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Real Thorough vs Merk.Inc

10-20 lines
No feeding*
No biting
No freeposting
No hating
Drop within the hour.

Ayo man you gone drop or what cuz, dont let this fade.

Yo... check it..
How the hell u suppose to feed doin a blind spit?/ (he said no feedin)
U could be 'Thoroughly bred' and still couldnt be 'my bitch'/ (his name is Real Thorough)
Welcome to Merk incorporated and ur the first victim/
Ur rhymes couldnt be 'sick' if u actually 'licked em'/
Dogg yo rap up there look like some pre written shit/
But on the other hand the rap looks a lil pre bitten. bitch/
Haha you really thought i was a n00b and this was an ez battle/
but im bout to bust ya bladder, and penalize u wit a paddle/
I dun see how u made it into lyrical destruction/
when my flow got u under abduction, but im still under construction/
like broken bones ill leave u dead wit a concussion/
dis wasnt a battle, it was merely a poetry discussion/
the way u rap, i thought u was actually 'enchanting'/
The only way u could 'top' me is wit rap 'enhancements'/
Ur style is outplayed, and ur punches cant 'connect'/
put ur rhymes in front of a mirror, and they still wouldnt 'reflect'/

ight.. there ya go

LOL, omg, that was funny, niggig noob or not, I'wn give a fuck you lucky I aint throw stones atcha ass, (I'l laughin B) Lets get some votes yall

WOW! SOMEONE NEEDS TO PICK THIS DUDE UP QUICK

MERK.INC
Dogg yo rap up there look like some pre written shit/
But on the other hand the rap looks a lil pre bitten. bitch/
-NICE PUNCH

Ur style is outplayed, and ur punches cant 'connect'/
put ur rhymes in front of a mirror, and they still wouldnt 'reflect'/
-HOT LINE NIGGA U ON FIRE

REAL
Like 'Failing Martial Artists'...No way this Foo-Passes!!(Fool...Foo as in Kung Fu)/
Cuz I got Heat That 'Seperates The Boys From The Gurls' Like Elementary 'School-Dances'!!!..*(ha)//
-THEY HAVE DANCES????????

Real Slit-ya-neck N take the 'Title Out Ya Sig' Like Fuckin 'Conterfit Cigarettes'!!//
Like Massive Flinestone Fans, I’ll Crash ya Walls Till you Got Nuttin but 'Rubble-To-See/
-HE HAS A SIG???

IIGHT I THINK MERK,MERKED THIS DUDE HE JUST RIPPED HIM FROM THE BEGINING TO THE END HIS FLOW AND PUNCHES WERE BETTER SO MERK.INC
GETS MY VOTE

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Uppin for more votes.. favor will be returned** ^^

Omg uppin for more honest votes.. vote nikka favor will be returned

Uppin fo more votes ^^ honest ones

Ight uppin for vots ^^ dont sleep on this hot battle :shoot: :cussing:

damn kid you did it again (Merk inc.) real thorought it was cool but then punches were just put in there and they didn't fit. Merk inc i likeed the whole damn thing and ain't gonna do a best line.
Merk inc. 8/10
Real thorought 7/10
real close

Uppin for honest votes dogg... ^^ favor will be returned

Its Like Doctors After A Bad case of Amnesia...Leave Merk needing New-Practice/
Merk trying to aproaches with Swrewd-Tactics/
Like 'Failing Martial Artists'...No way this Foo-Passes!!(Fool...Foo as in Kung Fu)/
Cuz I got Heat That 'Seperates The Boys From The Gurls' Like Elementary 'School-Dances'!!!..*(ha)//
After this battle ima be like 'Tramps at the Dump'...Ima Stick-to-recks/
Your like Bad water polo Games, You dont get nuttin wit ya Flow In-The-Net/
Real Slit-ya-neck N take the 'Title Out Ya Sig' Like Fuckin 'Conterfit Cigarettes'!!//
Like Massive Flinestone Fans, I’ll Crash ya Walls Till you Got Nuttin but 'Rubble-To-See/
Like 'Rasicm in Classes'...i hope its not 'Trouble,-You-Seek!!..(HA...Think)/
Real Leave this fuck-in-defeat, not knowin nuthin-bout-heat/
Last time i noticed W-C-W...They were shut down by W-W-E!!!!(OMG)**//
Real put more hate to U.S.A(You Essa) Than Saddam Housain after Bombing-In-Iraq/
Every punch you droppin-isa-wack/
Take ya seat and vomit-ina-bag, ill leave ya Body-ina-cast/
Diss take a torch to The champ, this like Pakistani Prayers!! Cuz im leavin 'Omin-On-the-Mat'!!(Amen)..//
^^^ok opener, terrible closer bad structure, ok punches
real thourough overaall *7* you need to eleavte more and work on the structure
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How the hell u suppose to feed doin a blind spit?/ (he said no feedin)
U could be 'Thoroughly bred' and still couldnt be 'my bitch'/ (his name is Real Thorough)
Welcome to Merk incorporated and ur the first victim/
Ur rhymes couldnt be 'sick' if u actually 'licked em'/
Dogg yo rap up there look like some pre written shit/
But on the other hand the rap looks a lil pre bitten. bitch/
Haha you really thought i was a n00b and this was an ez battle/
but im bout to bust ya bladder, and penalize u wit a paddle/
I dun see how u made it into lyrical destruction/
when my flow got u under abduction, but im still under construction/
like broken bones ill leave u dead wit a concussion/
dis wasnt a battle, it was merely a poetry discussion/
the way u rap, i thought u was actually 'enchanting'/
The only way u could 'top' me is wit rap 'enhancements'/
Ur style is outplayed, and ur punches cant 'connect'/
put ur rhymes in front of a mirror, and they still wouldnt 'reflect'/
^^ nice opener ok closer, good punches great flow ok sytrcuture
keep elevatin though aight?nice job i was feelin merks verse more
so my vote / merk inc.

Thx for the honest vote.. uppin for more ^^

okay ummm merk u voted on my battle u said i aint have no punchlines i could see u dont know know whut wun is

opener-real...
structure-a tie
punchlines-real
wordplay-nun
multi's-nun
personals-merk..
enjoyed-real...first of all real words ryhme betta and he had real punchlines..merk u had aight personals but datz it

my vote-real

Obviously we need better explained votes.. dont sleep people..

Uppin for more votes.. cmon people.. dont sleep on this.. favor will be returned

the breakdown...........

open: Real
close: Merk
personals: Real
metas: Merk
punches: Merk
multis: Tie

win: Merk

Im giving this to merk... real thorough i liked your shit but you werent punching at all merk was throwing punches at you and when i read your spit you were just freestylin this is a battle your supposed to get on the other person, so thats why im giving this to Merk Inc.

Keep Elevatin!!!

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http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=111506

Merk-nice verse.OK punhces anf flow
Best line-Ur style is outplayed, and ur punches cant 'connect'/
put ur rhymes in front of a mirror, and they still wouldnt 'reflect'/
Worst line-How the hell u suppose to feed doin a blind spit?/ (he said no feedin)
U could be 'Thoroughly bred' and still couldnt be 'my bitch'/ (his name is Real Thorough)

Real thorough-played out shit.Flow was bad,....but ur punches were weak.
Best line-Real Slit-ya-neck N take the 'Title Out Ya Sig' Like Fuckin 'Conterfit Cigarettes'!!//
Like Massive Flinestone Fans, I’ll Crash ya Walls Till you Got Nuttin but 'Rubble-To-See/
wORST LINE-Real put more hate to U.S.A(You Essa) Than Saddam Housain after Bombing-In-Iraq/
Every punch you droppin-isa-wack

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http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123302
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