FreSh EmCee VS Blackwell
 

normal house rules (no biting,d/r etc).
10 lines
both of us check in and i'll spit first
gud luck

ok cool i will spit 2moro aint got time rite now, checkin in..

ok actually i will spit in bout half n hour i will check in then

aiight man...im bit bz at tha moment i'll get it done by 2day though.

eh dawg i cant spit 2day..got soo much work 2 do..i'll definetly get bak at this 2morrow...if u wanna spit then spit but i'll spit 2morrow
sorry man..something came up

my teeth are the razors n my tounge rips the "letters"/
n u the piece o paper bout to get ripped by the "shredders"/
I dun take disrespect very nicely but i'll settle these "vendettas"/
scared?.. u came unprepared coz gun be spitting ya last "letters"/
like a dog ima "bite- him, bound to "strike-him "lightning "thunder"/
u a rap "blunder", dig a grave for u n bury u down "under"/
u runnin a lyrical train track n guna become a 1-"under"/
n since when was it they started using dawg in "australia"/
thats as bad as sum1 sayin homie when they really in "malaysia"/
u just correlating trying to be n american thinkin u a "psycho"/
ya wack u should be runnin wit kids just like "michael-jacko"/


explanations... in bar 6 where it says bury ya down under, down under is what they call australia n he from australia s it links.

and in bar 7 at the end it says a 1 under which is wot they call it wen u go under a train.

hurry up n spit i want yours down by the end of the day,peace.

yeh man i shud definietly hav time 2 do it 2day, i woz juz bz yesterday
i'll post soon.

Your a rookie on this board and your 'Cumming' to 'Spit' ~1~
'Fuck' what you 'Said', I mean i'll nail ya 'Tongue' to ya 'Dick' ~2~
If you want to battle me, you gotta see things 'Clearer' ~3~
I'll put my 'Initials' on your forehead so u see 'BS' in the 'Mirror' ~4~
Ya rhymes be 'Feebleminded', tha 'Mental Incapacity' will comsume~ya ~5~
Like 'Jessica Simpson' thinking 'Chicken' woz tha same as 'Tuna' ~6~
To me ya rhymes be 'Irrelevent' so its my duty it 'Erase~it' ~7~
Im like the 'Jerry Springer Show' to ya rhymes, i juz totally 'Derange~it' ~8~
Wen im through with u, ur words will 'Come Out Aboral' ~9~
Like wen 'Cum' hits ya face while ur giving out 'Free Oral' ~10~

Explanation:
Line ~1~ : Like... coming to spit meaning coming to spit on the mic... but then its cumming to spit.. meaning you cummed in your mouth then spat it out
Line ~2~ : Like meaning, he is literally fucking what he is saying.. cos i speak from out of your mouth and he is fucking his mouth. The tongue to ya dick is self explanatory.
Line ~4~ : Ma initials are S.B. so backwards it B.S meaning bullshit, so he can see him being all bullshit everytime he looks in tha mirror

nice spit^^ get sum votes up in here i will go vote on sum battles to try n get sum votes for ours ite

yeh aiight, uppin for votes on this come on.................................[1]..........................

fresh takes this battle easily......blackwell u got murked cuz u didnt have any real solid punches all your punches were weak and u had no creativity what so ever....u both need to elevate and fresh take the ~'s out of your verse they are newbish

thanks dawg....uppin [2]

uppin fo mo votes dont sleep on this............[3]

uppin fo votes............................................. ....................................[4]

oh wow good battle guys but emcee took it all the way uhm hits hits were off good strong punches, better flow and structure he just took this one no offence but his skill seems to be a bit higher

winner emcee
vote back guys shifty fingers-vs-pimp rawb on the front lines really need the votes guys thnxs

uppin ppl come on maan get this closed.......................................[5]

ok fresh emcee took this...........his punches were harder
his verse woz easier 2 read.....structure woz good,i think blackwell woz bout6/10 in every area..but hes elevatin ok.jus need to cum harder blackwell,try rhymin more complicated words...up ya vocab

i like mcee`s flow..i felt it

ok ma vote fresh mc

No contest here really.... Fresh Emcee jus killed it... Better punches and W/P.... Blackkwell, your flow was good, but punches is what actually wins battles...

Do ya'll mind returning da favor and votin on my battle? Thanx... http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123993

VOTE=FRESH EMCEE

aiight rules say only 5 times allowed on uppin ma battle but this is ridiculous, get it closed come on one more vote

yo fresh took this hands down good effort by both but you could see the experience in fresh rymes just came a lil more complex for blackwell but im seeing blackwell gettin better but fresh took em with wordplay punches and rymesskill i suggest blackwell rematch em in a couple months then we see sumtin good battle
v-fresh