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One-Man-Band vs Gambino
Aight heres how it goes..
no line limit, but not too long 5 votes wins 3-0 is knockout min posts for voting is 20 votes need explination DQ within 3 days if u dont spit ill spit first |
Yo..
Gam, man, thats a pretty impressive number that you boastin/ almost 500 hundred posts but we all know u get by by freespostin/ Everyday I keep wonderin more and more/ about how u a middle weight when ya membership time is so small/ You have so many posts and i have barely any at all/ but is it just me or did we both join in march 2K4?/* The times you do rap you do crap thats highly hypocritical/ You acccuse others bout talkin too gangsta, showerin with diss an ridicule/ but wait just a minute,-you call them pitiful when in actuality you did-it-too?/** My vision of you, is a kid with an attitude... a spoilt mamas boy that probly paid to be-in rappin school/ while thinkin you gangsta, you come home before 8 and textcee, so ya mom dont get mad-at-you/** always talk about guns in ya rhymes, but Ya clicks inexperienced that crhyme syndicate is young, fallin behind, the first family of crime/*** Get with the times... I'll level your rhymes.../ even the band vs whole crew, Your shit wouldnt even come close to mine/ *read his posts no., read mine, you'll get it... **in some previous battles he always talks bout others trying to be gangsta when he does himself... talking about all the 4.4.s and shit u know ***Thats a diss to his crew... read his sig when he posts... but by this i mean no disrespect... its tight crew and i actually want to join if i can at some stage... but yeah peace... hit me up with your verse, gam |
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hey yo dog i'm about to merc you........so now i guess its time to// and yeah you the one man band........but puffy forgot to sign you// hey pick the slack up......i'm elevated.....your rhymes trina catch up// cause one of your lines is five words and the next doesnt match up// see he's in a band.......and he's white........but he tries to act black// so he reminds me of linkin' park with that white guy that tries to rap// I dont even have to rap anymore........cause the first three bars did it// plus we only look at his verse cause he decerated with stars when he spit it// *****^^^ this bitch wants to be in C.S.........so he's always lookin' over my shoulder// so his initiation is to hold my piss cup.........when my P.O. comes over// thats all i got to say so holla........ |
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Good battle both of ya's...its really tough both of u were good both had equally good punches, personals. The structure in both cats was tight as fuck too. Man its reall y hard but ima have to vote 4 1 man band coz he threw in a good multy and i didnt really see that in Gambinos verse
Gambino: 7.9/10 1 Man band: 7.91/10 V/1 Man Band Sorry but it WAS real close to me |
omg shit sorry man... is it two verses???? should have specified the rules better... ... ... ... .... u wanna drop another verse????? if not dw bout it... just ignore my other one.. could influence noob voters though..
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nope second verde doesnt count.............
i dont feel like doin an extra battle for no reason.......... so for everyone that votes his second verse doesnt count............ |
aight its deleted anyway....................................
bring the votes peace |
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121779
^^ vote Okay,I didn't find either verses hot.Flow was ok by both of you.But the thing I hated about ur verse,ONe-Man-Band,is that your first 6 lines seemed like you were telling a story about Gambino and not a rap battle.I gotta give this to Gambino.He actually had me feeling like I was reading a rap,and not a story. Vote-Gambino(drop a vote in my battle) |
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Both Verses had Nice flows. n rhymes but my opnion Gambino made it short and sweet...
V/Gambino |
Better Explained.. One man Band started off good.. but than later talking bout his crew n diss'em.. but at the same time wanting to join'em..? Good Punchlines n flow.. but that in my opinion juss killed it.
Gambino's Victory Lines-see he's in a band.......and he's white........but he tries to act black// so he reminds me of linkin' park with that white guy that tries to rap// And -this bitch wants to be in C.S.........so he's always lookin' over my shoulder// so his initiation is to hold my piss cup.........when my P.O. comes over// |
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A'ight, yo, this was a decent battle...
Band...you surprised me. I think you have real potential dawg...your punches was a'ight...but your structure...dawg...ya gotta rework that fo sho...that threw your flow off...overall, nice punches, werk on structure. 5/10 Gambino...dawg, you had me laughin'...every bar hit pretty hard...nice shit dawg...flow was perfect...we use a similar structure me and you...nice verse dawg. 8/10 Vote- Gambino No hate...this bein' slept on hit it up plz...thx... http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=122351 |
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Opener- Close but I'd say Gambino cause the posts isn't much of a punch Flow- Gambino Punches- Gambio, one man band- ya gotta get more personal, you went on about his post count way way to long. Personals- same as above Multi's- Gambino had some nice ones here as well, particularily in the middle Complexity- one-man-band looked like you put more thought into it so I'ma give this to you Mettas- Gambino Finisher- Gambino Overall-Look /\ /\ /\ thats the overall picture, it would have been good had 1mb cam correct with this punches but , BUT'S dont' count so Gambino takes it Vote- Gambino HEY VOTE ON MINE !!!! |
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bummer... lol... looks like i gotta revamp my style..
one more vote?? |
Man u both had good flows. Equally good punches. Band your shit came with too many long lines and the shit got sloppy. It just came down to the flow and i thought Gam took that so he gets my vote.
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