Disasterpeice420 vs A$e
 

here's how da rules gon be:
no d/r votes (i see u get dem alot in your battles)
no crew votes
no bitin
10-20 lines
no hate votes
AND NO UNEXPLAINED VOTES!!!!

i'm checkin innnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn. GOOD LUCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Checckity Checck Checck Mother-Fucker' ..!!

her rhymes won't "hurt" me cuz i have no "feelings" inside/
and she gon' say some bars talkin bout how my dick little, naw baby ya pussy is wide/
it's fear i bring when u hear A$e speak/
and this girl done "sold out" to more groups than usher confessions album did in his first week/ (figure it out)
and i done told her for a while/ she's fuckin wit da golden child/
and those half naked pics in her SIG man she's a girl gone wild/
i'm a "magician" and i don't even want dis "trick"/
puckerin' up her lips n da pic, if i kiss her, it would be like i kissed a thousand dicks/
i'm gettin at you wit punchlines, physcial and intellectual/
it's hittin u "both ways", jus like u bein a bisexual/ (look in her profile)
and she kno before dis battle started dat she wuz gonna lose/
even manachins got more ass than you/
and she's trying to get in a fight wit a$e?/
she's just swingin' when i'm dodging em til a right hook bustin' her face/
u couldn't fuck wit my rhymes if they were freestyled, written or bitten/
u should jus cricticize people on dis site like LatinKitten/
Like Martin Lawrence baby, "u besta gets da steppin'"
and u wanna see a thoro side of me i'll show a true "muderous method."


COME BACK!!!!!!!

Alright' .. lol!! *****I Aint Going Hard!!

Whats wrong with ya? your thoughts lack rationality,
You sayin im "sold out", you forgot your nationality?,
I know it hurts frantically searching your cd collection,
To the fine the word shovel, after you poured out your confession,
Talking high and mighty, your weapon is plagiarism,
Spouting a textbook, without permission and no wisdom,
Your in college? Fuck higher learning is expensive,
X amount of G's to learn to copy, that's strictly offensive,
Yeah, equivalent to dickriding? yet your falsely accused?,
Think for a minute before you write, you sound despicable confused,
What You brining in a year im bringing a measure,
let the beat ride and pull it all together,
Now Dont go runnin off and saying that i'm on your cock
Aint even sayin im hot, just simply stating that you're not.


*Fuck it im done .. ah ha... Pure shit

lol...haha....iight iight....dat wuz pretty good

BRING DA VOTES IN YA'LL!!!!!!!

Lmfao' I Wasnt Even Trying' ..!! - - - Haha' .. !! I Don't Even Feel Like Droppin Verses

DP420 - Good spit gal, had some hott punches in there.. with some bullet proof flow.

Best Line - Now Dont go runnin off and saying that i'm on your cock
Aint even sayin im hot, just simply stating that you're not. (niice)

Worst Line - What You brining in a year im bringing a measure,
let the beat ride and pull it all together, (hmmm...)

A$E - Good spit man, had some good punches in there.. was an alright flow and overall good spit.

Best Line - it's fear i bring when u hear A$e speak/
and this girl done "sold out" to more groups than usher confessions album did in his first week/ (figure it out)

Worst Line - Like Martin Lawrence baby, "u besta gets da steppin'"
and u wanna see a thoro side of me i'll show a true "muderous method." (didnt like the ending)

OVERALL - I gotta give this battle to DP420 becuz she had the better vocab and hard hitten punches, A$E your shit was hot but DP420 is just to good for you, step up on the flow a bit and add some multi's and get some harder punches and you will be sick man.

VOTE - DP420

RETURN THE FAV
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121858

Good Looking Out Killaz...!!!! - - -



Upiiiiiiiiiiiin For Votes

dp420 got this shit wit ease and he didnt come
hard he hasd punches,flow,structure and every
otha subject i forgo. Ase u need to come a lil bit
harder next time u drop a verse.

Vote:DP420

please drop a vote on this http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...314#post1271314

im not even votin on this but dp your last vote had me crackin up, lmfao

yo this was a good battle, but my vote goes to Disasterpeice..here y

DisaterPeice- you some alrite punches coo flow and some nice vocabulary.. you had some nice structure and even some pretty coo personals...you better flow all around then him and your lines were more easier to read.. all i suggest is to come wit more metas and multis..

A$e- nice verse too man.. you had alrite flow but lacked structure badly.... also some of your personals were lame and played out... some ok punches in there though n think you had some multis.. yo got potential bro i can definately see that.. but keep it up man and work on ur punches and personals and mayb a lil on vocab..

my vote= DisasterPeice420

thanx for da advice furoshis, let's get deez votes in ya'll!!!!!

Good Looking Out Ya'll!! **** .... LmfaO @ VanGo' .. What You Trying To Say**


Anyways Upppin 4 Votes

Breakdown for ase:

her rhymes won't "hurt" me cuz i have no "feelings" inside/
and she gon' say some bars talkin bout how my dick little, naw baby ya pussy is wide/

What? yo man u just admitted to having a lil dick, not a good thing..lol weak punch
it's fear i bring when u hear A$e speak/
and this girl done "sold out" to more groups than usher confessions album did in his first week/ (figure it out)

ok punch, nothin special

and i done told her for a while/ she's fuckin wit da golden child/
and those half naked pics in her SIG man she's a girl gone wild/

Man u just complimented your opponent, this jus a wasted line

i'm a "magician" and i don't even want dis "trick"/
puckerin' up her lips n da pic, if i kiss her, it would be like i kissed a thousand dicks/

pretty good punch, but kinda played, I heard that joke a million times

i'm gettin at you wit punchlines, physcial and intellectual/
it's hittin u "both ways", jus like u bein a bisexual/ (look in her profile)

nah weak punch

and she kno before dis battle started dat she wuz gonna lose/
even manachins got more ass than you/

Man it didn't rhyme

and she's trying to get in a fight wit a$e?/
she's just swingin' when i'm dodging em til a right hook bustin' her face/

Wack

u couldn't fuck wit my rhymes if they were freestyled, written or bitten/
u should jus cricticize people on dis site like LatinKitten/

What was that?

Like Martin Lawrence baby, "u besta gets da steppin'"
and u wanna see a thoro side of me i'll show a true "muderous method."

Didn't rhyme, man why u battling people way above your level

Breakdown for Dp:

Whats wrong with ya? your thoughts lack rationality,
You sayin im "sold out", you forgot your nationality?,

Not great, better than everything he had

I know it hurts frantically searching your cd collection,
To the fine the word shovel, after you poured out your confession,

decent punch

Talking high and mighty, your weapon is plagiarism,
Spouting a textbook, without permission and no wisdom,

good punch

Your in college? Fuck higher learning is expensive,
X amount of G's to learn to copy, that's strictly offensive,

Good punch

Yeah, equivalent to dickriding? yet your falsely accused?,
Think for a minute before you write, you sound despicable confused,

Good personal, an true

What You brining in a year im bringing a measure,
let the beat ride and pull it all together,

ok punch

Now Dont go runnin off and saying that i'm on your cock
Aint even sayin im hot, just simply stating that you're not.

good closer,
I don't even have to explain why dp won
Vote: dp

ok wack battle shit was lopsided like triple ns head


ase your verse first off was ass cheeks she coulda queefed an had better shit then that but ummm your opener was bad against yourself lmfao dont do that shti an exspect to win and your closer didnt rhyme shit wasnt very well worded anyways and the rest of your verse was hangin ass out like a bottomless diaper elevate on your punchlines RHYMIN PERSONALS AND TRY ACTUALLY USIN WORDPLAY FOR YOUR PUNCHS elevate brah

dp i didnt read much cause it was over after the first few lines but um the opener wasnt that great decent an closer was pretty nice i was fealin it good way to whipe ya hands off and the rest of your verse was off and on nice verse though overall no punchs where really sorry and some where pretty tight

vote dp

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!!! Uppppppppppin 4 Votes' Yall...!!!!!

Aight Aight Whats Up// Althought I Hate Dp// She Spit Fire//

Dp

Punches 8/10
Flowz 8/10
Vocab 7/10
Wordplay 7/10
Personals 8/10

Overall= 38


A$e

Punches 5/10
Flowz 7/10
Vocab 5/10
Wordplay 7/10
Personals 6/10

Overall=30

Vote=dp