GKillaz05 vs raw talent
 

aight here r the rules

10 lines
u spit first
no hate
no d/r
no crew votes

checked in....

due today

goodluck

iight man.. checkin in.. you asked for this!! MUAHAHAHAHA... lol, spit will be up in like 10 mins

yo i cant vote on this
but Raw drop an honest vote on this

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123016

a gonna checki in to are battle dawg or u gonn bitch out
http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...448#post1274448

I wanted a free win so I went an battled raw talent...
How do you think your gun beat a soulja that is gallant...
This guy should copy his whole verse and press delete...
Take a seat and watch me give him his second defeat...
What does RAW mean?.. let me give you my definition...
'R'etards 'A'nd 'W'annabes beatin you gun be a tradition...
Im a Magician they way I pull these punches outta my sleeve...
You might not belive it but everyone wants you to leave...
My rymes got your blown of your feet like you in outter space...
Ima Erase you of this site and Ja Rule is gun take your place...
:laugh:(now dont that sucks?.. lol):laugh:

spit man, good luck.. no feedin!!



**Gallant:
adjective: unflinching in battle or action

alright checked in......................................

Thinkin you made it in the game...well bitch im your downfall...
1st 2 lines of my shit and u guaranteed NO curtain call...
True emcees dont underestimate and bring they game at all times...
But you proved yourself to be wack by spittin them herb lines...
Tellin me no feeding, im straight wit that, watch u be degrated...
Theres no need to bite ya shit cause your rhymes are G rated...
Nice sig dogg, behind the times, update your shit...
Stop reppin DP, beggin her for votes, ridin her clit...
I beat this joke, made a name for myself, took down a top emcee...
Nevermind, your a joke, just have a good record for battlin newbies...

I am G Rated like I am the the GREATEST! .. lol, but anywayz.. good spit, didnt take it hard on ya.. lets see what the votes do..

well, until this, I thought all hope was lost for this site. Im not saying it was dope battle at ALL...but it was deffinatly better than the other shits...




So sad that a battle like this is considered great...

LMAO ... well.. thx for that comment... I didint evne try hard there tho.. but why didnt you even vote?..

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iight peeps.. lets get this battle poppin.. we need some votes!!

Yo,this was a hot battle.When I read GKillaz's verse(which was not as good as his other's)I was like "Damn,he won this",but then Raw came with this nice verse then I was like DAMN!


GKillaz-Nice flow/structure as usaul.Punches were not as hard as ur other verses.But still good.The only problem with it,was that it was simple.
Best line-This guy should copy his whole verse and press delete...
Take a seat and watch me give him his second defeat...
Worst Line-Im a Magician they way I pull these punches outta my sleeve...
You might not belive it but everyone wants you to leave...
^^see,this was what I was talking about when I said you were simple

Raw-another hot verse.Flow was good,but better by GKillaz.Punches were nice as well.
Best Line-Nice sig dogg, behind the times, update your shit...
Stop reppin DP, beggin her for votes, ridin her clit...
Worst line-none

Overall-Hard choice but Raw got this.But I must say.But GKillaz,I could see this was not ur best.I don't know if you underestimated Raw,....but RAW came hard.

Vote-RAW

iight.. honest vote.. keep em comin' peepz.. UPPIN for VOTES

break doooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooown

gkilla um that opener was pretty stupid maybe reword it and use it against him but um it was a self glorifcation line an it aint work to well an ya closer wasnt fealin it either again not well worded and ja rule aint sorry just to let you know wo no points there either but the rest of your verse was pretty good the middle stayed pretty consistent wit good punchs and personals had a good flow to it to nice drop overall

raw talent or who ever you are under that alias your opener was nice decent punchs and all and the closer was decent tried a personal didnt fully connect to me but the rest of your verse was average a few personals and punchs didnt really see any that stood out to me just average punchs that stayed consistent ya verse just lacked creativitie and strong punchs not bad though

vote gkillaz

ok i think g under estimated raw but i belive he still won
gkillaz05
punches 8/10
flow 8/10
structure 8/10
overall*8*
bestline:
This guy should copy his whole verse and press delete...
Take a seat and watch me give him his second defeat...
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raw
punches/7/10
flow 8/10
strcutuer 8/10
overall *7.5*
bestline:-Nice sig dogg, behind the times, update your shit...
Stop reppin DP, beggin her for votes, ridin her clit...
my vote gkillaz

aight honest vote rite here

opener-g even tho dat shit was weak..raw u should made ya shit more harder..pause
structure- a tie
punchlines-g
creativity-g
multi's-nun
personal's-g...da anme flip was hott
enjoyed-g...he got dis shit he went harder and he took all catagories...raw ya shit wasn't wack u just need a few more battles tthen you'll get da hang of dis battlin shit

my vote-g
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=122964
^^^^link 2 my battle rite can y'all pleez return da honest vote...GON

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=122892 return the favour

Opener- Tie you both had some nice openers
Flow- Another close call but Raw
Punches- I'ma go with Raw here as well but it was pretty close, you both threw alot and they all stuck but I think his hit harder
Personals- Close call but Killaz with breaking down the RAW
Complexity- Kept it simple but pretty good this time
Mettas- RAW takes this one with the some nice lines in the mid of his verse
Finisher- Raw cause it was more concise
Overall- Raw takes this one, very close battle expect it to go 4-4
Vote- Raw

iight another good HONEST VOTE! ... keep em comin.. no shit un-explained ones plz!!

Both Verses Good.. Raw talent, Can spit first time i seen him, but he had good Punchlines and Structure, good flow

Killas verse was DOpe as well also good structure, FLow n Puinchlines.. weak opening but the rest cover's it

It's a Hard choice.. but i'ma ahve to go with Gkilla... His shit juss standed out more

V/Gkilla

raw talent takes this.....he came with some force......his punches landed very well.....g killaz u had a few good lines but u need to work on wording your bars to make them more effective.......and u both should try to get some better personals in your verses.....

v/raw