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-Zone Out- 05-08-04 01:10 AM

A-Town
 
My accuracy is accountable to abashing cats
Abstruse acts, A-Bomb actions leave niggas abstract
Acrimonious to the artery with the most advanced articles
Assassinate assemblages with assembled deadly particles
Activate acariasia,accredit me into the alliance
Infect the young like acne, then lead them into defiance
Ambidextrous fire arms standing amiss admidst
Alongside altars,live and bleed, that proves life is a bitch
Assholes aren't acceptable,Im greeted with acclaim at festivals
Im accused of breaking down the best crews to the smallest decimal
Acting like your muscle actin cant be subdused to actinogen
Acrid by the acre, acrocentric bars,heard the acoustic again
Adamant adolescence adapting to acts of God
Automatic, acrobatic,acme ack-ack to the odd
Agile agent, set apart the Allegheny Mountains
Allegro allegories, revived in aliment fountains

-Zone Out- 05-08-04 03:40 AM

some replies would be great!
now give them to me
thank you!

young beezy 05-09-04 01:26 AM

i like it, ya vocab was on point, ya structure was on point but u need to get a topic an stay on it

young beezy 05-09-04 01:28 AM

yeah
 
i like it, ya vocab was on point, ya structure was on point but u need to get a topic an stay on it
check out my post here we go again

-Zone Out- 05-09-04 01:57 PM

^idiot
the topic was me constanly using the letter "A"
Thats why its called A-Town!

I. Mind 05-09-04 08:11 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by young beezy
i like it, ya vocab was on point, ya structure was on point but u need to get a topic an stay on it

agree^^^^^^^6

SpokenBluntly 05-09-04 08:35 PM

was this spit about atl or you.....well as far as creativity goes thumbs up cuz the A's all the way through was good..but if u were to record this it wouldn't be like a "hit single" industry wise...but the vocab was overly well meaning ppl have to go back and re-read to much..u wanna make ppl think..but not get headaces....Uno*

SB

DFrost 05-10-04 03:04 PM

damn
 
damn, that shit was fuckin hot, ain't seen shit like that since school with the crazy english teachers comin up wit "fun" projects but u pulled that off. gotta give ya props

-Zone Out- 05-11-04 06:42 PM

uppin for some more replies

BostonLyricist 05-11-04 06:58 PM

good shit son
 
yo good shit the vocab was crazy deep,nice topic and frame but it came in and out of flow,your rythm was off jus ah little but other than that good shit B keep it movin-1-

-Zone Out- 05-11-04 07:06 PM

yes
but, if you was to hear me say it
it would have a decent flow to it
I write all my raps to a beat
and this goes with a beat
but thanks for the feedback!

nastyroo 05-11-04 07:53 PM

yo man that shit was sick but it sounded like the Alphabetical Slaughter that Papoose spits on DJ Kay Slays newest mic tape..........just a thought......

-Zone Out- 05-11-04 09:03 PM

I made this before that mixtape came out

nastyroo 05-12-04 11:34 AM

o aight then

maz 05-12-04 03:18 PM

kinda shit man, u just using smart words or trying to at least and making thwese medioke lines

Zone Out 11-19-05 02:15 AM

^wtf
shut yo noob ass up, bitch


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