_MuRdErouS_MiC VS XxToXiCXxVeRbZ
 

10 to 20 LINES
NO D/R VOTES
NO UNEXPLAIN VOTES
NO FEEDING EACH OTHA VERSE
NO CREW VOTES
1 HR AFTA CHECK IN

U SPIT 1ST HOMIE

Yo U Agreed u Spit First In BS....

Yo THis My CHeckout

Juss Do This One TIme Then Next Time We Battle I Spit 1st

Aight Aight Aight I'll Go First

O My B Check Check

Ok I be WAITIN !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

DOG I HAD MY VERSE ALREADY TYPED UP// I HAD TO GET SOME CREDITS TO START A BATTLE AGAINST N-SIGHT

ANYWAYS HERE IT IS//

I have the skills to give you the chills/ you can't stand what I'm sayin'/ I'll have you praying for a better day/ your broken down from the shit I spray/
When i'm done you'll drop a tear/ I fill your eyes with fear, nothin' u can do, I'm done, your dead/ I'll have them set the coffin open so I can see your decapitated head/


This fucker will die instantly/ Take a look inside your heart, follow it and leave, that way you're released from all the grief/
You wanna stay here and lose, it's your choice, choose...
If your gonna stay, you should prepare to face the shit i say/ Your my prey, I'ma kill You/

This is an uncrowned champion your goin' against/ My flow is heavy and defensive, it'll leave you fucked up and depressive/
Your forehead, I see cold perspiration/ I sense a tad of desperation/ you have no idea what to do/
You a choke? That's what i thought, your mind I broke, a thousand pieces/ Jesus! someone help this dude, he has all kinds of diseases!
With this I end my prophecy, next time, don't bother me! / See what you got yourself into? my hands are flamable, watch out, next time I'll leave you in a pile of ashes... no doubt

Derz And Into//body// End

nice spit lets see what dude brings...pm me when he drops and i'll vote

Aight I'll Pm Ya//

You Would'nt Be Able To Stop Me If Ya Rhymes Were A StopSign.|
Or Neither Would You Be Able To Put Holes Thru Me If You Had A Punch-Line.||(git it punchers leave holes....punchline think bout it)
Upset That He Messed With The Wrong Person And Touched The Wrong Nerve.|
Getting His Body Ripped Open With His Corpses Rotting Lets Just Sit And Observe.||
Only Time ToXiC-VerBz Can Beat Me Is Prolly When I Aint Got A Key-board.|
Time To Look At His Stats He Lost Once After THis Two Losses Goin On His Re-Cord.||
Man,Why You Wanna Battle You Shouldve Stopped In Da Beggining.|
Every Bar I Spit I Leave Him *spinning* I AInt Even Started Yet And ALready Im *Winning.||
Ready Or Not Toxic Cuz Im Here To Knock-Out Thats What Im About.|
Kid Let Me Win 5-0 So You Can Say Ya Work Is Sold-Out.
Excuse Me Dawg Do You Wanna Be Excused.|
Dawg Next Time If We Battle Just Refused.||
Because Of Me There Gonna Be A New Meaning To The Word Owned.|
I'll Rip You Apart Then Shake Until You Stopped Like Gettin Post-poned.||
Thinking YOu Still Gotta Chance Why DOnt You Think A-gain.|(pronounced A Gain)
Cuz After This Battle There Gonna Be A New Meaning To Head With No Brain.|You Cant Beat Be If You Do Then Its A Glitch
Hell let Me Just Tell You That You Got Merked Bitch


Uppin Fa VOTES

Ooooooooooooooo Aight Aight Dat Was Hot Dropped

Uppin Fa Votes Guyz

Thnx Fo FEEDBACK TOXIC

i think murderous dropped the hardest he had decnt structre he had good punches his flow was str8.XXX u was tigth ur punches were good ur flow was str8 itsjussed his punches hit a lil harder som my vote goes to murderous mic

My vote:murderous mic

Apreeciate Vote Yo Forgot To Poll Vote That LOL

UPP!N FOR VOTES STYLL

Some One PlzZ Vote Dont Sleep On This YO......

Uppin On THis Battle Dont Sleep On It...YO

Vote oN Battle Plz I Promise To Return Every1s Favor Who Votes...

Come On I Will Return FAVA VOTE ITS EASY HONEST VOTES AND EXPLAINED THOU

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=122892 return the favour

Opener- Murderous Mic
Flow- Murerous
Punches- Toxic
Personals- I couldn't really find any from both of yall, nothing to metion anyways
Complexity- Toxic, cuase Murderous didn't look like he tried to put alot of thought in
Mettas- Toxic but again kinda weak
Closer- Muderous,
Overall- One good opener and Closer isn't normally enought and this is no exception.
Vote- Toxic

This is gonna be a close battle

1-1 Styll Uppin For Votes !!!!!! WILL RETUN THE FAVA

Uppin Vote Guyz Thats Why There's POLLS Anyways I Return Da FAVA

Then return it and vote on mine I posted the link, HOLLA

Plz Freakin Vote On This I Vote On All Yallz Who Eva Votes Honest Votes Thou..

Styll Uppin I WILL RETURN THE FAVO(R)S

This battle was wack but murderous mic edge it because his verse was an acronym.
His structure was better, but both verses had stretched lines and toxic-verbs' verse
did'nt make sense.Murderous Mic you got potential just keep elevating dude.

Vote- Murderous Mic

Breakdown........

open: Toxic
close: Toxic
personals: Toxic
metas: Toxic
punches: Toxic
multis: Toxic

win: Toxic

U all can pretty much see how this battle weighed . Toxic has more punches and better flow plus i sortta liked the structure. Mic ur spit was nice but i just wasnt feeling the bold letters and it wasnt all that good in punches.

RETURN THE FAVOR YALL HERES THE LINK

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=110959

Aight. This Was A Str8 Battle.... Nuttin Special But It Was Coo.. I Was Feel Toxic Verse More Tho.. He Had A More Gutta Flow On This One.. I Aint See No Punchlines That Really Made Me Think Outta Either Verses Tho... So U Both Need To Work On That...

Thnx Fa Honest Votes....Styll Uppin Will Return Da Fava

damn this was a sick battle.toxic merked this cat tho wit his
Your forehead, I see cold perspiration/ I sense a tad of desperation/ you have no idea what to do/
You a choke? That's what i thought, your mind I broke, a thousand pieces/ Jesus! someone help this dude, he has all kinds of diseases!
line ^^ real sick. toxic,you really dont need to work on much

murderous,i like the way you wrote you got merked bitch with each beginning letter.witty.but you need to work on your punches.

Yo toxic go it off more but murderous dat shit wass hott the first bar was streched

Break down
CLose SHIT

_MuRdErOuS_ Mic

Flow 8/10
Rhymes 7/10
Structure 6/10
Punches 7/10
28/40

XxToXiCXxVeRbZ
Flow 8/10
Rhymes 8/10
Structure 7/10
Punches 8/10
31/40

Great Battle GUYZ

MuRdErouS_MiC HERE HIS RHMES WERE ILL AS FUCK KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK SUN URE RHYMES ARE QUALITY SUN

You Would'nt Be Able To Stop Me If Ya Rhymes Were A StopSign.|
Or Neither Would You Be Able To Put Holes Thru Me If You Had A Punch-Line.||(git it punchers leave holes....punchline think bout it)
Nice Opener i like the punchline Ryhme

Upset That He Messed With The Wrong Person And Touched The Wrong Nerve.|
Getting His Body Ripped Open With His Corpses Rotting Lets Just Sit And Observe.||
Nice punch not that personal though but ok

Only Time ToXiC-VerBz Can Beat Me Is Prolly When I Aint Got A Key-board.|
Time To Look At His Stats He Lost Once After THis Two Losses Goin On His Re-Cord.||
Nice shit i like the keyboard shit

Man,Why You Wanna Battle You Shouldve Stopped In Da Beggining.|
Every Bar I Spit I Leave Him *spinning* I AInt Even Started Yet And ALready Im *Winning.||
Nice but kinda big headed

Ready Or Not Toxic Cuz Im Here To Knock-Out Thats What Im About.|
Kid Let Me Win 5-0 So You Can Say Ya Work Is Sold-Out.
Ok punch nothin special though

Excuse Me Dawg Do You Wanna Be Excused.|
Dawg Next Time If We Battle Just Refused.||
Kinda weak punch but good enough i guess

Because Of Me There Gonna Be A New Meaning To The Word Owned.|
I'll Rip You Apart Then Shake Until You Stopped Like Gettin Post-poned.||
Nice Punch yo but not really that personal
Thinking YOu Still Gotta Chance Why DOnt You Think A-gain.|(pronounced A Gain)
Cuz After This Battle There Gonna Be A New Meaning To Head With No Brain.|
Nothing special

You Cant Beat Be If You Do Then Its A Glitch
Hell let Me Just Tell You That You Got Merked Bitch
Weak opener

u got some good potential at becoming better. u got some creativitie in ur flow and punches Overall I give you a 7/10

I have the skills to give you the chills/ you can't stand what I'm sayin'/ I'll have you praying for a better day/ your broken down from the shit I spray/
When i'm done you'll drop a tear/ I fill your eyes with fear, nothin' u can do, I'm done, your dead/ I'll have them set the coffin open so I can see your decapitated head/


This fucker will die instantly/ Take a look inside your heart, follow it and leave, that way you're released from all the grief/
You wanna stay here and lose, it's your choice, choose...
If your gonna stay, you should prepare to face the shit i say/ Your my prey, I'ma kill You/

This is an uncrowned champion your goin' against/ My flow is heavy and defensive, it'll leave you fucked up and depressive/
Your forehead, I see cold perspiration/ I sense a tad of desperation/ you have no idea what to do/
You a choke? That's what i thought, your mind I broke, a thousand pieces/ Jesus! someone help this dude, he has all kinds of diseases!
With this I end my prophecy, next time, don't bother me! / See what you got yourself into? my hands are flamable, watch out, next time I'll leave you in a pile of ashes... no doubt
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DA MO U TALK SHIT DA MO BLOOD WILL SHEAD//SO IF U WAS U KEEP YO MOUTH CLOSE INSTEAD//


I really didnt see anything special in ur punches nothing impressed me though but keep elevating though overall i give you a 6/10 kinda close but murderous had the edge.

This Was A Ok Battle... Nuttin Really Stood Out Wit Punchlines Tho... U Both Went To Jus Killin And Shit.. But It Was A Str8 Battle... But Imma Go Wit Toxic On This One.. He Had A More Complex Flow.. And All Tha Spellin Shit Out Was Weak Murderous... I Wasnt Feelin It..