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Mc's Reaper Vs. Jae Gutter
Aight..
5 Bars.. 10 Lines No Crew, D/r, Or Unexplained Votes... U Can Spit First.. It Dont Matter.... |
ok son i see u elevatin/
so u prepared more now 2 be eliminatin,// u da least of my worries n thats y u waited, in all 4 a reply,/ u a joke kid u bein humiliated why? coz u only truely respected wen u die,/ n u askin 4 death i can c it in ur eye, / u'll b 6ft uder afta 60ft high, coz u only elevatin if i hit u 2 da sky,// freefallin back down, coz wen u freesytlein u look like a 8:DD,(frown)/ u wanna be king well cum take my crown, // u set up n this mic'll put u back down, fall force of flames,/ ill scord u 2 char's for u fulse claims,/ Mc's Reaper, just for battlin me, you'll remeber my name// son quit playin games coz u set 2 lose! shit u lost,- u wanna be hot... kid u couldnt melt frost, wit da rhyme u froze,/ u like river ice u got no flowz, but u lookin like vanilla ice wit those clothes?,// my case closed no need 4 a eye witness, - i read ur rhyme n its clear u pre-write this.. bourt 2 weeks ago,/ b4 u realized quitein this shit was the way 2 go, / u a rank amature n u battle a pro...../ wen ur asked next time 2 partcipate n rap jus say NO! // coz u got nufin 2 offer so jus NO show..hoe!!!! |
Aight... imma jus key this shit now...
Touchin "THERMOSTATES" is the closest this guy ever gets to touchin a 'HEATA".. and tha only 'SHELLS' mc reaper gots are on 'TOP OF HIS ADIDAS!// Aint no comparing me to this loser... so jus relax... b4 u get clapped... cuz i aint talkin bout a 'CELTICS JERESY' when i make shots 'PERIECE YA BACK'// Im too nice... I spit my own rhymes.. So y u pasteing and copying for?... Talk hard when tha only 'JAIL' u seen was on 'MONOPLOY BOARDS!'// im raw & I spit so sick u'd think i'd have lung cancer... And u cant make a crowd 'STAND UP' like fat exotic dancerS// I murdered this kid.. killed him wit killa flow.. so sum1 call up tha morge... I 'SONNED' this nigga.. and im not even tha one who cut tha 'IMBILACAL CORD!'// AIGHT.. FOR THOSE WHO R SLO.... PUAL PEREICE PLAYS FOR THA CELTICS... SO HE WEARS THA JERSEY.. AND THA IMBILACAL CORD IS CUT BY THA FATHER OF THA CHILD.. SO I SAID I SONNED HIM BUT DIDNT CUT THA CORD... EVERYTHING ELSES IS EASY... IF U DONT GET IT DONT VOTE.... |
Nice drop kid, but yours seem to pre-written, you was bitin, but it wasn't off of me....???...so off who, I never even said anything about jail, shells, or none of that so dude.........you got me thinkin.
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This battle could have been the other way of round if Jae had of used his word play a lilk better that way his punches could have hit harder. And you got bad structure, fix that next time. But nice battle both dropped some nice ish on the real, but my vote goes to Mc's Reaper, just read his text, its more complex!
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this was a good battle but i think reaper just got it jae you verse was good but u didnt hit as hard as reaper did his punches went better with the flow of the verse better and to me thats what wins it. good battle though
vote = reaper |
both u fucks dont kno shit.. niether do u reaper.. i dont bite none of my shit.. and all of that was off tha top.. learn wat a battle is about.. punchlines.. this nigga had none.. both u fucks should jus quit cuz u dont kno shit bout rappin.. Talkin all that gangsta shit.. but i whipped my ass tissue thats harder then ya'll.. fall back.. can we get ppl who kno how to vote in hea..
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and unless can get proof that i bite.. then stfu.. stop swayin vote bitch
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o yea.. and i said.. 5 barz.. so u went over tha limit dick... slow ass nigga
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Damn.... I Been Ghost And Still Cant Get Any Votes... This Battle Was A Murder......smh
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My vote goes 2 Jae gutter...
flow:jae gutter Punches: Jae gutter Structre Mc's Personals: jae gutter vote goes 2 jae gutter had bettah punches den Mc's Mc's u need 2 work on ur wordplay u had elementry words 2 rhyme wit i think ma little 2 year old coulda had more advanced words iight ova all good battle erybody keep elevain ~1~ |
You know its funny cause you the only one that think so, but since yall like to ride eachother wont you go and vote on my new battles. UPPIN
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Flow- Reap'
Struc- reap Creat. - Reap Personals - Reap Meta's - Reap, its done man. |
I think gutter won this one becouse of his use of punches. no personals were really used but his style and punches more than made up for it/ Reaper has a good name, but that was all I like about him. His rymes were simple and unusable in actual battle or freestyle for that matter. Reap needs to go get a desk job and quit thinkin hes hot with those weak rymes yo.
V/ goes to Jae Gutter. also peep my Battle agains WillNova @t http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=128842 Honest votes only ya'll |
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okay..mc's reaper...that wasn't a good verse...I mean you rhymed..and had structure but thats about it..you had no personals at all..and barely any decent hitting punchlines out of 50 I'd give you a 5...you need to elevate a lot more
Im too nice... I spit my own rhymes.. So y u pasteing and copying for?... Talk hard when tha only 'JAIL' u seen was on 'MONOPLOY BOARDS!'// Jae, your verse flowed a lot more smoothly, was a lot shorter, had better structure, and had better personals and punches...not to mention that line was fairly clever...good verse...you got my vote |
i think reaper took dis no question.he had a more ellaborate stucture..better punches n personalls
v/mc reaper |
Jae gets my vote becuz i say that his punches was a little bit harder than Mc's..his flow was good..tha wordplay was nice...& tha structure was betta than Mc's..in my opinion i think Jae rip'd this kat folks :)..so Jae gets my vote....peace...................
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..........Uppin This Battle People..........
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Jae came more consistent with everything. He had weak shit, but they were enough to beat that other dude. Flow was wack from both sides though. And you 2 need to change the structure. Seriously. Anyhoo...
V/Jae Gutta |
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