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STriniBonafide vs Koopa Troopa
you challanged you drop first
house rules no clan votes so and so you know |
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Do sat....i got school and work.... |
You didn't tell me how much lines to drop...I'll drop 12
We'll both drop 12 lines...aight |
On the touch of moisture, the mic vibrates as I plunder/
I come and steal yo thunder like a caribbean pirate/ the fact that u 17 years old and still lost in mushroom kingdom/ forces me to stomp on ya head to make room for some mo wisdom/ Aight... u got a thinner chance of winning than Calista on SLIM FAST/ u waitin on fat lady's song to lose but like Beyonce she SINGS FAST/ even on paper this slaughter is fatal...I put yuh flag down to HALF MAST/ throw punches with everlast gloves but in this battle you'll N-EVERLAST/ Suffice to be sacrificed like the virgin u are...youth/ u 'die easy' like a polar opposite to Bruce/ (Bruce Willis-die hard) and even though.. u try hard... like Israel and Palestine at truce/ its bye bye Koopa...game over for you/ |
12 lines aight...yo turn to spit playa...don't take whole day
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aight just sa that ya posted aight ill post in a quick sec.....
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kid you came wit your best but ill simply just deflect it//
you regret it…found out the hard way im locally respected// you dieing hard like “Bruce” cuz your style is “WILL LESS”// even if ya spit "brail" these kids still couldn’t be "feelin" ya rhymes to the fullest// you couldn’t bring "shit" even if ya "hopped da border"// only to be sent back to ya "corner" by "court order"// What was ya thinking goin against "kingz" like me// i may be but a sigg maker but you still battle like a St8 weak femcee// So take my advice don’t fuck wit the members of BluePrint// You could never "Spark-Some-Flows" even if a gave ya "paper" and 2 "Flints"// |
o and house rules are 10-20 bars if ya didnt know
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return da favor.....
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uppppin this battle...............................
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Uppppppppppppppppppppin Dont Ghost this shit Post on this shit
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upppppppppin this battle............................
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koopa troopa got this cause he rhymed better both need towork on pnches there really no hard hittin punche..So i judged by who shit flowed better and made more sense so i gotta go wit koopa.
My vote:koopa troopa Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
please drop an honest vote on optimal VS raw talent in frontlines
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uppppppppint cmon cmon peeps gata vote.............
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uppppppppint...................................... .....................................
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Alright I'ma vote and then vote on my battle to close it out.
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=122892 return the favour Opener- Koopa Flow- Bonafide Punches- Koopa Personals- Bonafide Multi's- Nothin, here still a good battle though Complexity- Tie, neither were to complex but both equally similar Wordplay- Average-tie, Koopa had the edge here Finisher- Koopa the flint line was a nice punch Overall- Koopa do the math Vote-Koopa |
aight uppin this battle...........................
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Nice honest vote...Acid-Ink..
Can't say da same 4 dat punk who voted b4 |
upppppppppppppin this shit........................
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breakdown:
strinibonafide: On the touch of moisture, the mic vibrates as I plunder/ I come and steal yo thunder like a caribbean pirate/ ^^i think u needed to switch the 2nd line bad punch 3/10 the fact that u 17 years old and still lost in mushroom kingdom/ forces me to stomp on ya head to make room for some mo wisdom/ ^^good personal OK punch 7/10 Aight... u got a thinner chance of winning than Calista on SLIM FAST/ u waitin on fat lady's song to lose but like Beyonce she SINGS FAST/ ^^first line good 2nd line average 6/10 even on paper this slaughter is fatal...I put yuh flag down to HALF MAST/ throw punches with everlast gloves but in this battle you'll N-EVERLAST/ ^^good punch 6/10 Suffice to be sacrificed like the virgin u are...youth/ u 'die easy' like a polar opposite to Bruce/ (Bruce Willis-die hard) ^^good punch and meta 7/10 and even though.. u try hard... like Israel and Palestine at truce/ its bye bye Koopa...game over for you/ ^^average punch bad closer 3/10 overall: 32/60 (53%) koopa troppa: kid you came wit your best but ill simply just deflect it// you regret it…found out the hard way im locally respected// ^^hott opener because of multies and wordplay 8/10 you dieing hard like “Bruce” cuz your style is “WILL LESS”// even if ya spit "brail" these kids still couldn’t be "feelin" ya rhymes to the fullest// ^^good punch 6/10 you couldn’t bring "shit" even if ya "hopped da border"// only to be sent back to ya "corner" by "court order"// ^^not good 4/10 What was ya thinking goin against "kingz" like me// i may be but a sigg maker but you still battle like a St8 weak femcee// ^^stretched line 5/10 So take my advice don’t fuck wit the members of BluePrint// You could never "Spark-Some-Flows" even if a gave ya "paper" and 2 "Flints"// ^^good closer nice meta 7/10 overall: 30/50 (60%) vote: koopa troopa...i think his punches wee harder than strini's and he had a better flow to it...strini almost had this if he would have used stronger punches ~!1!~ |
Koopa takes this one all the way, this wil be a lock out. Nice verse, I like the closer
So take my advice don’t fuck wit the members of BluePrint// You could never "Spark-Some-Flows" even if a gave ya "paper" and 2 "Flints"// Nonafide you need to come harder you had some alright punches but that was aobut it. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Says I need 50 to vote, this one should be number 50 sorry for free post'n
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Ight this was a tight battle
STrini-OK flow......nice punches as well.Creativiy was good and so was complexity Best Line-the fact that u 17 years old and still lost in mushroom kingdom/ forces me to stomp on ya head to make room for some mo wisdom/ Worst Line-Suffice to be sacrificed like the virgin u are...youth/ u 'die easy' like a polar opposite to Bruce/ Koopa Troopa-another tight verse.Flow was nice,punches were good,complexity and creativity was also good. Best Line-So take my advice don’t fuck wit the members of BluePrint// You could never "Spark-Some-Flows" even if a gave ya "paper" and 2 "Flints"// Worst Line-you couldn’t bring "shit" even if ya "hopped da border"// only to be sent back to ya "corner" by "court order"// Overall-Nice battle.But Koopa,that line bout bruce willis you had probably was made cause you bitted off Trini's verse.And Strini seemed a tad more creativite Vote-STriniBonaFide \/\/\/\/Drop a vote in my battle http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123302 |
^^^^dickrider.........fuck even there names the same upppin this shit
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STriniBonafide winner!
tHAT SHIT WAS hot nice punch like your don't tell me what to do style nice flow the shit was off the hook koopa troopa the only thing i liked was the name Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Yo Koopa...I don't dride aight dread
I living Trinidad and I eh belong to no crew so just remember dat...I don't dride! |
aight just sayin it looked like a dride vote or a hate vote....... uppin this shit
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upppin thin this shit.............................
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trinidad wins this battle. koopa you are WACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
^^herb ass nigga thats y yo shit dont count.......
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uppin this shit^^fuck herb ass niggas to dont know real freestyles for shit
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upppin this battle we need more vote real vote none of thease noobs votes
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uppin this shit.............................................. ......
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SB Had A Nice Flow Punches Where Iight But Can Improve
Divinte Had An Equal Good Flow But Slightly better Punches you dieing hard like “Bruce” cuz your style is “WILL LESS Vote-Divinte |
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Divinitie I liked ya opening and closer plus ya punches appealed to me. But accorrding to the poll u ain't battlin
Strinabonifide I liked ya punches but ya flow was a little fucked Vote-Divinite Return da favor-In ma sig |
aigth im goint o have to give this to divine.
devine: you used alot of strectched lines..but your strechedlines were still coo...i liked the brail line and the opener was ok..you still got alot of elevating to do.......all in all5/10 strick: you need to work on alot of things.just work on your structure and meta4s first than afteer you get thjose down then work on you personals and multies then after that use good vocab aight...all in all3/10 vote=divine |
my bad im hella stupid i voted for the wronmg person....koop fix this shit aight
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