and personals. Mad you had some good punches in there and some good flow.. but Super won it with his personals.. next time try and use some personals. VOTE - Super RETURN THE FAV http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121858 |
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