RAM Vs. Ares (peep this)
 

RULES:

10-15 lines no more no less
Just get it on homie I don't really like rules

OK, checking in. I guess this means I go first? Sounds good to me.

R.A.M? Hmm... Ok, let me try to figure this one out /
R.eady, A.im, M.asturbate like when your boy's jerking in your mouth? /
R.each A.round M.andatory like when you're paying him back? /
Or R.aw A.nd M.essing like when I got your girl in the sack? /
Did you get all that? I know you're easily confused /
putting "(peep this)" in the title...um, yeah that'll get this battle more views /
You're a dumb fuck, I can tell - I haven't even read a thing you've said /
you could stand on a chair, my rhymes would *still* go over your head /
Your first battle - lost! and your future looks no brighter /
Dude, step your rap game up... hire Baby as your ghost writer. Ha! /

Your turn.

You better come wit it or just accept your loss,
You're the example for who's next to step 2 da Bos,
I'm infectin your bars wit chronic hot spitdrome,
2 personalities both are hard like a split stone,
Your rhymes tickle my throat and choke me up like a fish bone,
I'm renamin you toilet cuz right now you gettin shitted on,
Tha RAMs official,
Ares ridicle spit sour pickles,
Wit a style sweeter than sugar cane my nizzle,
I'm grown,
You still hidin from da boogerman wit your sister,
You raps wouldn't be hot if they sat on da sun,
You'll never gain forever lame sorry 2 tell you,
Take it as a lesson and learn go get your nuts up,
Your rhymes is like a bad hairdo they need a touch up.

Aight let's get tha votes comin in folks keep it honest none of dat dick ridin shit.
Feel Me

http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...0986post1270986
^^^vote

R.A.M.,you di'nt vote in the poll in my battle.Go now and vote.You enetered an explamation,yet didn't vote in poll.

OK, this battle was so-so.flow was better by ARES.U went from a long line to a short line with 2 words.Ares also got more creative,because let's just face it,RAM,you were simple.So complexity also goes to ARES.Punches were really harder by Ares.He had nice wordplay and beautiful personals.Nice Job

Vote-Ares

RAM,don't forget to vote in poll in my battle

Bump for a few more votes.
bump for a few more votes.

R.A.M. - Alright man.. had a good flow going and some pretty decent punches.

Best Line - Take it as a lesson and learn go get your nuts up,
Your rhymes is like a bad hairdo they need a touch up.

Worst Line - You better come wit it or just accept your loss,
You're the example for who's next to step 2 da Bos,

Ares - Good spit man, loved your personals.. lol, you had a good flow going on too.. with some hard punches.

Best Line - R.A.M? Hmm... Ok, let me try to figure this one out /
R.eady, A.im, M.asturbate like when your boy's jerking in your mouth? /
R.each A.round M.andatory like when you're paying him back? /
Or R.aw A.nd M.essing like when I got your girl in the sack? / (LMAO)

Worst Line - Did you get all that? I know you're easily confused /
putting "(peep this)" in the title...um, yeah that'll get this battle more views / (olny weak punch)

OVERALL - Good battle boys, my vote goes to Ares for his better personals and harder punches.. R.A.M. you had some good flow but your punches wenrnt as hard and you had no personals.. so next time try to add some personals in there...

VOTE - Ares

RETURN THE FAV
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121858

Second bump for more votes. Of course I'll return the favor.

both wereof mediocre quality, those ares used the most imaginative use of punches. i reackon he used RAM's name to perfection, though it should be backed with a complex flow eg: ''R.A.M? Hmm... Ok, let me try to figure this one out /
R.eady, A.im, M.asturbate like when your boy's jerking in your mouth/'' the word you used to support the annagram of ram's name should be more of a punch.
though all in all it was decent.

RAm's verse was also not bad, but he made a typical 'newbie' mistake, most if not all his punches werent directed straight at are, and so he couldnt capitalise.

my vote: ares

this battle goes 2... ARES
for his brilliant lyricism and good flows but...
his blows didn't hit as hard and R.A.M. either
i don't wryte alot so here it is...
OVERALL RATING:
ARES: 7/10
R.A.M.: 5/10

aight keepin it honest don't stop votin.
Niggaz is gon hit yall polls back.

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Bump for the final vote...
Bump for the final vote

yo hit my battle up

n ill drop a vote on dis when u drop 1 on mine

link in da sig

Just looking for one more vote so I can be done with this battle.

yo uppin to close this one down.
don't sleep on da votes.
and none of dat vote on my battle and i'll vote on yours.
either vote or don't.

Sickest line...R.A.M? Hmm... Ok, let me try to figure this one out /
R.eady, A.im, M.asturbate like when your boy's jerking in your mouth? /
Ares ripped him all the way through just trashin his name
I feel like RAM had such a hard act to follow it was almost impossible for himm to come back hard enough for the win

Win: ARes