you_aint_ready\\vs//insane16
 

aight its set up....u drop first...rules are:
no hatin
no crew votes
no feeding
blind spit
10-15 lines
due after check in
u spit first

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And here is my verse


I aint even gotta talk bout this cat he does a better job himself
your already 0-3 anotha loss aint good fa ya health
Dont take it personal man but you callin yaself insane
Insane aint a good thing that means somethings wrong wit ya brain
You cant mean your lyrics cuz..ya flow is dumb and plain
Are you ready for anotha loss juss let me know
I needa wear a caution sign cuz of my flow
Its dangerous it needs to be kept under containment
Im up on that real shit your juss an insane bitch
Your a feeder hungry for rhymes you juss like a cannible
Dumb bitch you should change ya name from insane..juss to hannible
You gotta be dumb to think you can beat me
You think your insane that shit aint hard to see
Look at ya motha the fruit doesn't fall from from the tree

You've lost the game sorry let it go and try again...
I juss wanna say thank you for givin me anotha win

let me start this off with you aint ready/
nah bitch i aint from jamacian queens but my skills is heavy/
apparently ur avatar likes to masturbate/
remindin u of the days u sat at home watchin dudes ejaculate/
i shouldnt even spit on u its a waste of saliva/
but u spit is dry so u need it a lil more then i do/
most guys come to ur house to fill u/(cum in his mouth)
but im takin a lil trip to queens wit my 9 to kill you/
u couldnt drown out my skills if i was 1000 leagues under the sea/
through ur days nights and dreams bitch u always gunna hear me/

uppin for votes............................................. .................................................. .

uppin............................................. .................................................. .

better punchez personalz and Multiez by YAR

Insane: i shouldnt even spit on u its a waste of saliva/(didnt rhyme with anything)
both of yall keep uppin ya skillz though

good battle
Vote: Y_A_R

aight check it........You aint ready ripped him.......Both
had some good stuff...The structure was good for both
also the complexity...INsane work on similies vocab
and also the metas.....Keel elevatin aight
v.You_aint_Ready

i am gonna give this to insane because his was more easy to foloow for me, also his words were more effective were as yar used insane a lot whihc was kidna annoying, well dun overall guys

insane man you killed him wid dat lines your avatar masturbates lol!!!!!!!!!!!!! Dis is your win because of your punches and had a better rithem, punches and better personals. had his lines better flowed consistantly, so obviously it was a win because he kinda rymed better which murked you with a better verse that was slightly better than yours, his punches seemed to hit more thats what i thought, sorry man no hard feelings

YAR won with harder punches and more personals

insane had weaker punches and not everything rhymed.

VOTE=you_ain't_ready

iight im makin a comeback lets get it goin uppin............................................. .........

uppin c'mon wher ethe voters at................................................ ................................

I Think You_aint_ready Had it by a hair..but insane got some personALS like that one with his avatar..lol..neither used many metas or wordplay so my vote gets weighted on personals...Insane got my vote...

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insane16 had this battle youaintready talked about insanes name throughout the whole verse, insane had better punches

uppin lets finish it................................................ ....................................

Yo Imma Drop A Vote Later Today Aight..............

Flow: insane
Structure: Ready
Punches: insane
rhymes: ready

look at dats its a tie....But imma give it 2 insane...yo "you not ready" u need 2 stop sayin his name so much in ya flow..jus say wut pops up in ya head and u can be sick...And insane u need 2 elevate ya rhymes u said 'saliva' and 'I Do' dat dont rhyme but u both need 2 elevate good luck on ya otha battlez ~1~