battle
 

anything goes.............................................. ....................

what the fuck is this thread man?.. you dont just make up a thread called battle.. and that anything goes!

is this battle between you and me burty?... or what... :confused:

iight I gues it is.. you gun have any rules Burty?.. and is anyone goin first?..

RULES
15-20 Linez
No Feedin
No hate/Crew/D/r Votes

is thats kew with you Berty?.. and who is starting?..

iight my rules... checkin in.. I will spit first...

my verse
 

i'll shrink this pussycat straight into a kitten/
then skin'im with prescision and turn him into a pair of mittens/
you're shitting me if you call yourself a killer/
the only thing you kill is that wack verse which is cursed as been filler/
i dont give a fuck if you're chocolate or vanilla/
i just feel sorry you're descended from a humped backed gorilla/
they should have shaved your mum when they snatched her from the jungle/
but they couldnt work out wether she was a vegetable or mongrel/
ive got enough rhymes in my head to fill a novel/
while you couldnt fill a one inch pit if you're hand was a shovel/
you couldnt even hit a cows cunt with one too/
if i were you,id spend my efforts rescuing your mum from the zoo/
but i apologise to your mother/tell her i love her/
but tell her im pissed off i was ninety eight in the queue to be above her/
im registered lethal weapon like mel and danny glover/
you're so dumb you suck you're bedsheets and still blow your cover/
you suck so much your face is constantly inverted/
if my rhymes were homoerotic you'de be wantonly converted/
you're perverted/twisted in the mind thinking you're dope/
you've no hope,i'll wait for your suicide note/

sorry about that
 

sorry mate,my fault,i fucked up doing the titles.i dont know if the mods can alter it or not................

You call this thread battle and say that anything goes...
Only cuz your a cheap bitch cant win without low blows...
Underated your goin to stay your never gun be a vet...
Regret battling me my rymes are gun make you upset...
Gang beat you til' you die.. go back to bitch slapped...
Or get capped.. This is RB your never goin to adapt...
Iam one of the greatest so this is gun be a walk in the park...
No one can stop me.. its like tryin to shoot me in the dark...
This guy cant spell he was tryin to have his name be birdy...
Only bitches you pimp are twelve man and you are thirty...
DAMN MAN your goin to die only thing left is your silhouette...
Igot this guy cryin upset cuz I smokin burty like a cigarette...
Everyone is goin to vote for me and thats a guarantee...
Burry you in my backyard like a seed and grow a herb tree...
U R DONE!! comin close to the end I am almost finished...
Readin my verse turned his scared you are diminished...
This guy is a skid he's like his rymes they are both dirty...
You better start to run or else 'Your Goin To Die Burty'...

Tried a new style .. so ah well..

IIGHT .... good battle.. lets get some votes happenin...

good shit mate,nicely done.....votes plz peeps........................

can i vote in this 1? cos all ya other battles need 100 votes gkillaz

lol, no they dont.. this one only needs 25 I am pretty sure.. so you can vote man

aight thx lol....

burty: aight i thought u were pretty good you flowed pretty well and your punches were good

best line:i dont give a fuck if you're chocolate or vanilla/
i just feel sorry you're descended from a humped backed gorilla/

haha i thought that was pretty funny.

worst line:you couldnt even hit a cows cunt with one too/
if i were you,id spend my efforts rescuing your mum from the zoo/

not bad but i wasnt feelin it that much.

sll in all i thought u were pretty good and you showed some skill.

8/10

gkillaz: now!! this was tight i have never seen anythin like that i thought that was ill, i liked the structure and i thought your punches were really good.

best line: Gang beat you til' you die.. go back to bitch slapped...
Or get capped.. This is RB your never goin to adapt...

lol u hit him hard there

worst line: cant see any.

i have to give u 10/10

i have seen a couple of gkillaz battles and they are amazin,

vote: gkillaz

thx man, lets keep the honest explained votes comin...

any more for any more?
 

more votes needed peeps if you could.....................................

people dont like to vote very much... lol , upppin222

UPPIN for more votes... hit this up and I will return the favour...

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1-0 votes needed!!! uppin'

aight,burty,not a bad verse,but none of ur stuff really related to anythin,get some personals in there kid.

gkillaz,u were better,
Everyone is goin to vote for me and thats a guarantee/
Burry you in my backyard like a seed and grow a herb tree/

lmao,that was a funny line,u had better punchlines,and i like how u did that
yourgointodieburty thing,that was pretty creative.

my vote:gkillaz

Burty-Nice flow.Punches were okay as well.bUT you did have a couple of stretched lines

Best line-im registered lethal weapon like mel and danny glover/
you're so dumb you suck you're bedsheets and still blow your cover/
Worst line-you couldnt even hit a cows cunt with one too/
if i were you,id spend my efforts rescuing your mum from the zoo/

GKillaz-as uaual,good flow/structure.Punches were excellent.In my opinion,your one of the best in tha site.Have you tried out the LryicAL championship tournament?And it was pretty cool how ur the 1st letters all spelled U goin to die burty.

best line-DAMN MAN your goin to die only thing left is your silhouette...
Igot this guy cryin upset cuz I smokin burty like a cigarette...
worst line-u didn't really have anything bad in ur verse

Vote-GKillaz

thx man.. keep the votes comin peeps... what another KO for me?.. lol .. I think E LOOCH HERE I COME!!!

gkill got thishe came harder in punches and flow and i liked tht lil shit were u bolded that was tight. burty u streched to many lines and that put ur punches @ a poor quality so work on that and you'll be tight.

my vote:burty

since i took time can u both dop an honest vote on this
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123052

he votes for me.. but puts he voted for Burty?.. LMAO.. anyways.. one more vote needed for the KO... so holla at me! I will return the fav!!

Both Verses Awesome i gotta Admit. Burty great Ver good Punch Lines and great Structure but Killa came on top

Gkilla Awesome flow but u killed him wit that Leetering down the screen matching every verse

Best Lines-You call this thread battle and say that anything goes...
Only cuz your a cheap bitch cant win without low blows...
Underated your goin to stay your never gun be a vet...
Regret battling me my rymes are gun make you upset...
Gang beat you til' you die.. go back to bitch slapped...
Or get capped.. This is RB your never goin to adapt...
Iam one of the greatest so this is gun be a walk in the park...
No one can stop me.. its like tryin to shoot me in the dark...
This guy cant spell he was tryin to have his name be birdy...
Only bitches you pimp are twelve man and you are thirty...
DAMN MAN your goin to die only thing left is your silhouette...
Igot this guy cryin upset cuz I smokin burty like a cigarette...
Everyone is goin to vote for me and thats a guarantee...
Burry you in my backyard like a seed and grow a herb tree...
U R DONE!! comin close to the end I am almost finished...
Readin my verse turned his scared you are diminished...
This guy is a skid he's like his rymes they are both dirty...
You better start to run or else 'Your Goin To Die Burty'...

The whole thing was sick

v/Gkillaz