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VALOR ~vs~ denver max
10-16 lines
no feeding or recycling no hate,crew,or d/r votes blind spit 45 minutes g'luck |
............checkin in..............
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yo yo yo. i'm checking like bobby orr.-----------------------------------
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you couldn't look tough if you had a million plastic surgeries.
you say you're not gay, you say pussy sparks your allergies. wait wait wait, hold on, it just occurred to me. ladies first bitch, where's my common courtesy? is it clear to you? it's pretty clear to me you couldn't get attention if you had HIV. i wish this was hard, but i do this shit so easily i'm writing this shit while i got bitches pleasin' me. bitch dont be teasin' me it's about time, i gotta be peacin' G. |
yo im battling this herb named denver max......
this fool's 0-5 and hes wack its a fact........ its decent skills and thought process that he lack's...... Quote:
askin me in bitch slapped what merk means...he needs to be slapped..... he has a fucked up structure with lines that over lap..... with played and choppy lines you cannot say this cat was born to rap..... im gonna hit this coward with harder punches than warren sapp...... oh no hes cool tryin to checkin like bobby orr........ well by checkin in you just got ur self sent to the morg.... send ya to hell where you''ll be torchured because im the lord...... my punches and sexy ryme scheme goin right through you like a sword..... ~~(ending it like this)~~ sittin here a listening to ur extremely played concepts i cannot afford..... battling you just got me 45 minutes of being so damn bored...... done |
but seriously, what is merk short for?????????????
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merk = beat, as in you both just merked yourselves. denver wins for not taking himself seriously at least... honestly you can't tell me either of you spent more than 5 minutes on your verses.
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IGNORE the one above...
merk = beat, as in you both just merked yourselves. denver wins for not taking himself seriously at least, and his verse being funny. other dude, you tried and failed. ... honestly you can't tell me either of you spent more than 5 minutes on your verses. |
damn
aight ta break it down
ya both sucked, ta be honest, shadow edge got a good point even if his vote probly gonna get taken off, my rapper gotta eat though, i just made him and he already bout ta die, aint even battled nobody that shits fucked up anyway valor u suck, damn, if my rapper wasn't starving to death... yo im battling this herb named denver max...... this fool's 0-5 and hes wack its a fact........ right there, the opener, supposed to be one of your strongest lines i lost intrest, it sucked, u suck, but i already read the other guy so i read yours too no creativity, throwin a few names in dont make a verse good, n just cause he completly unaware of the terminology of the times dont make you any less bad, you shouldn't have even said that shit cause gettin merked by someone who don't know what merked means is just bad for business denver max- aight ur shit was funny at least, i read it almost willingly, and u won the coin flip, structure could use a little work but it ain't stretched and horrible like the other guys, ur closer was weak opener aight, u had some alright concepts in yours at least vote- denver max |
yeah i'm drunk too so nah i dont even remember what i was gonna say no disrespect to, but fuck no disrespect i bet i disrespected if i even said somethin here and fuck ya'll motherfuckers bitch assfuckin.. yo ima go smoke peace
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yes this guy took the words right out of my mouth and broke it down Denver Max got this Valor you need to elevate pz |
vote on this isht!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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vote on this isht!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Wow All Yall Are Herbs....yall All Goin On My Black List.............
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ok not a very good battle you both need to elevate
dnever max... you need to come with more punches and personals not being tuff shit thats played and hit him where it hurts your flow is medioacre you need to work on that a little bit... valor... ok..not a great verse but you had some personals where denver lacked thats how you got the upper hand neverthe less your flow was off you need ot work on that two... your both need alot of elevation... vote valor hit up my battles links in da sig |
vote denver max...for some funny SHIT...this kids hilarious....valor sucks...he's terrible...
he's only 0 and 5 because no one's smart enough to get his rhymes...so this time he stupid them up for you guys...and merked this bitch... |
valor?, u did good man, i'm da only true person in this poll
as everyone should know, u win battles by flow and blows and denver max had none of that since he's ahead on votes don't count it as a lost if u lose cauze he didn't do blows 4 shit valor, jsut 2 let u know those r dickridaz that know denver max, i mean one guy here said he wins cauze he's funny fuck is that, i did that once and i lost by a KO, if u lost this battle, u didn't u did good but i'm only 1 person who can put a vote so u need more people and denver max calls his crew 2 help win anyways, my votes opener...valor flow...valor blows...valor lyricism...valor closer...valor congratualations 2 denver, battle like a man, don |
you're an idiot godfaggot...ahahha calling people don...do you even know what that means you pussy
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^^^hate vote bitch
oh yea like acomplishment said i had personels...that easily gives me the edge so how im loosing to a herb.... i dont know uppin number 3 |
that waz a weak battle, denver waz wack to me
fuck if it's funny valor u had blows and denver had none he wa just rappin bout a girl pleasin him, so what BATTLE BITCH rating opener-valor flow-valor blow-valor struture-valor close-valor valor get this battle work till u die, denver GOT IT? |
bad battle, both of you's need 2 work hard
denver waz weak, he had shit blows valor had some but didn't hit hard but it's harder blows then none (denver) open:valor close:valor Struture:valor personals:valor valor wins denver need 2 work harder, man and it's true what everybody says |
[QUOTE=accomplishment]ok not a very good battle you both need to elevate
dnever max... you need to come with more punches and personals not being tuff shit thats played and hit him where it hurts your flow is medioacre you need to work on that a little bit... valor... ok..not a great verse but you had some personals where denver lacked thats how you got the upper hand neverthe less your flow was off you need ot work on that two... your both need alot of elevation... vote valor basically exactly what he said but this battle should be closed regardless jpoll and denver max have the same ips votin on himslef it looks like and this dumb fuck above me voted for valor twice since him an infamous j have the same ips |
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