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Terror Vs. K.S.Trin
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Your Come at me with that B/S ur just a Hot-Shot// Kid ur Rhymes are Unbalanced like a Teator-Tot// Your a Shady Worshiper,Hes your Life Long Rap Idol// But u aint got his skill so Rookie of the Year isnt ur Title// You changed ur name hopin u could escape ur Losing Slump// Im leavin Craters on u,Ur Rhymes dont evan make a Bump// Ill Rip-Out-Ur-Heart leavin u Without a Blood Flow// I just took ur Only Flow,killen u will put me on Death Row// Little Marshall Your Dreams have just Been Shattered// Well like ur Freestyles i left u on the Mic Ripped & Tattered// This goes to show whos best Rookie Cause u just got Batterd// How bout ur shit MR.Rookie of the Year? |
You think you sexy , yet you got a dad that look like Paul Bearer//
You call urself Terror , cause to your parents , you nutin but an error// U not a rapper...that pre-written shit shouldn't even be called a verse// Nigga , you more manly than a nurse........ or wearing a purse // Go look in the mirror and ask yourself "WHY DO I RAP ????? " // Cause you having sex with a girl as hard as u can...feel like a love tap// And you be walking around like you just been taking-it-in-the-chin// Cause your dad fucked you more than Anjellina Jolie in Original Sin// And you stroll round here thinking you good and you deserve props!!// And you be thinking I suck? .. but you forget that's you and ur pops// You more liked....... than a cockroach or Micheal Jackson tattoo // When niggas hear the name TERROR ,they gonna be like WHO!!??!?!// |
And I am Rookie of the year.
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Ight uppin lol no ur not
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ight uppin lol yes I am
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Terror - Good spit man, had some good flow there.. and your punches were hott to.
Best Line - Your Come at me with that B/S ur just a Hot-Shot// Kid ur Rhymes are Unbalanced like a Teator-Tot// Worst Line - Little Marshall Your Dreams have just Been Shattered// Well like ur Freestyles i left u on the Mic Ripped & Tattered// Shady - Good spit man, best I have seen from ya.. your punches were hot and your flow was crazy. Best Line - You think you sexy , yet you got a dad that look like Paul Bearer// You call urself Terror , cause to your parents , you nutin but an error// (LOL) Worst Line - NONE (good job man) OVERALL - Very close battle guys, but I gotta give this to Shady cuz this is the best I have ever seen from him.. he had hard punches and he had mad hott flow.. good verse man, Terror your shit was good too.. but it was simpler then shady's work on that man and you be hott. VOTE - Shady RETURN THE FAV http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123292 |
Yeah,the rookie of the year upps his thread.
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rookie of the year?.. lol, wanna battle me for that spot?.. didnt think so
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lol........chill G.Not yet.Some day we'll battle.....But not now.
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I also vote for shady, his punches owned terrors...
shady had way more powerful punches and just more of them, his flow was better and his vocab was better. I also thought his metas were more powerful and meaningful. Nice job yo. |
20 do u know what a meta is?
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break dooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooown bitchs
terror opener was around average good creativitie and all nice punch but needed to be worded better your closer was nice i liked it good personal and punch in it just soem advice dont always rhyme 3 lines together people on this site vote against it cause they dont know what they doin and the rest of your verse had ups and downs in it had some good punchs and personals and that death row wasnt to good though nice verse and trin your opener was decent first line was stupid punch was pretty good the multi was useless though and your closer was shaky to didnt make much sence to me decen punch though just need to work on wording it and the rest of your verse Go look in the mirror and ask yourself "WHY DO I RAP ????? " //<<< good job of tryna bite 2 of my lines and fix em together dickhead go look in my crew league battle if yo uwanna argue wit my kid dont worry though you the 2nd person today i seen bitin my lyrics thanks for the props to vote terror |
yea, and terror u only had 1 descent one, the one with the teator-tot, dats it bra
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Middle of the road verses for both sides on this one.
Terror: He flowed well, his ryhmes vever really broke up, but his punches weren't all that creative. Best Ryhme: Your Come at me with that B/S ur just a Hot-Shot// Kid ur Rhymes are Unbalanced like a Teator-Tot// Worse Ryhme: Ill Rip-Out-Ur-Heart leavin u Without a Blood Flow// I just took ur Only Flow,killen u will put me on Death Row// (The violent stuff is pretty played out, and its only really a punch aside from the "Only Flow" bit) K.S. Trin: His flow wasn't as solid as Terror's, and his punches weren't that incredible either. They might have been just slightly better than Terror's, but its a really hard call. He also fails to target Terror directly with most of his punches, focusing on generic attacks that could be used against just about anyone. Best Ryhme: "And you be walking around like you just been taking-it-in-the-chin// Cause your dad fucked you more than Anjellina Jolie in Original Sin//" Worse Ryhme: U not a rapper...that pre-written shit shouldn't even be called a verse// Nigga , you more manly than a nurse........ or wearing a purse // (Iffy flow, a tired punch, and I'm pretty sure you meant "no more manly than") Verdict: Terror (This was close, but his flow was better and his punches actually seemed focused on his opponent rather than another_rapper_01) |
Lol he also only had 1 i dont think u know what ur talkin bout.
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Okay nigga,cause I had some parts of the same line u used?" WHY DO I RAP????" Okay,I know I made it too,but it'a not original.It's not like that shit was the most creativite thing in the world.Anyone could do that shit.And I never been inside Crew league in mylife.I should report your vote,since it was a hate one.I'm adding you to my blacklist i user CP.Cause you a hata. ~1~ |
*sigh* Ignore my vote.
I thought this was another "20 or more to vote" thread, but I guess I was wrong... Well, I'll come back if you still need votes when I have 50. |
Trin ur just mad b/c im gettin votes
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^^nigga,U can't say that ELooch's explamation was fair.
"why do i rap???" ^^wow,is that the most creative thing in the world.How does that prove I bitted his verse? |
add me to a black list i didnt read this shit cause you was in it your whole verse was garbage besides the shit you stole from me talkin about purses an shit nikka go to www.wackrappers.com an post that shit
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Nigga,you know I'm right bout wat I said,so fuck u.And I want you in a battle.Cause you a faggot.I ain't even gon diss you out here.And I read that verse in the crew league.And That shit really belongs on wackrappers.com.So wat good E.Battle or not? |
naw son you wack elevate an then battle me i dont battle sorry ass people thats why i dont have over a 100 wins so elevate an come back at me and im done postin in here
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Lookin for some votes.
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kstrin won nice connecting punches and presonal and you jolee in there so you had to win. i liked the flow of both guys keep going.
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I will have to say Terror took this shit
he had a better verse in my eyes although this shit was pretty even Terror edged it out just a little bit good job to the both of you and both of you need to elevate http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123431 hit that shit up Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Checckity Checck Checck....
Breakdown For Terror: Your Come at me with that B/S ur just a Hot-Shot// Kid ur Rhymes are Unbalanced like a Teator-Tot// ^May Be True But In This Case!! "I Think Not" .. lmfao.. Anyways A Weak Opener 7/10 Little Marshall Your Dreams have just Been Shattered// Well like ur Freestyles i left u on the Mic Ripped & Tattered// This goes to show whos best Rookie Cause u just got Batterd// ^3Lines Didnt' Go Well With The Flow.. & Fucked Up Your Verse' !!... Should Have Left The Last Line Off' .. & It Would Of Been Swell... (Lol) .. Anyways With That Being Said.. 9/10 I Though It Was One Of Your Better Lines Unlike G'Killaz!!!! Break Down For...' KTrini: You think you sexy , yet you got a dad that look like Paul Bearer// You call urself Terror , cause to your parents , you nutin but an error// ^LmfaO WTF Does His Dad Got To Do Wit This? You Replacin 'Em As Mama Jokes Or Something... 6/10.. Aint Feelin The Opener!! U not a rapper...that pre-written shit shouldn't even be called a verse// Nigga , you more manly than a nurse........ or wearing a purse // ^Ok.. Weak Punch.. 5/10 And you stroll round here thinking you good and you deserve props!!// And you be thinking I suck? .. but you forget that's you and ur pops// ^You Obsessed.. With His "Pops" ???!!! (Lol) Because That's What It Looks Like..!!! 4/10 You more liked....... than a cockroach or Micheal Jackson tattoo // When niggas hear the name TERROR ,they gonna be like WHO!!??!?!// ^Weak Closer' .. Getting Nothing Out Of It!!! .. Elevate.. Kiid!! Vote: Terror |
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terror - aight ur verse was okay...i expected you to be a lot better for sum reason...o well....decent wordplay....good flow....bad meta's....bad punches....u didnt hit directely....a lot of it was jus played and u used the same concept about rookie of the year....i give ur verse a 5 out of 10....
k.trini - aight your verse was okay too....better punches...but very gay punches....wordplay was ok....flow was ok....didnt feel ur punches....but u had 1 or 2 that were nice....i give your verse a 5.3 out of 10... CLOSE BATTLE BUT... I GOTTA GIVE THIS... TO... K.S.Trin...for the fact that they had better punches... Both need to elevate... Vote - K.S.Trin...no hate just a vote... |
Your Come at me with that B/S ur just a Hot-Shot//
Kid ur Rhymes are Unbalanced like a Teator-Tot// NOT FEELIN IT Your a Shady Worshiper,Hes your Life Long Rap Idol// But u aint got his skill so Rookie of the Year isnt ur Title// I HATE EM LINES!! You changed ur name hopin u could escape ur Losing Slump// Im leavin Craters on u,Ur Rhymes dont evan make a Bump// PRETTY GOOD Ill Rip-Out-Ur-Heart leavin u Without a Blood Flow// I just took ur Only Flow,killen u will put me on Death Row// GOOD PUNCH,THIS IS UR BEST BAR Little Marshall Your Dreams have just Been Shattered// Well like ur Freestyles i left u on the Mic Ripped & Tattered// This goes to show whos best Rookie Cause u just got Batterd// WEAK CLOSING........ You think you sexy , yet you got a dad that look like Paul Bearer// You call urself Terror , cause to your parents , you nutin but an error// UR BEST PUNCH IN THIS BATTLE..... U not a rapper...that pre-written shit shouldn't even be called a verse// Nigga , you more manly than a nurse........ or wearing a purse // WTF? THIS SHIT DOESNT EVEN MAKE SENSE...... Go look in the mirror and ask yourself "WHY DO I RAP ????? " // Cause you having sex with a girl as hard as u can...feel like a love tap// ? THIS IS GAY And you be walking around like you just been taking-it-in-the-chin// Cause your dad fucked you more than Anjellina Jolie in Original Sin// GAYYYYYYYY!!!!!! And you stroll round here thinking you good and you deserve props!!// And you be thinking I suck? .. but you forget that's you and ur pops// GAYER!!!!!!!!! You more liked....... than a cockroach or Micheal Jackson tattoo // When niggas hear the name TERROR ,they gonna be like WHO!!??!?!// THATS THE WACKEST SHIT I'VE EVER SEEN!!!!!!! UMMM...NOT SPECTACULAR VERSES BY EITHER.....BUT TERROR HAD ONE GOOD PUNCH ABOUT FLOW,N HIS BEST PUNCH WAS BETTER THEN UR BEST PUNCH......THE REST OF TERRORS WAS WEAK WITH THE EXCEPTION OF THE OTHER DECENT PUNCH.....BUT THE OTHER DUDE,THE REST OF HIS ENTIRE VERSE WAS HORRIFIC.....ESPECIALLY THE SECOND HALF I DUNNO WHAT U'RE THINKIN..........NOOBIES PLEASE.....DO NOT RAP ABOUT HIS DAD SUCKIN HIS DICK N DO NOT MAKE REFERENCES TO MOVIES,RAPPERS,OR ANYTHING LIKE THAT!!!!!!!!!WACK!!! VOTE=TERROR UMMMMMM....SHOULDNT THERE BE MORE VOTES THAN SHOWIN ON THE POLL? |
Yea one kid couldnt vote yet.
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ls trin go this for sure he had some dope punches and flow
and also had a good opener so in my opinion he takes this. Terror u was str8 but ur shit seemed a lil bit streched @ some parts which made ur punches fall off. Vote : KS Trin |
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