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adamtomo 05-07-04 08:31 AM

battle
 
ok tha rulez

10-20linez
no d/r
usual shit
blind spit within 30 mins

check in

CounTREE Jay 05-07-04 08:35 AM

Check ininininininininininininininininininininininininin ininininininininininininininininininininini


~CJ~

CounTREE Jay 05-07-04 08:54 AM

First time I seen you, Now you disapear like a ghost,/
My style butter, you just another nigga that's toast./
I always try my best to expose y'all niggaz as lame,/
Would be polite , but I can't pronounce your name./
Satirically kill you lyrically, have you hooked to an i.v.,/
And no one know who you be, like you got no i.d./
New to da game, and you already shootin' for the stars?/
Son do you really think you ready for life behind bars,/
I think you need to stop, and further refine your skills,/
When I lyrically murder cats, they still defined as kills./

Not really that good, but I'm tired, and I don't give a fuck right now. Hope your as whack as I precieve you to be right now.

~CJ~

adamtomo 05-07-04 09:02 AM

Droppin
 
FUCK THA "BRANCH",WHATS THAT?....
SOUNDS LIKE A FUKIN GAY RANCH IN THA "COUNTREE"/
I HATE UR NAME...IT SUGGESTS U LIKE TO DRESS UP IN "PINK"/
N TAKE ROUGH CATS OUT FOR A "DRINK"/
BITCH U GONA HAVE TO "SINK"...DEEP IN SOMEONES ASS/
IF U WNA GET A VOTE..BUT BITCH DNT FUKIN CHOKE../
...DROP SUM SHIT,TRY N MAKE IT RHYME BITCH/
ITS NOT GONA TAKE LONG TO WASTE U WIT MY LINE/
IM NOT LIKE U I DNT LIKE TO "TAKE LONG"(dick)N LOVE IT LONG TIME!/

FUCK THIS BITCH IMA CLOSE THIS BATTLE/
B 4 THIS FAGGOT CRYS N THROWS HIS RATTLE/
THIS SHITS THA "FIRE",N THIS CLOWNS IN "AURE"/
MAYBE AFTERWARDS HELL PM ME... "U WANA B MY WHORE?"

CounTREE Jay 05-09-04 11:07 PM

uppin
 
damn kid, i'll let the votes do the talkin, UPPIN^^^^^^^^^^^

-SwizZ- 05-09-04 11:13 PM

Punches-Countree Hit All Punches And Connected So I Give That To Him Adam Tomo Had None At All

Personal-None Had Any So Cant Vote oN That

Flow-Countree Gets This Because He Had Syllables All Together-Adam's Flow Was Alright But Not All Syllables Were TIght

My Vote Goes To Countree....

Yo Countree Or Adam Plz hIt My Battles In MY Sig Since I Hit Yours.....

accomplishment 05-09-04 11:20 PM

yo check it

ad.. whatever....

yo ok verse but whats with the caps and the shitty structure work ont hat shit a little bit... and defently work on the complexity and stop with the played punches... but just keep elevatin...

countree...

nice verse kinda basic you came harder at me last time we battled... but you still beat this guy with ease... kinda played the butter toast thing but other than that hot shit b.... yo hit up my battles

vote counTREE JAy

LyricalMethod 05-10-04 08:19 AM

CounTREE Jay you won this battle because your lyrics were more together and easier to understand. your punches hit harder period. adam step it up rookie.

t-storm 05-10-04 08:30 AM

i cnt vote..
 
i cnt vote but for me adamtomo took this...he really dissed this guy...more personally...countree just spat played linez like...buttering toast...thats fukin weak,i liked adamtomos style,different...made me laugh

CounTREE Jay 05-10-04 08:43 AM

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
The fuck you talkin' about herb? Did you read the same bars I just did?

t-storm 05-10-04 10:04 AM

yep............................................... ..........

D-Bate 05-10-04 10:09 AM

haha, Adam TOmo's sucked shit, Im giving this one to CounTREE, you deserve this one man, and t-storm, you are fucked...

t-storm 05-10-04 10:12 AM

fuck u >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
 
if im so fucked fukin battle me bitch.................merk ur ass>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

D-Bate 05-10-04 10:19 AM

Aiight, you fuckin punk, Im down wit that, you are settin it up

CounTREE Jay 05-10-04 01:22 PM

Uppin' 4 Votes ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

CounTREE Jay 05-10-04 07:25 PM

Uppin'.............4..................some........ ................votes...........................pl ease......................

Krairo 05-11-04 04:32 PM

Wordplay / Rhymes - Countree won easily he has better wordplay or more punches and rhymes

BTW adamtomo by the look of what u wrote it looks like u where yelling or just pissed and couldn't think straight.

CounTREE Jay 05-12-04 09:46 AM

Uppin' 4 Votes ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

E Looch 05-12-04 12:49 PM

lol wow check it


countreejay your opener was decent good wordplay in it punch was ok and your closer was nice i sen what you was gettin across nice closer and the rest of your verse was pretty consitent with nice punchs only thing is try to drop the coma thing slows up the flow kinda this verse was kinda basic stuff but still nice drop

adamoto um wtf?? half of that shti didnt even rhyme kid get ya rhyme scheme right and then go with punchs cause if it dont rhyme it dont flow an then it basically dotn get felt just elevate brah

vote countreejay


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