shadows edge vs. VC
 

deadlines:
battles go up sunday night around 10:00 pm eastern
check in by wedsday
verses due by thrusday
votes due by the next sunday around 9:00pm eastern
rules:
no dick riding
no crew votes
no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd
no feeding off of other guys verse
bar limits:
4 bar min.
16 bar max.

Haha.. aight this time no double the limit for you kid. A line is a line....

check check

u never specified "kid" a bar is almost 2 lines hence bar...meaning 2... a line is a single line..doesnt matter you'll stillg et merked like the the previous.. im 3-0 in LCB...im not about to let you make this 3-1..lol. good luck

yea of course....checkity check

of course.
 

yea of course....checkity check

yo dirtboy i just as logn as i been in here..it never crossed my mind u said no freeposting and thats what i did without thinkin could u remove these posts..all except for checkity checkity....my bad dog.

Fuck waiting... you can take a week for this shit but I'm done now.

Kid, you ain’t great… shit… check it:

If you’re so fucking hot, why nobody read what you wrote?
Face the facts: YOUR LAST BATTLE ONLY GOT ONE FUCKING VOTE!
Kid's lyrics walk tall but he come to battle packing a twig
Check the list of his accomplishemnts's... they all there in his sig
Running your mouth like you the fucking king of this game
Vernacularly Challenged… kid your retardation got its own name
The sad part is, winning this battle will only take half the effort
… Getting people to read your shit and vote - that’s the F-er
Kid you ain’t no Shakespeare, so quit all this damn fussing
Shit, bragging about your talent… is Much Ado About Nothing
Copped your name from the Vietcong, I’m just spreading the word
That just like them... your album is never seen or heard
Thought you had talent? Well clearly been mislead
Kid's rhymes dropped his tape...
...and signed up with Weight Watchers instead
Thinking you survive this shit? Hardly
Kid’s profile repping a dead crew*

… and he still couldn’t the life of the party

* class sic, in his profile, for anyone too lazy to check… and if he pull a bitch move like take it out.. well that’s just a bitch move

I stay in the light,just outta the *Shadows Edge*/
he sendin me feminine slow flow,why yall got me to battle sledge/
i'll ruin ya ear drums,so that it'll be a *headphone murder*/
VC run tracks more lengths than the transcontinental merger/
dwelling on the past,just look to the futurah(future)/
you'll see the barrel,5 seconds ago,it was 3 seconds to *shoot ya*/
notice the limit is 16 bars,if u count that's up to 32 lines/
wont need that many ,few bars better than all of yours combined/
12-9,record is worse than mine divide its only 4-3/
mines is 5-2,shows see why you cant beat VC/
same seven battle in equivalent to ratio/
this bitch got more *frequent*ly disrupted brainwaves than radio/

*FINISHER*
bitch about bars,but im the winner by far,like tiger prior to the Masters u not up to par/
u aint feeling me like blind people with no touch,if u was blingin with Gee's at a toddler age,you still couldnt get with young buck/


*NEWS FLASH* AS OF 3:18 P.M. THURSDAY MAY 13TH,I EDITED TO TAKE OUT THE EXPLANATION FOR PUNCHES IF YOU NEED AN EXPLANATION ASK ME ABOUT IT.

Vote Shadows for not explaining every one of his punches

that doesnt count.

If you’re so fucking hot, why nobody read what you wrote?
Face the facts: YOUR LAST BATTLE ONLY GOT ONE FUCKING VOTE!

HAHAHA
Kid's lyrics walk tall but he come to battle packing a twig
Check the list of his accomplishemnts's... they all there in his sig

HAHAHA
Running your mouth like you the fucking king of this game
Vernacularly Challenged… kid your retardation got its own name
UP TO HERE THIS WAS ALL HOT,HAD ME LAUGHIN YO......

The sad part is, winning this battle will only take half the effort
… Getting people to read your shit and vote - that’s the F-er
WEAK

Kid you ain’t no Shakespeare, so quit all this damn fussing
Shit, bragging about your talent… is Much Ado About Nothing
UMM...SHAKESPEARE LINES DONT BELONG IN BATTLES,GOOD WORDPLAY I GUESS BUT I DONT THINK IT WAS HARD HITTING

Copped your name from the Vietcong, I’m just spreading the word
That just like them... your album is never seen or heard
WEAK
Thought you had talent? Well clearly been mislead
Kid's rhymes dropped his tape...
...and signed up with Weight Watchers instead
UMM...DIDNT LIKE IT......U WORDED IT ALL WRONG...I GET THE CONCEPT U JUST DIDNT KNOW WHAT TO DO WITH IT

Thinking you survive this shit? Hardly
Kid’s profile repping a dead crew*

… and he still couldn’t the life of the party
AGAIN,U COULD'VE HIT HIM WAYYYY HARDER BUT U DIDNT WORD THIS RIGHT MAN...........







I stay in the light,just outta the *Shadows Edge*/
he sendin me feminine slow flow,why yall got me to battle sledge/
WEAK OPENER I THINK
i'll ruin ya ear drums,so that it'll be a *headphone murder*/
VC run tracks more lengths than the transcontinental merger/
BOASTING LINES DONT HIT HARD LIKE PUNCHES DIRECTED AT UR OPPONENT......FIRST LINE COULD'VE BEEN BETTER

dwelling on the past,just look to the futurah(future)/
you'll see the barrel,5 seconds ago,it was 3 seconds to *shoot ya*/
HMMM OK NOT TOO INTO GUN LINES


notice the limit is 16 bars,if u count that's up to 32 lines/
wont need that many ,few bars better than all of yours combined/
OK I GUESS BUT DIDNT HIT THAT HARD

12-9,record is worse than mine divide its only 4-3/
mines is 5-2,shows see why you cant beat VC/
AIGHT ITS PERSONAL,BUT IT DIDNT HIT THAT HARD TO ME

same seven battle in equivalent to ratio/
this bitch got more *frequent*ly disrupted brainwaves than radio/
DIDNT FEEL IT MAN

*FINISHER*
bitch about bars,but im the winner by far,like tiger prior to the Masters u not up to par/
u aint feeling me like blind people with no touch,if u was blingin with Gee's at a toddler age,you still couldnt get with young buck/
DIDNT LIKE IT MAN........THE LAST BAR WAS WAY TOO LONG


UMMM...AIGHT.....SHADOW UR FIRST 3 BARS MADE ME LAUGH......THEY WERENT BLOW ME AWAY HOT,BUT THEY WERE STRAIGHT.....UMMM..VC SORRY DAWG I WASNT REALLY FEELIN UR VERSE THAT MUCH....UR STUFF WAS PERSONAL BUT NOTHIN REALLY HIT THAT HARD.....CALCULATING THE RATIO OF UR BATTLES VS HIS,IT JUST DIDNT DO IT FOR ME.........UM...YEA SO VOTE FOR SHADOW

Blah... native explain that vote better... 1-0 me.

Aiyo...

I'ma Have To Give This To Shawdows Edge, His Punches Were Harder Felt. Both Had Decent Flows , But VC's Punhces and Metas Weren't ALl That Nice. Neither Of You Had Any Mulits...But Fasho...Shadows Wins With Better Punches.

HIT UP THE CHAMPIONSHIP BATTLE.

Good Drop To Both Of You, Stay Dope You Two.

~R~

good battle.. cool.cool i respect the votes... maybe we shoudl go at it again when i got more time on my hands....it's good kid.. we basically both gon be 3-1 now

end up with more competition for the bette now... good job R.....how u been latin...?? wut people think about doing lyrical championship tag battles...

i want to put this lil "beef" and anguish me and shadows got and use that agasint other people...how bout it.. tag partner shadows?

^ no. i dont do tag anymore... didn't like it all that much first time.

Shadow came with a lot more punches that actually hit. VC didn't really have that many punches at all. He seemed to try and glorify himself more than put down his opponent. I think that is where he lost....

Vote - Shadow

v/shadows edge because it sucked much less

This battle was real tight even though VC you could have worded your stuff better bro I mean i felt where you was going wit it but just could've been better

breakdown for shadow's edge:

flow:nice job nothing too complex i'd of liked to see more internal rhyming though 7/10

volcab:pretty good nothing too amazing though 7/10

punches:some nice lines for the msot part real personal best line i thought,"If you’re so fucking hot, why nobody read what you wrote?Face the facts: YOUR LAST BATTLE ONLY GOT ONE FUCKING VOTE!" nice job 7/10

overall:21/30

breakdown for VC:

flow:wasn't quite working on the same level as shadow your lines were streched out a bit in spots and wasn't really any internal rhyming to help it 6/10

volcab:good job no problems here 7/10

punches:a couple of nice lines the big problem was the amount of them there wasn't alot of concrete lines directed right for shadow best line,"I stay in the light,just outta the *Shadows Edge*/" nice name flip 6/10

overall:19/30

vote--good battle one of the better ones of the week but my vote is for shadow's edge

Vote goes to Shadow's Edge

Why? Much better punches without the gay n00b structure (all the // and whatnot)...easy battle to call. Basically, Shadow was direct and VC...well, i had no idea what he was trying to say...or why he thought it mattered and could belittle his opponent.

5-0 shadow's edge wins