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Immense 05-09-04 12:17 PM

thugzy vs eric89
 
aigh,

10 lines
no d/r
no crew votes


check in first eric

gd look

Immense 05-09-04 12:19 PM

aight,im check in,am keyin summet now

eric89 05-09-04 12:21 PM

yo im checkin in so spit it up aight.

Immense 05-09-04 12:27 PM

aight,this chunks shook,look,he taped his own mouth shut/
got his keyboard ready,he just got nuthin to put/
ma lyrics burn this bitch,like california bush fires/
tha heats to much,like on formula 1 car tyres/
ma punchlines strip ya,leave ya in a traumatised state/
this guys sreamin rape,as if this battle was a date/
look at ya,tryna put together 2 lines/
feedin off other emcees just to make ya shit rhyme/
ill stab ya and rob ya,like a member of tha cribs just got ya/
and leave ya fo dead,like tha washington sniper just shot ya

Merk.Inc 05-09-04 12:36 PM

this shit is def. bitten.. look at his style.. and plus he never mentioned eric..

Post proof or stop freeposting
-strobe

Immense 05-09-04 12:39 PM

lmao,wot tha fuck,look at this kid,go check my other shit kid,if u wanna see mentioned names,lol,and compare ma style were i av mentioned names to this style,theyll all match u fukin idiot.

eric89 05-09-04 12:48 PM

yo look at this foo tryin to spit a rap
his words sound like a drunk who just downed a fifth of shnaps
he be talkin about me tapen my mouth shut
my punches are stonger than that and the only thing im punchin is ur moms cunt
when im done with this battle ur tears are gonna be flowin harder than rain
ur the mouse im the lion. u have no chance cuz im at the top of the food chain
ima leave u all shooken up like a fuckin clerk at a bank robbery
ur fuckin punch lines are probably pre-written unlike me
but thats ok cuz ur gonna need pre-written shit
cuz for u, battlin me is like tryin to get some clit. (it aint gonna happen)

Immense 05-09-04 12:54 PM

lol,nice battle son,merc.inc u fuckin dumb fuck,if i voted against u in some battle or summet,im sorry.lol.but wot tha fuck,jus cos i dint mension a name,i cud show u 20 verses in battles now that dunt mension tha other guyz name,but dont meen they bitin.lol.wot a dik.

uppin 4 votes

eric89 05-09-04 12:57 PM

thanks

DeLeon 05-09-04 01:19 PM

alright alright this was kinda weak i think both of yall can do better-so with that said
Im going to have to give it to Thugzy on this one- his flow was better-punches and
personals hit harder- had a nice closer-and struc was aight

Eric i just think you need to stop feedin and make up a punchline- cuz thats when it hits hardest- is when its orginal-next time just hit harder with your punches and you could take this

vote=thugzy

drop an honest vote on this

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123015

Immense 05-09-04 01:51 PM

aight,safe g,uppin 4 votes..........

e.coli 05-09-04 02:10 PM

v/thugzy

i feel that he came harder....eric u feed a lil bit off of thugzy as well...and u had to many played lines in your verse.....thugzy just came too hard wit the punches that is why he took this one

v/thugzy

Immense 05-09-04 02:14 PM

thnx g,uppin 4 votes...................

E Looch 05-09-04 03:16 PM

this guys sreamin rape,as if this battle was a date/<<< this is one of my lines reworded i said this kid pussy som im treatin this battle like date rape


come on now be real with ya self my vote goes to eric just for the simple fact he tried and he didnt use nobody else sit reworded you both need to elevate though work on harder punchs and VOCAB

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Darrk 05-09-04 03:25 PM

Gooood SPit's on Both sides.. Thugzy good Punchlines and Structure.. Butt i hope u didn't Take anyone's verses Man..

Eric good FLow n u got some good Punchlines.

Eric-when im done with this battle ur tears are gonna be flowin harder than rain
ur the mouse im the lion. u have no chance cuz im at the top of the food chain

Good SPit both of you's

V/Eric

eric89 05-09-04 03:29 PM

yo e looch thanks b. lets get some more votes on this bisach common people.

eric89 05-09-04 03:31 PM

yo darrk thanks. lets get some more votes people common.

L.E 05-09-04 03:31 PM

A'ight yo...this was a pretty weak battle...

Thugzy...ya flow was ya strongest point. Ya punches need some werk, and so do your personals. I HOPE you didn't bite off of E-Looch...overall, werk on some shit, you had some a'ight punches...

5/10

Eric...holy shit...what kind of fucking drugs are you smokin' kid? You're so wack, I could find better verses wrote by an autistic kid. Flow was horrible, your punches were lame and played to fuck, and some shit barely rhymed. Elevate dawg.

0/10

Vote- Thugzy

No hate...hit this up bein slept on hard...thx...

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=122351

Immense 05-09-04 03:40 PM

wtf,please evry one go check out this battle befoe u vote against me
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120457

e looch is just hatin,he was hatin on me in this other battle 4 no reason,so i had a go back and now hes hatin again,wot a dik.


thnx

eric89 05-09-04 03:42 PM

common people lets get some votes plz

Immense 05-09-04 03:51 PM

uppin 4 votez...............

Immense 05-09-04 05:56 PM

uppin 4 votes..............

MARVOLoUsJ1009 05-09-04 06:13 PM

umm both of ya'll was type week but let me vote

opener-thugzy u could of came harder than dat dunn
structure-thugzy...eric ya lines were 2 long
punchlines-nun
creativity-thugzy he tried
wordplay-nun
personals-thugzy
enjoyed-thugzy....eric dogg u was feedin off da niggaz verse datz corny...but aneway

my vote-thugzy

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=122964
^^^link 2 my battle can ya'll pleez return da honest vote....GON

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E Looch 05-09-04 06:21 PM

im not hatin i give a shit about you just hate when people try to bite my shit an reword it like its theres

my line an then look at his

Come On Karl Everyone Knows You Pussy So Im Treatin This Batlle Like Date Rape/

Immense 05-09-04 06:26 PM

aight safe.uppin 4 votes..............

Immense 05-09-04 06:30 PM

lmao.ok then,i dint bite ur shit though,but anyway,think wot u want!

Immense 05-10-04 12:55 PM

uppin 4 votes.......

Immense 05-10-04 04:03 PM

uppin 4 votes yall................

eric89 05-10-04 06:40 PM

yo can somone vote and close this battle plz.

Merk.Inc 05-10-04 06:56 PM

Ight.. this battle imo was weak.. eric wins this by default cuz dude bit.. but heres the explanation if ya want,.

flow-thug
punches-eric
structure-eric
wordplay-thug
vote-eric

eric gets muh vote cuz he had better punches to me

eric89 05-10-04 10:44 PM

yo can we get this pole closed by tonight people thanks

eric89 05-11-04 07:28 AM

yo uppin for votes. lets get this pole closed people

eric89 05-11-04 12:26 PM

can we get this pole closed plz

eric89 05-11-04 05:21 PM

Uppin For Votes

Lyriclesolja 05-11-04 06:18 PM

Yo i vote thug cause he had good set up but although it was good set up the vocab. really let me down. and for eric bad set up all around try to be more fluent wit ya words.

I Vote: THUGZY


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