pictureperfect2 vs. someone11
 

yo get yours up quick i'll have mine up in halfy
10 lines...........

aye yo check in too...........

checking in

sorry shit took so long i wanted a quick verse before i got picked up, but got picked up earlier than expected, but here it is


Can’t find this “someone” in any news page
Cuz Yo verse less stiring than pre-made cool-aid
yo I’ll beat ya spittin my worse put his punches in a google search
findings “no ONE” in his complete verse
i know yo tricks, he jus copies and clicks
kids who ride this guy’s dick can make it under a 2 inch clearance
cuz yo skills are low, like a river, but with no flow
take time when i rhyme best tolerate, cuz a punk should wait
for this finishing punch on this battle cuz it will punctuate.
heres sumin to remember
your lines couldn't out shine mine
if u rhymed during daylight saving time
and I was stuck in december
>>>>>>>>>>>>

done, finished, get yo shit up here so i can get my 5 votes right quick and win this

13 lines for you too ~

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I'm not even sure if that's an attempt at disrespect,
as a seasoned battlerapper it's worse than I'd expect.

Your lyrics were probably bought through 'mail-order'
containing more BS than a bull with a 'stomach-disorder'

Now onto your mother, but you've all heard this before..
She's the original crack ass whore
Gets on the floor, spreads all four, no-one's unwanted in that cheap store
She didn't think you through -- pictureperfect2
coming straight from the zoo -- wasn't wanted there too

This bitch is way off track, I'd say 100 thousand yards
Like a cerebral palsy wrack, building a house of cards *

p-perfect's number ONE on the 'ranking list in town'
or at least that's what he thought, when he 'held it upside down' ~

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* CP: A life-long condition that affects the communication between the brain and the muscles, causing a permanent state of uncoordinated movement and posturing.



Could we get some votes please

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Can’t find this “someone” in any news page
Cuz Yo verse less stiring than pre-made cool-aid
Good punch
yo I’ll beat ya spittin my worse put his punches in a google search
findings “no ONE” in his complete verse
this was alright
i know yo tricks, he jus copies and clicks
kids who ride this guy’s dick can make it under a 2 inch clearance
Ya ya its been done
cuz yo skills are low, like a river, but with no flow
Eh
take time when i rhyme best tolerate, cuz a punk should wait
for this finishing punch on this battle cuz it will punctuate.
What? Oh i see :huh:
heres sumin to remember
your lines couldn't out shine mine
if u rhymed during daylight saving time
and I was stuck in december
Nice closer


I'm not even sure if that's an attempt at disrespect,
as a seasoned battlerapper it's worse than I'd expect.
Good opening
Your lyrics were probably bought through 'mail-order'
containing more BS than a bull with a 'stomach-disorder'
eh its aiight
Now onto your mother, but you've all heard this before..
She's the original crack ass whore
Gets on the floor, spreads all four, no-one's unwanted in that cheap store
Stop hatin on da mommas
She didn't think you through -- pictureperfect2
coming straight from the zoo -- wasn't wanted there too
Ok punch
This bitch is way off track, I'd say 100 thousand yards
Like a cerebral palsy wrack, building a house of cards *
Nice punch
p-perfect's number ONE on the 'ranking list in town'
or at least that's what he thought, when he 'held it upside down' ~
Nice finish

Aiight the final
Picture-5/10
Someone-7/10

Return da favor
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123748

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Picture - Good spit man, liked your flow and your punches were hitten hard.

Best line - heres sumin to remember
your lines couldn't out shine mine
if u rhymed during daylight saving time
and I was stuck in december (niice finisher)

Worst Line - i know yo tricks, he jus copies and clicks
kids who ride this guy’s dick can make it under a 2 inch clearance

someone - Good spit man, Best I have seen from ya you came hard wit some good flow and good punches.

Best Line - Your lyrics were probably bought through 'mail-order'
containing more BS than a bull with a 'stomach-disorder'

Worst Line - Now onto your mother, but you've all heard this before..
She's the original crack ass whore
Gets on the floor, spreads all four, no-one's unwanted in that cheap store (played and simple)

OVERALL - Close battle here... but I gotta say Picture took this cuz his punches were just more creative. Someone man.. work on more creative shit and maybe some personals.. and you will be hard to beat.

VOTE - Picture

RETURN THE FAV
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123755

Thanks for the critism GKillaz05, I appreciate it.

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id have to say picture took it for haveing better punches, structure and creativity
my vote goes to pictureperfect

yo ok both vs were decently done ok flows were their and both had structure their were some use of multis but just by a bit picture takes it.

vote picture
return the fav shifty vs graphex
shifty-vs-pimp rawb
both of these are on the front lines please vote on them thnxs guys

NICE VERSE PICTURE. GOT MAD LOVE 4 YAH BUT THIS NEWBE MIGHT PULL THIS OFF. HERE'S WHY:

HIS PUNCHES WERE WAY BETTER THAN YOURS. IT LOOKS LIKE YOUR RUSHED. BUT ALL IN ALL NISE VERSE SOMEONE11. YOU SPIT A DIFFERENT VERSE. I GIVE YOU MY VOTE B/C YOU HAD HARDER HITTIN PUNCHES THAN PICTUREPERFECT. BUT YOU ALSO CAN STEP IT UP A LIL BIT. SOMEONE11 YOU HAD A BETTER STRUCTURE SINCE YOUR LAST BATTLE. KEEEP IT UP, PICTUREPERFECT STEP IT UP. RETURN THE FAVA:http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=122706

VOTE=SOMEONE11

upppin nice explained votes keep 'em comin, and drop a link

agree^^^

Your lyrics were probably bought through 'mail-order'
containing more BS than a bull with a 'stomach-disorder'

This is the only line outta both verses that even stood out at all, ANd really I dont know how the hell you come up with 13 lines? just doesnt make sense

Pictureperfect....
your lines were too inconsistent, some long as hell some hella short...not sure whats up with that..made it kinda hard to catch ya flow...

Vote= someone

props to both.. close battle.

First off I'll say this was a pretty decent battle... You both a good flow, and you both had some structure--- I really liked pictures closing lines alot they flowed in every direction a couple punches dropped and some metaphor action insued. However I think Someones verse just had more pop through the whole verse.... His punches weren't super solid but they worked well enough I think in this battle.

I give Picture a 6 Out of 10 and Ima give Someone a 6.75 outta 10.... VOTE=Someone