eric89 Vs 20 GraND
 

Ight u spit first , 10 bars min
no crew votes, no dickriding, no Pming ppl to vote for ya,

Explained votes only!!, Holla

Ight spit man GL

Yo, go ahead and spit bro

yo dude fuck the rules jus 10 lines, i spit first, no crew votes, and no pming people to vote for ya. aight

wow, those r the same rulz i just said... anywayz just spit yo

yo ill spit at ya in like 10 minutes cuz i just lost all of my battle and i was like halfway done cuz i acadentaly clicked something so hold on aight

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aight

yo y u gonna try battlin me when u jus a rookie
u gonna plain out crumble like an oreo cookie
ut ohh someones chokin under all the heat
ima chew u up and spit u out like a lion does to raw meat
how u expect to get any votes on this battle
unless u ride someones dick like a horse and a sattle
wow this is not even a challenge
cuz when people hear ur spit it makes them wanna cringe
ur spits are worse then fucking fingernails on a blackboard
when famous rappers hear your spit they be like omg im fuckin board

Its like a dentist when I spit, leave ur mouth open in awww//
You gonna be like Kanye West after I jack u in da Jaw//
I got da flow cuz i spit fire till u crispy//
The only time u flow is when u take a pee//
Man if u were "stoned" u still couldnt "rock" da mic//
Bitch u better start praying Cuz Im GodLike//
You cant handle this like a car with out a steering wheel//
Your a fuckin "fruit", only u dont have "appeal"// (<--- get it, a peel)
My rhymes are so tight that they leave u breathless between//
You syphon rhymes out of a rappers car like it was lyrical gasoline//

Holla, Good Job

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Yo Uppin For Votes

Eric

Punches 7/10
Flowz 8/10

20

Punches 9/10
Flowz 9/10


U Know Who Won! 20 Had Some Good Punches// I Liked When U Said Bout Kayne West Jaw// Lol Good Shit Homie

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20 GraND your steppin up. you spit a nice verse. nice punches and multi's. you overpowered the pther guy. his verse was weak. but both of you can step up.

vte=20 GraND

20 Grand - Good spit man, you had some good flow and your punches were hard.

Best Line - You cant handle this like a car with out a steering wheel//
Your a fuckin "fruit", only u dont have "appeal"// (<--- get it, a peel)

Worst Line - I got da flow cuz i spit fire till u crispy//
The only time u flow is when u take a pee//

Eric - Good spit man, you had some good flow goin on.. but your punches were played.

Best Line - ur spits are worse then fucking fingernails on a blackboard
when famous rappers hear your spit they be like omg im fuckin board

Worst Line - wow this is not even a challenge
cuz when people hear ur spit it makes them wanna cringe

OVERALL - Alright battle but I GOTTA give this to 20 for better punches and his flow was better. Eric your punches were iight but mostly played.. you also flowed well.. just work on your creativite.

VOTE - 20 Grand

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UppN, thnx for all the votes so far yo

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UppN fo some votes yo

Yo eric good spit its a solid rhyme but u do need to practice on some vocab. so pick up a dictionary so it can learn ya. Yo 20 you really need to work on flow you go from one subject to another to quick try to make it go to geather better.

I Vote: Eric

20 grand
good spit nice flow good punches you kept it flowing real good
it was maybe one of ur best, u did good real good

favorite line:
You cant handle this like a car with out a steering wheel//
Your a fuckin "fruit", only u dont have "appeal"// (<--- get it, a peel)
that was pretty hott
areas u need inprove ment on::::::::::::
multies meta4's and similies
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u had and ok spit eric 89
but it didnt keep me intrested it was kinda wack no offense
u had ok punches they were kinda childish
u had ok structure
and the flow was terribly off
areas u need improvement on:
punches and structure and the structure will really help ur flow
bets line:ut ohh someones chokin under all the heat
ima chew u up and spit u out like a lion does to raw meat
u liked it cuz u used a similie
but my vote swings the way of 20 grand

damn eric nice spit
20 grand you wer pretty good to

eric best line
how u expect to get any votes on this battle
unless u ride someones dick like a horse and a sattle

eric-7.5/10
20 grand 7/10

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thanks luke uppin still

it was close but eric got my vote in the end

eric6.5/10
20grand6/10

rvote 20 return da favor

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UppN, Plz explain votes holla..

UppN yo

Stillz UppN Yo

UppN, Stillz Yo

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UppN

2o grand:

Best line:
You cant handle this like a car with out a steering wheel//
Your a fuckin "fruit", only u dont have "appeal"//

Worst line:
I got da flow cuz i spit fire till u crispy//
The only time u flow is when u take a pee//

(agreeing with GKilla)

Eric:

Best line:
ur spits are worse then fucking fingernails on a blackboard
when famous rappers hear your spit they be like omg im fuckin board

Worst line:
how u expect to get any votes on this battle
unless u ride someones dick like a horse and a sattle

eric89 you should come up with some better punches, I find your current ones quite boring.

Vote: 20 grand. simply for harder punches and more creativity

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also eric took this also..He had the punches more
structure ws aight but everything else was the same for both.......Both
work on a few things and elevate

Grand-need to work on punches more and personals
and you will be aight....

v/eric

20 spit a nice verse had had punches with some creativity, eric you need to get more creative with your punches man, they seem herbish. both of you had nice wordplay 20's was a bit nicer and you both had good flow. Becuae 20's punches hit harder this battle goes to him.