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*da Best Femcee*
....let me exsplain myself
Redirect your vision to *enhanced mode*SO i can disect my lyrical prison until my rhymes *run cold*/ once God Granted me permission to force you to give me my recognition I incerted my own incision *and shadered the mold*//1 DIS FEMCEE IS WITH OUT QUESTION OR SECOND GUESSING SOMETHING LIKE *:ABSATRUTHLY:*/ CALL ME YA LOCAL DENTIST CUZ MY VOCALS LEAVE YOU *UN~TOOTH~LY//2 YO I was flowing EVEN BEFORE I WAS A FETUS/ I WAS freestyling LIKE CASSIDY THROUGH MY MOMS VAGINAL CAVITY *SCREAMING THAT I WAS THE CLEANEST*//3 FEMCEE'S love to repeat this~IM INFLUENTIAL with or with out a PENCIL/ I SAY IT ONCE AGAIN WITH OUT A OUNCE OF SIN *IM THE DA BEST FEMCEE STENCIL*//4 SO *TRACE ME*~LYRCALLY MENTALLY AND PHYSICALLY YOU COULDN'T *FACE ME*~I LOOK PAST YOUR AFTERMATH WHEN YOU TRY TO *PHASE ME*~GIVE ME CREDIT CUZ EVEN WITH UR EDIT BUTTON YOU COULDN'T *ERASE ME*~EVEN IF YOU STAND IN FRONT OF MY WRITTING HAND YOU AND BAND MY FURTHER RAPS MY BEING IS HERE AS A TRAP *YOU CAN'T REPLACE ME*//5 DA BEST FEMCEE=SpokenBluntly |
good but ur not the best femcee
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line 5 is to streched
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That shit was hot, and u the best femcee in my eyes (ma), stay up!!!!!
Favorite bar: DIS FEMCEE IS WITH OUT QUESTION OR SECOND GUESSING SOMETHING LIKE *:ABSATRUTHLY:*/ CALL ME YA LOCAL DENTIST CUZ MY VOCALS LEAVE YOU *UN~TOOTH~LY//2 |
was alright... not the best i've seen out of the femcees though.
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LOL ruffling some feathers I see.. (loveing it) thanks for ur replys!!!
sb is uppin!! |
ok i think that t-lite is the femcee with the most potemtial give her at least 5 battles and she'll be hott
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i liked the way the power came alive
it was good; |
yo im not trying to say im better than any one this is my opinion of myself lol me and t-lite ...i don't think it's comparable cuz it's 2 tottally different styles...but hey thanks for da upps keep em coming *one*
SB |
it was aight but ive heard femcees come harder than that ya punches wasnt the best but it was aight 1 love live life
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yo thanks for da replies..imma do a follow up freestyle to this one today...be looking for it lol...*UPPS*
SB...(Kiss da SKY) |
t-lite??? ((LolZ))...no hate cuz ive noticed she is in the same crew with me on another site but she is not the best....spoken this was hot...will a peer give fedback atleast...and i havent seen any femcee on this site come nyce yet so stay up SPOKENBLUNTLY(we all no who the best is though LoLz)
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best femcee hahahaha.......thats some poetry shit................wack
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lol I advise YOU to read my other drop called *ANY QUESTIONS* but thanks for ur opinion it's greatly appreciated....lol STILL UPPIN *ONE YASELF EASY*
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actually that was nothing like a poem....lol...ive seen her name around her i noticed she got a lot of mouth but whateva...t-lite on just spit we in the same crew wit all mind...and i was saying your nice but not the best...so stay up n hit me up cuz i actually lost the link to that site...and if you not postin there i might not cuz its not jumpin over there so holla t lite and stay up spoken
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It Was "Safe" .. Alright SpokenBluntly' .. You have Potential!!!! No Doubt!!
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u see^^i thank you and this is not even my drop for the simple fact that you show love to other femcees...its already crazy to gain respect with all the males ...but to have females hatin is ridiculous and you gave feedback and told what u felt not just wack, yall need to give what ppl can improve on na mean so much respect to you disaster
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No Doubt!! ... Lemme Hit Diss Up One More Time!!
I Say It Was A Nice Peice.... You Could Improve On Your Structure, And Verse Though!!!.. It Was Kind Of Off Balance No Hate Just A Peice Of Advice!!!! Work On Your Vocabulary' But Asides From That!! It Looks Like You Improving!! Just Need To Elevate Some' And From There On Everything Is A Go!! BabeGyal !! Keep Your Head Up!!!.. And Stay ^ -Out- |
lol thanks for ur advice...but i won't change my structure at all...that's a signature style..and I won't change it but ur other opinions was good...this was basically to see if any femcee's would call me out.....****.....lol UPPIN
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Sho' Ill Call You Out!
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Let it be said Let it be done--set it up--spit--and i'll respond....*OUT*
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some hot shit homie
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nice looking out *UPPIN*
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no thanks.....
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god damn ill give feedback
ok ur bars r stretched and uneven as fuck ur flow was off a lil in resulkt of the structure ur lines r played dont hit very hard but r ok ur vocab could use a lil work but is ok and im not hatin thats my opinion that u need elevation ur not the best lk is better im better youngstar was better and i dont no who t lite is |
Umm...this needs a little betta structure.
I say umm interesting piece. Could be done betta. Overall 6/10. Return Fav: Tittle: For The Love Of Womens by Me & LoT |
lol well hey some think im better...some think im not..thats the way i like it..but thanks for ur replys i can work on vocab..but im not a "real net emcee" i don't try to use "big words" to make my spits seem "elevated"--in a real freestyle..i won't work lol and the structure ain't changing either..but hey i'll take ur suggestions in consideration...and ayo im still waiting for ol girl to set up the battle..lmao GET AT ME
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Seemed pretty cool to me
The flow fell at times. But, in all actuality I cant really say that cuz i dont know what flow you had in mind. The vocab was good. Work on multies a little and you should be fine. I must say you're not the best...but you not far from it, ma! Keep doin' you :) |
damn ma...it's rare for me to respect another femcee (ask lady lyrical) but that's exactly the feed back i was looking for...YO THANKS FOR DA PROPS and drop something so i can see ya style *uppin*
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dat woz heavy, keep rollin, oi fuck u middle weight fuckin wanka, it was some heavy shit.......12 yr old wanka
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i hope u aint talkin bout me.......and who is good ol gal u're waitin on to battle u?
i sure hope that shit aint directed at me kids.....cuz its bout to get ugly |
lol this chick her is a trip yo ma i was directing any thing out rite lol..every diss i type in a ketstyle is subliminal meaning u can take it to da heart if u want..but yo don't bring that beef in my thread..im asking ya..take it somewhere else that's childish *one yaself*
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just askin if u were callin ME out.....cuz u were callin out someone,n u aint say no name.....
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lol yo on the reals naw i didn't really notice any of ur post so i wouldn't have called u out cha know.. actually disaterpiece called me out...chill out ma..*one yaself*
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