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$$upreme Vs. Gambino
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I'm predicting a K.o but we'll see how long this 'spar-lasts'~
So watch as i leave this kids "hood" smashed like a 'CAR-CRASH'// dope? your not at 'All-black' so 'pause-that'~ cuz in every verse your like dumb math students known to drop a bad 'BAR...GRAFF'//(graph) Go ahead form a crew i'll 'melt-your-team'~ I aint feeling this rappa(wrapper) like fat chicks wit no 'SELF-ESTEEM'~ yeah i'm letting every 'bar-cram-ya'~ cuz it's obvious your a young buck tryna go pro but can't fill the 'LARGE-STANDARDS'~ Set the fire while i get this 'pig-hooked'~ when it comes to lines it's a fact that Gambino's simple like little 'KID'S-BOOKS'~ And we know you cant compete wit 'weak-shit'~ so stick to text n do like people with halitosis just remain 'SPEECHLESS'~ An even in text you still cant 'beat-this'~ so be honest getting agressive with vegetables is the only time you'll leave a 'BEET-RIPPED'~ After this verse Gambino's hearts is gonna be racin~ only time you'll say that you 'won'(one) is after a 'CONVERSATION'~ |
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hey look this cats famous....we could never stop those sale's... cause he's know world wide......in drive thru's at taco bell... ("would you like your taco regular or supreme") I know your gonna steal my punches...so here you can have it... cause he's faker than a gay guy in church...a spirtual faggot?.. and dog your styles bummy......so in life you git no perps... see I called your style a bum^....so in life it never works... your verse is simplistic, wack....and no it cant be saved... look! at the punch in your sig...cause even that was played... herb!, he wanted to bite my lines and forgot he was going first... so then he started typing shit up...and relized he had no verse... dog dont try and git people to read your shit by typing it bold.... .....come on....please.... and how can you say i'm not black...... have you been to memmber mugshots..... look at gambino's pic.... and you said ten line(5 bars) and you went over.... or you have the most extended punches in history...... any ways....... one love...... |
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can!!!!!!!!! we!!!!!!! please!!!!!!!! git!!!!!!!! some!!!!!!!!!!!! votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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winner $$UPREME
tight line like flow good punches opener and presonals Gambino didn't like style or flow vote please: A.K.A. vs d-bate |
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this was a nice battle
supreme-fix your structure dont space your bars and get rid of the ~'s they are for newbs......u have some potential i liked some of your punches they were witty and hard hitting.......good verse gambino-your opener was dope but u went down hill after that......u need to work on consistancy because that is why u lost this battle........make every bar as hard hitting as your opener and u will be tight.......u got out punched in this battle v/supreme |
What is it? do you not understand my punches?
this site's startin to piss me off......... its like if i gotta decerate my verse's with bold letters or stars for niggas to really read my shit.......... its like i gotta use a bunch of played lines for cats to feal my shit......... or use over extended punches and shit................. come on this really startin' to piss me off.......... one love...........i'm out.......... |
ok i gotta say this was a lopsided battle and gambino im hearin ya
seems like whoever the one that bolds there shit all of a sudden becomes the winner like its pretty or something reason why it was lopsided was first supreme had way streeeeeeeetched lines and if yall really read his metaz they didn t pertain to anything in this freekin battle i mean it looks to me as if some HEAVY dickriding is goin on here gambino coulda had some harder punches backed up by better metaz but format and werdplay went to em hands down i really dont understand why people go for that bold my shit explain everyline shit anyways personally im offended when catts do it "like wtf i cant read now or some shit" V-Gambino <yall fools need ta stop the dickridin on the realz><-----voterz |
yo that woz a tight battle. it woz close too, in every way. i thought gambino came harder and woz a touch better (punches). good battle n props 2 both of ya. juz keep doing wot chu doing. really close
vote = gambino |
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aight check it
$$UPREME flow-6/10 wordusage-7/10 vocab-7/10 punchlines-6/10 creativity-7/10 opener-6/10 closer-6/10 comment-dogg ive seen betta of you... fav/line-aww do i have to...NAHHH Gambino- flow-8/10 wordusage-4/10 vocab-5/10 punchlines-5/10 creativity-6/10 opener-4/10 closer-6/10 comment-ive seen better of you too i thought you were hott shitt ya know...just elevate a bit fav/line-nahhh v/supreme Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
supreme wins!!! gambino is wack an cant barely rhyme sometimes. supreme wins people!!!
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yo sik sik i like his punchlines so uh come harder next time but my vote goes to - supreme
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flow- supreme
punchlines- supreme personals-gambino meta4's- supreme vote- supreme good battle ya'lll |
aight here it is on the real
Gamby= yo shit was kleen lovin the taco/supreme line you had good structure and good punces but i didnt seen enuf comin at it good battle you had some metas and good personals like i said The taco/supreme one........aight wun Preme= you had good personals some multis but from what i can see your shit was mostly punches but i liked it you came wit a hard flow you need to work on yo shit a lil more thow but i think ya took this one i was just feelin ya shit a lil more....aight wun |
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$$upreme nice opener need improvemment
I'm predicting a K.o but we'll see how long this 'spar-lasts'~ So watch as i leave this kids "hood" smashed like a 'CAR-CRASH'// Best line: yeah i'm letting every 'bar-cram-ya'~ cuz it's obvious your a young buck tryna go pro but can't fill the 'LARGE-STANDARDS'~ $$upreme you flow is nice but you need to get more of a variety of your versus like different structure besides punch after punch getting kinda boring even though you got strong punches try to collaborate your skills and evolve more styles but you have improved deeply props given keep elevatin......overall 8.5/10 Gambino: Didnt really see anything special or interesting in ur flowz the taco bell line was kinda cheezy and typical. and ur punches were kinda personal but they werent that strong nothing really wrong with ur structure just need to develop on ur punches and attacking the emcee to the heart and weak points iiight but keep elevatin nice battle just take it as experience....... overall i give you a 7/10 VOTE: SUPREME |
Supreme came harder here all round, better punches more creative, better structure and flow which just adds to the punches. Gambino the taco bell opener was weak, you had a couple good punches but he came to hard for ya. Supreme you need to devolop on your flow your verse is fine but a little choppy.
Vote= $$upreme |
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