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Mc's Reaper 05-11-04 11:16 AM

Mc's Reaper =vs= JSmoove
 
10-20 lines
No: feeding, biting, hating, crew votes Unless Honest
Lets go, you spit first.

Mc's Reaper 05-11-04 11:26 AM

I'm checkin in and will be droppin shortly, like soon.

JSmoove 05-11-04 12:16 PM

Just got this...I will drop in a few minutes......

Mc's Reaper 05-11-04 12:36 PM

like *Preist Xcercism* the Demons-are-Rung..Jsmoove
known fa 'Speakin-in-Tounges'.. /
..Known to *WET YOU UP* When Placin ''Kids on LifeSupporters'
to Pump 'Semen-in-Lungs'.. //
And sorry I’m a lil ‘LATE’ but the only ‘DEAD-LINES’ I see...are
in the text-you-enter… /
Go ahead and say it…Wyn got skill while ya get ya
'head snapped back ', like a 'PEZ-dispenser'..!//
My hellish scam got this 'LOCKED' with a 'LATCH and KEY', /
Thought Boogie had some 'FIRE'...but still couldn't 'MATCH with Me'..!//

Outro:.
..Your unable to 'SEE ME' on records with a 'SCOPE' on the wax…
dawg you provokin attack,
Dawg…I’ll attack ya dome with rage…and INCINERATE ya like
the 'SMOKE from a STACK'…
I tell the truth by openin facts like your so 'FULL OF SHIT' that
You ‘CHOKE ON YOUR CRAP’..!!!

Mc's Reaper 05-11-04 02:11 PM

Lets get some votes RB I will return the favor, real nice!

JSmoove 05-11-04 02:12 PM

like stiff dicks im into you//
since pussy is on the menu--im serving you//
im sharp like blades, call me Ginsu*//
and u no need a bill for me to kill you like O-Ren** do//

my spit is venoumous like a cobra n black mamba mix//
i devour u whole n excrete wack rimes in my reptile shit//
im way to sick, and yure azz out like I turn my tricks***//
I murder weak foes, and won't be convict cause the glove**** won't fit//

You 'Reap' what you sow, now I got you diggin' your own grave//
and it's your lyrics I'll be harvesting, hence the shitty haze//
I'm ridiculous, as I get maticulous and R.I.P. you to little pieces//
I smell feces, no that's your bar thesis, man I can't believe this//

reapers suppose to bring death, but you bringing me to life//
like my sperm in the egg of your future wife--//
if you were the ocean, nothing you spit would ever make waves//
u b like jeep cherokee to me, Ima Escalade//

you battle me is like an icecube spitting at the sun//
you a chump, GUMP*****, now take off your braces and run//
next time you battle, you may need to bring your blade n gun//
you b like virgin and for props...grimster u get none//

*Ginsu---sharpest knives you can buy on tv
**O-Ren---ninja crime boss in Kill Bill by Quentin T.
***tricks---prostitutes, hos, sluts
****glove---used by O.J. to kill, but it would fit, so they had to acquit
*****GUMP---Forrest Gump movie

Mc's Reaper 05-11-04 02:14 PM

In my other battles that is cause this guy is a no show!! Gotta mark him.

JSmoove 05-11-04 03:04 PM

Uppin' --don't sleep peeps!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

JSmoove 05-11-04 04:00 PM

I need votes...UPPIN for real..........................

DeaDly RhymeZ 01 05-11-04 07:11 PM

Yo mc's reaper got the full wrap he ripped him Structure punches n rhymes

BREAK down

Mc's Reaper

Rhymes 7/10
Flow 8/10
Structure 8/10
Multis 7/10
30/40

Jsmoove
rhymes 6/10
Flow 6/10
Structure 5/10
multis 6/10
23/40

Real Thorough 05-11-04 08:54 PM

Ayo read.
Struc. - Reaper
Meta's - Reaper
Punches - Reaper
Rhyme Scheme - Reaper. Thats basically the fundamentals and reaper got em.
My vote stands clear. v/ Reaper.

DFrost 05-13-04 11:24 AM

aight ima go with jsmoove, reapers lines were too stretched and his flow was off. jsmoove ya came harder with punches, i followed your flow a lot better than reapers and liked the way you put a new spin on some played concepts
reapers suppose to bring death, but you bringing me to life//
like my sperm in the egg of your future wife--//
and personals
You 'Reap' what you sow, now I got you diggin' your own grave//
and it's your lyrics I'll be harvesting, hence the shitty haze//

vote jsmoove

JSmoove 05-13-04 11:48 AM

I wasn't gonna do this, but I'm uppin this one again...for votes!!!

LyricalMethod 05-13-04 11:59 AM

reaper nice verse. your punches were good and your multiples were aight. but smooth you took this battle over. your multiples were good, and so were your punches. you wrote a very good verse. nice flow and rhyme scheme. return the favor: Lyricalmethod vs. taken over

vote=Reaper

LyricalMethod 05-13-04 11:59 AM

i meant jsmooth my fault cuz, nor reaper. slipped my mind..............

DaCROZofHB 05-18-04 12:55 AM

i give this shit to jsmooth he had much more catchier punchlines, reaper stretched that shit way out

lyrical distruction 05-18-04 05:51 AM

smooth won with his nice verse and had the best punch lines, extreamly hot stuff from both of you. Smooth had the better consistant flow and the rymes were wild and captureing. Mc you did well but i think u underestemated a new RB. So im gonna give dis the smooth.

JSmoove 05-18-04 05:57 PM

UPPIN'....help me close this one out folks.........

JSmoove 05-27-04 11:27 AM

UPPIN this one just to close it out................

Big Kountry 05-27-04 11:30 AM

Mc's Reaper

Rhymes 4/10
Flow 4/10
Structure 4/10
Multis 7/10
21/40

Jsmoove
rhymes 7/10
Flow 6/10
Structure 5/10
multis 7/10
35/40

smooth just had better punches man peiod

return the favor

SLUT! 05-27-04 12:48 PM

Mc's Reaper

Rhymes 4/10
Flow 5/10
Structure 4/10
Multis 7/10
punches 5/10
25/50

Jsmoove
rhymes 7/10
Flow 6/10
Structure 7/10
multis 7/10
punches 6/10
33/50

v/jsmoove becuase he had better punches multis and everything elses.......reaper keep elevating though man

hit this up
http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...422#post1315422


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