TONY SELF VS MarvolousJ1009<A REMATCH>VOTE..
 

U Know The Drill 30 Mins After Check In
15-25 Lines
No Crew
Ahhh Wtf You Read Bitchslapped Lets Do This.....................

damm i aint even see dis shit...aight im checkin in

check in..............................................

tony we all know he's a groupie,dunn u think i wont squeeze da uzzi??-
and send u da "hell-boy" but dogg i dont mean da go see da "movie"-

u not a dangerous spitta,u not gon make it so find other ways da get richer-
wanna know y? cuzz ya "flows-homo" like a bunch of "gays in a river"-

im real sick with it tony datz somthin ya ass couldn't be tho-
wouldn't have a "chip on ya shoulder" if u dove in a "bag of dorito's"-

how u think gon merk dis vet,i already earned respect-
and dogg im so "sick" i gota write my punches on a "nurses dress"-
dont rap on rb no more if u "bo(a)r(e)d" dunny just "surf da net"-
cuzz i was in studio's workin on songs when u first learned da text-

OD? i know i shouldn't on dis clown,aint no crooks is in ya town-
tony couldn't have a "buzz on da street" if he took his "intercom & put it on da ground"-

dis lame is a fag,i dont "shitted" on u so much my "anus" could brag-
i aint got "time" 4 beef so ima put "1:45" on u like its "1:37" and "8 minutes" pass-


aight umm if u dont get nun of my lines fukk it i posted my shits bold cuzz niggaz couldn't see my punches

There he is.. on his knees screamin im the damn devil
These mics i burn easy leave ya at my third eye level

Simply stating if you were fire son u still couldn t match this
You get fucked so much, homies gave you the name profalactic

Oh rap is your favorite genre... rap lips around my dick
Your crap is garbage pay homage to the king of this shit

Now where ya goin man ... damn...yo i seen him scurry
your flow is tired tucked tail i turned ya bitch in a hurry

Now dont get pissed cuz i just flipped it all up in your ass
like teachers talkin to kids "your dismissed from this class"

While i jump up in the saddle and lasso the bully
Listen as i close this..... last ten.. lines is gully

I roll ya quiker picture em bent back ,feet over head
i thought i told ya i shall fold ya ,like hospital beds

You aint no soldier son,u need to take your ass behind frontlines
I seen kangaroos that provided better punches n punchlines

F-irstly i stick thee
U-tter words, i shut em quikly
C-ant touch me
K-ill the noise of all the fuckin bitch queens

U- cant end this mistery,u never gettin rid of me, flow sickly
As if im retarded... pizza comercials featurin, "special"delivery

umm okay vote ppl....if u dont vote on dis battle ur an ass hole

aight check it

Marvolous:
wtf are you doing battlin these noobs, anywys you had harder punches no personals and aight flow

Tony:
now wtf were you doin challengin a vet...dint you learn from supreme..but anyways one word...FAKE ur shit didnt have any personals like marvolous...so he gets the vote because he had harder punches

v/Marvolous

okay...uppin 4 more votes...........................

yo M this nigga come up to me sayin ur Pmed me wtf

with the way you run your fuckin mouth why dont you battle me son....................

Self...shut the f.ck up.....Your talking stupid.....you have an incredible amount of herbel essence...now that's the end of the freeposting......

lol i pmed lyrical?? wow i dont even know dunn he just gave dis battle a honest vote...andeway uppin 4 more votes

upin again umm i see like 10 names at da bottom of dis fukkin page yo whut da fukk is ya niggaz doin just lookin at battles...fukkin vote dis shit should be closed 2nite

this battle wasn't hard 2 figure out
even if tony's verse wasn't THAT good it still beat marvolous
which tells you how wack he is, marv's verse was wack out this world...
no flow, no blows, no struture, no blows, no nothin except wordz...
overall rating:
marv:0/10
tonyself: 4/10

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe

aight umm dis shit gotta stop 2day 4 real infamous j dogg get ya post on 2day man cuzz gon be da last day u on dis site 4 real...on yo tony if u except dis vote ya crazee

^^ check in to our battle marv

hate vote oh well return da favor

Uppin............................................. ...........

marvolous got this 1...tony had a couple of streched
lines and hehad got i deas but construted them wrong.
MAr u had decent punchsand had good flow.

My Vote: marvolous

Rofl Do U Fuckin People Flow It When U Check It Or Just Fuckin Read........

Mav Might of Had Bold Words. but i wasn't in to it to much, Each erson has diffrent style My Opnion Tony Came on top off of dis one

Tony's Line-There he is.. on his knees screamin im the damn devil
These mics i burn easy leave ya at my third eye level

yo can we get some real votes please none of this im cool wit your mans crew dickridah shit just fuckin be honest

lmaoooo uppin 4 more votes yo and pleez explain ya shit

upppin again......................................

Uppinnnnn Vote Ppl Stop Fukkin Sleepin If U Want Ya Battle Da Close U Gotta Vote On Other Niggaz Shit

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raise it up yall honest votes ...............................

aww man uppipn 4 more votes can we get dis shit closed 2day ppl

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Breakdown..........

open: Marvelous
close: Marvelous
personals:Marvelous
metas: Tony
punches:Tie
multis:Tony

win:Marvelous

I think marvelous had more flow and punches. i just wasnt feelin ur shit tony but you koo

Keep Elevating

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uppin 4 more votes...im tired of uppin my own shit all da fukkin wack battles get closed firs t

uppin this biatchhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh............................ ...

lol
if Marv wins this battle Im reporting the whole thing in for improper voting..

anyway, I will have to go with Marv in this battle
although bolding words is gay, he had better punches
Tony you need to elevate some more
Marv, dont bold your words next time
both of you need to shorten yall lines a bit
and try to get more personals and more creative punches
v/Marv for overall better verse

I am in aggreeance with the above Marv took it quite easily good battle :thumbup: