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Infamous J \V/ (S) Da Vinci
10 lines min and max
No Bite'n shit from other sites, theres been alot of that kind of shit going on No Feed'n don't worry about it, your drop'n first but I don't feed, No crew votes, if your even in a crew somehow I doubt that No bull shit I'm take'n my pups for a walk I'll be back in an hour so have dropped by then. |
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yo da vinci?, i read history books and i got news i read that you got a 10 year old lover, is that true? you don't need no telescope to understand my wordz all i need to invent is rhymes to kill these stupid herbs i know you so much all i need is 10 bars to finish you off ya names da vinci, that's all an opponent needs to know that you soft i'm da new edison cauze when you read my lines it generates light and this is da 21th century where you might die wit da cauze of a fight i'm finish you i don't need to wryte no more yeah yeah, go away no thanx fa suckin my dick, whore. :shoot: VOTERZ HOLLA BACK!!! |
vote, man
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da vinci had to much of me
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Ya do have a 10 year lover, your sister says hi.
Alright check it, PREVIOUS VERSE IS WHAT HAPPENS WHEN YOU READ “RAP FOR DUMMIES” Shit I’ve seen better punches and metta’s from the telletubies My verse gets ya girl so wet, she thinks she lives in an aquariam This cat claim he seen beef but chew’s on herbs like a vegetarian, And judging by ya text record you’ve been chockin on dem herbs Only way you’ll get a vote if its “Infamous J vs Infamous J” that’s my word Now this line here will have ya do’n a handstand outta this place So you can draw eyes and a nose above your asshole just to save face I got a PHd for hit keys, so you call me the locksmith You perceive you beat’n me? (Didn’t hear my glock-click?) |
Man,this is one-sided.Da vinci all the way.Punches,creaivity,complexity,and flow all goes to Da vinci.Infamous,all that shit was way to simple.
i'm finish you i don't need to wryte no more yeah yeah, go away no thanx fa suckin my dick, whore. ^^^what the hell is that!!!That's not even sumtin I would call a punch or diss.You need work dog.Fo real Vote-Da vinci |
yo shady when i have time i'ma challenge you and it ain't gon be like da one i put up
(trust me)!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
cause its gonna be bitten or prewritten (thats why he's so confident) look at his drop how else could he talk that shit?
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Upn .
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up'n this shit, vote on the p-p-p-p-please d-d-d-d-did i s-st-s-stu-stu-studamudamuka
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on that 10 year old joke.. it's true, dawg cauze i DO read history bookz |
we need votes, i be stressin everytime i don't see one |
get this kid off the floor
da vinci murdad this kid he said be eazy nigga that opener was sic knice wordplay that alone ate his verse up nad it stayed consitint with good punchs all the way threw had good vocab and personals as well just lacked multies but they aint shit and infamous verse was kinda off not many punchs where felt or anything you made a bunch of attempts but i didnt see where they connected just work on stronger and creative punchs vote/da vinci |
Ghost Is Dick Ridin, Son Fuck U
U Gettin It Now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
dick ridin him? i dotn even know son he just killed you kid get it over it stay on your level
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and i live up to my vatar
hhhhhhhhhhhhhaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
da vinci be as wack as elliott, missy
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Who the fuck do you THINK you are kid?? I don't even need dick ride'n votes, NEWS FLASH!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU DO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! thats the only way your gonna get one. You gotta learn to take a loss, know when your over your head, theres people on this site who can rip me cause they been do'n it longer, and that goes the same for you, Ya gotta learn to sink before you can swim.
No dick ride'n but man I will take this one, accept it thats just the way it goes, why do you think when I put the challenge out I said no newb's I'm not a vet, but I know I'm not a newb. |
Up'n this shit to the top, vote on ours drop a link I'll vote on yours, honest ones only.
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da vinci got this heat had better punches flow and vocab overall he pretty much murder dude.infam u need to work on punches and ur rhymin scheme u als need 2 quit tryin to sway votes you'll be alright if u lose 1 juss rematc instead of spammin the forum.
My vte: da vinci please drop an honest vote on this http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123052 |
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Infamous J's Verse
yo da vinci?, i read history books and i got news i read that you got a 10 year old lover, is that true? Whack Personal No Punch 2\10 you don't need no telescope to understand my wordz all i need to invent is rhymes to kill these stupid herbs Its An Alright Line 4\10 i know you so much all i need is 10 bars to finish you off ya names da vinci, that's all an opponent needs to know that you soft 4\10 Again Ok i'm da new edison cauze when you read my lines it generates light and this is da 21th century where you might die wit da cauze of a fight Not Good 1\10 i'm finish you i don't need to wryte no more yeah yeah, go away no thanx fa suckin my dick, whore Whack Man 0\10 Overall Whack But Good Flowed Verse Da Vinci's Verse PREVIOUS VERSE IS WHAT HAPPENS WHEN YOU READ “RAP FOR DUMMIES” Shit I’ve seen better punches and metta’s from the telletubies Funny Line 6\10 My verse gets ya girl so wet, she thinks she lives in an aquariam This cat claim he seen beef but chew’s on herbs like a vegetarian, Nice Syllable Nice Flow Beautiful 7\10 And judging by ya text record you’ve been chockin on dem herbs Only way you’ll get a vote if its “Infamous J vs Infamous J” that’s my word Ok Line 5\10 Now this line here will have ya do’n a handstand outta this place So you can draw eyes and a nose above your asshole just to save face Whack Line but Flowed Good 5\10 I got a PHd for hit keys, so you call me the locksmith You perceive you beat’n me? (Didn’t hear my glock-click?) Worst Line From You 2\10 OVerall THis IS A Onesided Battle V\Da Vinci |
da vinci takes this easily........he murdered J with nice punches metas and creativity.....J u need to elevate a lil bit.....read some of the elevated battles to help u get better.....your punches were really weak.....thats why u lost
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J it looked like u did a little too much studying man. Shit wasnt personal it was about a dude whose been dead hundreds of years, and the shit that wasnt almost didnt make any sense. Structure was alright but ya lines got too long toward the end. Da vinci i liked ya shit man. Hit hard and flow was tight. It wasnt the best but J needs to practice a little more. Da vinci gets my vote
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