Deleon Vs. Beatmasta k
 

yo 10-12 lines

you going first after you drop i'll drop mine in 20 mins

no crew
hate
or d/r votes
alright do your thing dogg

Oh and check in so i know you showing.............

when you gonna drop kid???????????????????????????

i know ure hollin fuck me well its fuck u too
and that instigating nigger am goin touch u too
its just a matter of time before i put dope in ma 9
fuckin with the wrong nigga u musta lost ya mind
fuck it hop in the car lets go find these niggaz
shoot up shots for there head try to blind these niggaz
dont let me catch u on the innerstate, dinners late
am gonna see how many bullets u really take
fuckin with a young thug nigga who will savage with this
and ama dump slugz nigaa so be pakin ure shit
plus am naggin this shit cause ama fool
if i catch u on the corner introduce u to ma 2
a paid ma dues just to let ya niggaz know
messin with the wrong click when ure fuckin with tha 4 for sure.


u dont even know how bad i will bust you up
please come up off that track so i can fuck you up
you be all bout mouthin off you got me fuckin red hot
might aswell take that vest off cause im shootin head shots
front them hoes u let ure nuts hang
but ma fuckin 4.4 will make ure fuckin guts hang
u wanna hurricane long if ya play with me wrong
and dont give a fuck bout how long ure baby mommas been gone
its on mutha fucka i aint slippin
stay strollin through ure hood with the 9 with the clippin
the niggaz who be bunkin with ya they gona get it too
if i catch they niggaz first their gonna get this shit for u thats true
plus im sicker than you,
and got more bitches than you,
and i can by a murder charge since ma digits are true
ask the masta k he aint scared of shit
ama duck tape ure momma and shoot off ure daddys dick (muthafuka)

say dogg what the fuck! i said 10-12 lines and you drop like 32 lines ???

De Leon quit battling newbs man...if u say u good battle niggaz who r good..try battling L.I., ME ONLY IF U SPIT 1ST, DP, BATTLE SOME1 NOT A NEWB WHO SPITS SHIT....DAMN....ur not elevating when staying in the comfort zone by battling newbs..

yo hit my battle up with killa poizen, i will reapy the favour!

Quick i accepted your thread but you said so whatever

and Beat you gonna have to write a new verse or pick one of those and
chop it down to 12 lines

that should say you said no ..........................

i got u sized up so what u gonna do
cause sonner or later ama bump heads wit u
and when that time comes ama pound out ure crew
crystal bottle ya face mutha fucka sounds like mase
so watch how u spit cause its time for the new guy
did u know that ure brother was thinkin of going bi
so sun lets go try beat my rhymes
it was me doin crimes back in 1989
stay strollin through ure hood with the 9 with the clippin
the niggaz who be bunkin with ya they gona get it too
if i catch they niggaz first their gonna get this shit for u thats true
and i can by a murder charge since ma digits are so fuckin new
ask the masta k he aint scared of shit
ama duck tape ure momma and shoot off ure daddys dick (muthafuka)

alright thats better dogg

i'll drop as soon as i can

You gettin' -ripped in text-, askin who's next? I'll leave you layin' at rest/
AIM nerd, kid's so ugly, he lost his virginity -to cyber sex/
You betta stay away, im like a sexually transmited disease/
I be known like AIDS, but kreep like HIV/
My blade will make blood ricochette in different ways when I cut you/
Im takin french-but only words im learning is FUCK YOU!
why you talkin bout shit you gonna do- when you aint gonna do none//
so quit talkin shit and hop back on your daddy's dick son//
You new to this shit-bet you'd like to beat me//
but you better quit now before you need a "night light" to sleep easy//

lets get some votes up in here......................

dont sleep on this shit yall drop your votes in this

yo quick i dont know what you talkin about- I got my first win on this site Against
Juss_Blaze and ive battle king solo and just tag team battle against mic wrecker
and Countree Jay and ive gon against other katz

alright now lets get some votes....uppin...............

where are the fucken votes DAMN!!

My vote goes to deleon cuz his personals were hilarious

this was a decent battle...beatmasta i think you would do better in audio than text your verse was more of a spoken piece u had to like say it out loud to make it sound better so i think in audio that could have worked but in text that lacked in alot of areas...u had no punches and u had alot of filler you talked more about yourself than your opponent and your structure was a lil off flow was ok but if u wanna be a text head u need to elevate alot...deleon quick is right from what i have seen from you...you got potential to beat some other cats on this board...this verse was sick...good punches nice metaphor in the AIDS...HIV lin...good flow and decent structure...closer wasnt too hott but stilla nice piece

vote: deleon he stayed consistent throughout his verse and it was all around better in all areas

~!1!~

YO DELEON HAD ME skerred at first with the start but u came back on em in the end
im note gonna do the blah blah format and blah blah weak shit that everyone else does when voting seems like everyone here has weak everything i think the both of ya could elevate more but did a nice job puttin ur shit down deleon being a lil more experienced is why im votin for em .....keep strivin yall

alright preciate yall droppin ya votes on this.......

LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL// YO BEAT ONCE AGAIN MERKED HOMIE//

DELEON

PUNCHES

10/10 You gettin' -ripped in text-, askin who's next? I'll leave you layin' at rest/
AIM nerd, kid's so ugly, he lost his virginity -to cyber sex/ LMAO DATS SO FUNNY//

FLOWZ 10/10
=20

BEAT

PUNCHES 4/10
FLOWZ 6/10

U KNOW WHO WON DA BATTLE// YO BEAT STAY LOW DAWG// U NEED TO WORK ON YO PUNCHES FLOWZ AND PERSONALS//

Uppin For Some Honest Votes................

come on yall lets get this over with.......

come on now lets close this out so i can battle someone else.........

Beatmasta k-Boring verse.flow was bad,stretched lines.
Best line-if i catch they niggaz first their gonna get this shit for u thats true
and i can by a murder charge since ma digits are so fuckin new
Worst line-so sun lets go try beat my rhymes
it was me doin crimes back in 1989

Deloen-Nice verse.Nice punches and flowed better than beatmasta.
Best line-You gettin' -ripped in text-, askin who's next? I'll leave you layin' at rest/
AIM nerd, kid's so ugly, he lost his virginity -to cyber sex/
Worst line-You new to this shit-bet you'd like to beat me//
but you better quit now before you need a "night light" to sleep easy//

Vote-Deleon
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121779
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Yo KS you didnt poll your vote dogg................

ok check it

vote deleon easy

that cyber sex line cealed the deal but you need to quit stretchin your lines like that if you do use mulites or somethin or its gonna kill the strength of your punch and beat masta just go to tutorials and see how to elevate or stick to makin beats brah

Haha...DeLeon...you have this easy...

Beat...I think you would do better in topical or somethin if you elevated...your verse was horrible dawg. No as horrible as the last one I saw...but damn, your punches were played, you had no personals...you had a half decent flow, but some lines were stretched.

2/10

DeLeon...haha...you had some funny punches dawg...cyber sex line funny as fuck...but like E-Looch said, ya have to stop stretching ya lines dawg...you have this battle easy. Overall nice verse...

8/10

Vote- DeLeon

No hate...hit this up honestly it's bein slept on hard...thx...

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=122351