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DirtBoy69 05-09-04 10:02 PM

**championship match** kingz(champ) vs. Restricted
 
deadlines:
battles go up sunday night around 10:00 pm eastern
check in by wedsday
verses due by thrusday
votes due by the next sunday around 9:00pm eastern
rules:
no dick riding
no crew votes
no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd
no feeding off of other guys verse
bar limits:
4 bar min.
32 bar max.

restricted maybe next week if your champ i'll let your rule happen

Restricted 05-09-04 10:52 PM



.::Checking In::.

I Just Think Peeps Shouldnt Have 4 Days To Pre-Write..

~R~

My Verse Is DOne Already..So Kingz Tell Me When Your Done


DirtBoy69 05-09-04 11:22 PM

you might not have a problem with posting same day but other people could, like people who can't get online everyday, that's why i give time

-Zone Out- 05-10-04 11:49 AM

sorry for this post
but why do people always bitch about pre-writing?
its not a rule against it
and its not bad
this is a battle site
not a freestyle site
I spend as much time possible to write my verse

Kingz 05-10-04 11:49 AM

checkin in

Restricted 05-10-04 02:12 PM

When You Gonna Be Able To Spit Kid?

~R~

-Zone Out- 05-11-04 07:42 PM

^^you've been online all day today
how about you stop acting like a bitch and spit first your damn self

Restricted 05-11-04 07:45 PM

Cause I Know Mine Is Done...I Am Not Gonna Spit First and Have This Kid Spit 3 Days Later...

Like MetaPhysic Did...He Spit 6 hours After I Did....

I Hate Dat Shit...I Mean AS Soon As He Spits and I See It My Shit It Up.

~R~

Back Off My Dick, Dick Riding Fagget...Just Wait Till Its Your Turn To Get Merked.

~R~

Enygma 05-11-04 08:08 PM

^^^

You do bitch a lot about dropping your verse before anyone else....If you're so good, why don't you drop now? Kingz is gonna take as long as he wants anyway....why wait?

Restricted 05-11-04 08:11 PM

Why Don't You Quit Complaining....I Am Not Complaining...I Never Did....

I Just Asked Kingz...When He Was Gonna Be Able To Drop..That's ALl..

And I Will Submit My Shit Whenever I Feel Like It..

Newayz...Ya'll Hit Up Dis Battle Please..

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123700

~R~

kawtic² 05-13-04 12:16 PM

Restricted???? you got banned from the original one for bitin why da fuk you here?

Kingz 05-13-04 12:38 PM

ok i'm about to drop
its a weak spit because i have my exams at the moment
i might even have to drop out next week
i have only had 10 mins to key up this
but here we go

Kingz 05-13-04 12:39 PM

like Ja Rule’s retirement will be...this match is long awaited
You may not be under my influence…but you are oveR-Rated
You can’t even throw a punch…and u say ‘you can’t fuck with the best’
You avatar explains…that even ya pet rabbit is putting holes in ya chest
Ya skill is restricted…you will never elevate higher than me
banned from the old RB…for biting off Eminem…How dumb can you be?
Even ya best punch is played…someone else probably had it
You ‘take’ more ‘lines’….than a fucking cocaine addict
Im ya elder…you can learn from me..there is no better tutor
missed our match last week…cos ya mum grounded u from ya computer
how you think you can win…if ya mom stills bosses you about?
U prayed 2 God for ‘Parental Guidance’...when it comes to skills he left you out
You put capitals at the start of each word…to give more impact
I could give u my password (fuck u computer nerd) but I’d probably be hacked
If the voting goes your way…then I will pass you my crown
In this league…its like your bitch…jus keeps getting passed around
Yeah maybe I cant match you vocabulary….and some of you wordplay
You neva every got to 2nd base…cos ur bitch a ho…so its called whoreplay
You say you’re a gangsta? You contradict yourself Re$tricted
You got so many dick riders you should be renamed ContraDICKted

Vango 05-13-04 12:42 PM

nICE VERSE kINGZ, HOT SHIT.

-Zone Out- 05-13-04 12:50 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Kingz
banned from the old RB…for biting off Eminem…How dumb can you be?

I remember that battle
you see my name in it(Younggadget)
that was my first RB name
I emember R-Rated now
he IS a biter
roflmao @ the biter
lollolololololol
I hope he doesnt bite in this battle

Shadows edge 05-13-04 01:17 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by VanGo
nICE VERSE kINGZ, HOT SHIT.


Stop swaying, and everyone stop fucking freeposting. if I was the one running this league, this would be the bullshit i would take care of first.

LaTiNKiTTeN 05-13-04 03:27 PM

whoa...damn.......i mean,king's verse wasnt all that good........the mom banned u from the computer line was ok cuz i saw he really posted that lol...but damn,if restricted is a biter,than ban him lol.........they mentioned he bit under c rabbit and r rated.....ban him........plus he aint that good anyway i've seen him spit ...lol

Restricted 05-13-04 05:34 PM

I Bite Back In The Day....Man Mad Peeps On My Dick Bout Dat...

Anyways...Dropping Soon

~R~

Restricted 05-13-04 06:18 PM

Alright....Check It...

Aiyo...3.....2.....1....

Challenging Me Is Like Walking On Glass, And Your Style Straight Sucks Ass,
Yo Kid, You Getting Served Like White-Colar Parties, My Spits Full Of High-Class/
I'll Bash and Stash Your Brain, Till You Mentally Unbalanced Rythmatically,
Stagerdly, Your Cerebrum Flow Is Losing Votes Like Bush's Campaign, Dramaticly/
Rapping In Stradegy, Blowing This Kid Outta The BattleField, Leaving You Wet,
Don't Complain Kid, Cause I Would Merk You The Same In Life Like I Do On Da Net/
Kid Please Don't Spit, Cause Your Punches Hitting Like A Deranged Turtle,
Short and Slow, Re$tricted Cumming Hard, Now Watch This Bitch Gurgle/
You Think I'm Nice, Just Because Re$tricted Sparing Ya Life?
Nah Kid, I'm Spitting Half My Skill, While You Spitting In Strife/
This Win I'ma Kife, Razor-Sharp Lyrics Slicing You Like Knifes,
Zeebra For Halloween, Only Time This Fake Thug Will Be Covered In Stripes/
My Ryhmes Sufficating Ya Flow and Diminishing Ya Chances At This,
Knew You Was My Bitch When You Held My Dick While I Was Taking A Piss/
Reminising With Bliss, Re$tricteds The Champ, My Belt Shinnin In Gliss,
Time You Get The Taste Of A Champion, Is When I Give You My Ass To Kiss/
I Must Be Seeing With X-Ray Vision, The Way I'm Looking Straight Threw You,
Your Just An Act, Never Defeating Anyone Worth Mentioning, Blew True To You/
In A Tempermental Mood, My Spit Molding Your Body, Like An Acidic Pool,
Every Weak Punch You Spit Someone Will Ridicule, Yo Dog Its Pitiful/
This Kids Title Run Getting Cut Short, Just Like I Did To Enygma,
Throw Away Your Mic and Retire, Realize RB Just Doesn't Need Ya/
This Herb, Spitting Garbage, Thats Why His Breath Is So Foul,
This Cat Spit, and The Crowd Dropped In Lines For A Whole Mile/
Need To Realize Your Avatar Is Gay, WTf Possed Ya Mind,
Must Be Dem Elementry Kids, That Explains The Style Of Your Ryhmes/
Sorry To Disappoint You Bitch, But You Never Stood A Chance,
Knew You Full Of Shit, But When You Seen Me You Had An Aroma In Your Pants/
You Thought You Spit Hot, Until You Saw The Flames I Deployed,
Thanks To Your Spit, Dirtboy Put Up A "Weak Spit, Please Do Avoid"/
As Soon As You Dispersed, I Heard Bells-Ringing and The Sight Of A Hearse,
Is This Kid Serious, Did He Just Take A Shit Or Was That His True Verse?/
Match My Skill?, Nah Kid You Couldn't, Would Take Mircale Answered Wish,
Thought You Was Tight, But Now I Can Plainly See That Dog Your Just A Bitch/

Yea...Thats Whats Up...

~R~

LaTiNKiTTeN 05-13-04 07:46 PM

"Knew You Was My Bitch When You Held My Dick While I Was Taking A Piss"
lol thats pretty funny,....but,i dont know any straight dude's who'd brag about something like that.........

well,u ADMIT u used to bite....well dude u should have been banned then,therefore u really shouldnt be on here now.......i can tell u couldnt have bitten this verse,cuz it was mediocre at best...........maybe i'll brake the whole battle down later......but my opinion u shouldnt even be on here.............im out

DirtBoy69 05-14-04 08:00 AM

breakdown for kingz:

flow:pretty good no off spots everything rhymed well and there wasn't really streched bars 7/10

volcab:solid use some of the better here i've seen in the league this week 7/10

punches:nice job here addressing restricted almost everyline some good name flips and personals my fav,"You avatar explains…that even ya pet rabbit is putting holes in ya chest" funny that ja rule line was good at the start too, just cause i hate ja rule and all good job here 8/10

overall:22/30

breakdown for restricted:

flow:not as good as i've seen towards the end of the verse your bars were still streched too hell but lacked a great deal of the multis that made it good in weeks before and even in the first have of this verse you still gets points here cause it all rhymed and had some good internal rhyming at the start 6/10

volcab:a step down from weeks past i think i expected alot more from you with the week off and telling me you had your verse written on sunday anyway still pretty good 7/10

punches:not as many as kingz had but yours for what you had were stronger best line,"This Kids Title Run Getting Cut Short, Just Like I Did To Enygma," just cause it got at two people at once good job 7/10

overall:20/30

vote--real close battle but i see kingz taking it he really came out this week with some nice ass punches

kawtic² 05-14-04 09:14 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Kryogenix
I remember that battle
you see my name in it(Younggadget)
that was my first RB name
I emember R-Rated now
he IS a biter
roflmao @ the biter
lollolololololol
I hope he doesnt bite in this battle





Told you

Native 05-14-04 11:46 AM

Why does Restricted make up words?

Thats just retarded

DA BOY GENIUS 05-14-04 12:50 PM

My Vote Goes To....
 
Here is how it goes For Kingz:

Opening: Statement about Ja Rule was true at least... I think the opening could've been stronger though.

Flow: I liked how all of your words connected... Everything rhymed... and everything fit well...

Vocab: Normal vocab here: It wasnt the greatest ever but it was far from bad. You don't need a heavy vocab to win battles in my opinion.

Punches: His punches were minimal but I liked a couple of them. The cocaine addict line was pretty good. I also liked how you mentioned he used to bite because this well probably come up in a lot of votes. Mostly everything was basic here though... Nothing really got me out my seat or nothing...

Closing: I was feeling the Contradickted line. Good closing in my view.

As For Restricted:

Opening: Basic Rhyming Style here.... rhymed glass with ass and class.... Nothing speical

Flow: That long word shit dont impress me. It looks good but it don't show me nothing. Only person i give props to for doing that is Canibus. I do liked though how everything came together to rhyme and everything connected pretty well.

Punches: The Haloween Zeebra line was a nice punch. Thats all I seen that was decent.

Closing: Rhymed Wish with bitch. What more do I have to say? I don't understand why this dude be using all these big ass words one minute and then he'll rhyme for example simple with pimple. Stick to one style fam and you'll be aight.

My vote goes to Kingz.
[/QUOTE] [/QUOTE]

Kingz 05-14-04 12:54 PM

appreciate the vote. dirtboy is they a minimum number of posts that u need to have to vote or summit? i think u shud set one next week. especially for the championship match

Restricted 05-14-04 01:38 PM

Aiyo...This Is My Last Battle...

Tired Of Hate Votes and Peeps Who Don't Know Shit..

Kid With 8 Votes.....Votes On This Battle Like He Is Hot LMAO..

Maybe Sum Real Votes Would Be Nice...Sum Kids Who Actually Know What A Good Spit Is..

Like CarsonJet Said...These Herbs Here Don't Know Shit Or Understand The Concepts Of The Punches Us Vets Use..

~R~

Native 05-14-04 01:39 PM

I'm more of a vet than you will ever be....

I think I understand battles far more than you
So dont bitch...
You arent that good

Restricted 05-14-04 01:43 PM

LoL Kid I Alread Beat You..

And You Tried Having You D/R Friends To Vote For You In The First 10 Minutes LMAO...

Newayz...This Is Why Rb.com Will Never Progress, Because No One On This Site Has Anything Positive To Say To Anyone Else....Everyone Has Sumthing Negative To Say..

I Never Say Anything Negative To An Emcee...Unless Its A Battle.....I Am Always Positive Towards Them and Giving Them Props....Thats A True Vet....

Fuck You Native..Your Far From A Decent Emcee...

Only Reason You A Vet Is Because You Been on RB.com For 4 Years..Because You Can't Get A Fucking Deal Nor A Fucking Life LMAO..

Please Kid..Go Get A Life and Sum Pussy....

~R~

Native 05-14-04 02:09 PM

^^^

I've been on RB for 1 year....

And you only win because of D/R
You're just leaving now because people are catching onto what real battles are about

Restricted 05-14-04 02:21 PM

~
 
.::Nah Kid::.

Your Name Is Chrit...and You've Been On For More Than 2 Years..

Nah I Am Not Done Battling, I Just Said That Cause I Was Mad..

But I Will Just Work On The Way I Used To Drop...That's All...

I Know Fasho I Beat ThiS Kid Though..

~R~

Native 05-14-04 02:24 PM

Nah.. you lost...

And look at the registration date....
Joined March of '03

Restricted 05-14-04 02:26 PM

Yea Thats For THis Site Kid...

ANd Nah I Didn't Lose...Thats Your Opnion...Your A Hate Vote Anyways..

ALways Been Hating On Me Since I Beat You...

Newayz...Enough Freeposting..

Kingz - 1

Re$tricted - 0

~R~

HeXen 05-14-04 04:17 PM

erm..restirted...i dont give marks for writin 2 pages but dis was won by u..ur content and punch was more superia of with kingz.....kingz u was tight but i felt u lack the cuttin edge..pz out...

res....9/10
kingz....8.3/10

v/res

Cesus Jhist 05-14-04 04:54 PM

lmao at the d/r to such a wack herb...

kingz, that shit was gay. Stretched, weak punches...and your the champ?

God, if I made non dickriding pills id be richer than the oil owners in Saudi Arabia



v/nobody, cuz both sucked

Restricted 05-15-04 12:44 AM

Yea I Have Fallen Off Lately....Haven't Been Focused..

Check Out My New Battle In Elevated FrontLines..Hot Spit Fasho..

NEwayz...

Kingz: 1

Re$tricted: 1

~R~

-Zone Out- 05-15-04 05:31 AM

aww man
hot battle
this shit was tight
i expected Res to come better than that
but he still came with straight fiyah
I will have to go with Kingz
he just had more personals
Kingz
9/10
Res
8.9/10

^^I voted like 95% of the people on this site

Kingz 05-15-04 06:36 AM

Kingz - 3 (2 if the newb vote dont count)
~R~ - 1

Restricted 05-15-04 09:04 AM

Nah....The Peeps Who Hate Me Are Voting For You...And He Does It On Purpose...

Native and Kryogenix Are The People Who I Have The Biggest Beafs With....and The Herb One Doesn't Count...

So It Is..

Kingz: 1

Re$tricted: 1

~R~

-Zone Out- 05-15-04 09:10 AM

wtf?
people on this site need to learn what beef is
me saying "stfu you wack bitch" isnt having beef
thats just saying me saying "stfu you wack bitch"
unlike you, i dont take the net so serious that I have "beef" with people
thats childish
and I voted fairly, I think Kingz really did win
therefore
its
Kingz-2
Res-1

I dont know about nATIVE'S VOTE

Restricted 05-15-04 09:43 AM

Aight Aight..I Don't Take It Serious Kid..I Just Know We Dont Like Each Other..

Kingz - 2

Re$tricted - 1

~R~


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