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Gambino VS XxToXiCXxVeRbZ
15 To 20 Lines
No D/r Votes No Unexplain Votes No Crew Votes No Feeding I'll Spit 1st |
Ay yo Vote on ma battle against lyrical Demon 04 i'll return da favor
how da hell do people vote fo him instead of me??? |
yo when you gonna spit homie..............................
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bringin' shame to GAMBINO// fuck you up so bad you change your name to
nympho// as I rearrange your brain and temple// for spittin' lyrics that are plain and simple//(1) I'll have you chokin' soon like asthmatics smokin' shrooms// and discard your body parts with open wounds in broken tombs(2)// the BATTLE is strictly mine// battle TOXIC and get lynched with a prickly vine// your rhymes suck more than two faggots havin' sex in the sixty nine(3)// you ain't tough cuz you molest gay men// I make U LOOK LIKE DEM HOMELESS KIDZ// lung collapse and chest cave in// causin' so many nightmares even Wes 'cravin(4)'// I wreck emcees neck and knees//reducin' life expectancies// so don't stand close or next to me// cuz battlin' TOXIC is deadly like an overdose of ecstasy// you're a prom queen going against a professional// fuck wit' TOXIC ( Ha ha ha) and get removed like one of Tom Green's testicles(5)// son you ain't ILL LIKE DA SATAN cuz you was raped by an aids paitent// your freestyle is cheap, it don't make cents// TOXIC causin' the phony to fail// you're lyrically weak, all bony 'n frail// you ain't got enough rhymes just like Eve ain't got enough hair for a pony tail// your rhymes are even soft to gays// thinkin' you lyrically sick cuz you had a cough for days// GAMBINO U GOING TO MY GRAVE// DID U KNOW U JUST GOT TOXICATED |
whats good.............
you winning! ha! thats obsurd....your wack.....and thats word.... cause the only thing you elevated was from a newb to a herb... dog you must be dumb! and thats the truth so your....bound to cry... so dont be mad! that your verse proves you can only count to five... (ha! ha! ha!) look at how many bars he counted^^^ you got dreams of fame but your played and you bite, so i want lines back... OH YEAH!......your on the road to riches!...but your car got side tracked... you have simple rhymes, bad stucher, and you really lack punches... so right now your as aggravated as fat kids with no lunches... you think your hot but your wack and in battles no one fears you... so toxic your knocking on def doors....and dog no one hears you... your names toxic verbz so in this line...you cant say that I'm a liar... cause dog toxins can only burn.......but they never have any fire... see your rhymes are like your avatar so dog you cant hack it..... cause your avatar's standard but custom....you dont have it... yo its one line short......... cause i didnt feel like wrighting an extra line for no reason......... so i hope its no problem........ one love............. |
uppin............................................. .....
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uppin people damn!
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GAMBINO I THINK YOU NEED THAT EXTRA LINE. YOU COULD HAVE WON BUT I DIDN'T FEEL THE LAST PART ABOUT THE "LAST LINE". YOU NEEDED THAT, I WAS GRASPIN FOR MO BUT GOT NOTHING. TOXIC NICE VERSE DUN. NICE PUNCHES AND MULTIPLES. YOU STRETCH YOU LINES VERY LONG. WORK ON STRUCTURE. AL IN ALL BETTER VERSE.RETURN THA FAVA:http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=122706
VOTE=TOXIC |
Oh Shit I Can't Vote On This Poll. My Fault. Not Afree Post.
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Yeah. Win goes to tha TOXIC. Yah needed that line bro. Both had some decent punches and good flow. Keep up tha good work guys and please return tha fava.
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123704 |
Both had some good punches but toxic came up with the win both of ur flows were good and some good punches but overall toxic won gambino 4/10 toxic 7/10
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yo toxic can u vote on ma shit and evryone else the battle against plustwo return the fava
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Toxic - Good spit, work on structure but.. your flow was hott.. and your punches was hitten hard.
Best Line - I wreck emcees neck and knees//reducin' life expectancies// so don't stand close or next to me// cuz battlin' TOXIC is deadly like an overdose of ecstasy// you're a prom queen going against a professional// fuck wit' TOXIC ( Ha ha ha) and get removed like one of Tom Green's testicles(5)// Worst Line - bringin' shame to GAMBINO// fuck you up so bad you change your name to nympho// as I rearrange your brain and temple// for spittin' lyrics that are plain and simple// Gambino - Good spit man, I have seen better.. but your flow was hot.. and you had some good personals and punches. Best Line - dog you must be dumb! and thats the truth so your....bound to cry... so dont be mad! that your verse proves you can only count to five... Worst Line - see your rhymes are like your avatar so dog you cant hack it..... cause your avatar's standard but custom....you dont have it... OVERALL - Close battle here, but I think the winner is.. Toxic.. his punches was better and I was liken his flow more. Gambino your structure was better but thats about it, your lacked rhymes in some lines.. and your punches wernt hitten to hard.. I know you can do better then that. VOTE - Toxic RETURN THE FAV http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123911 |
Dats Whats Up Uppin People Damn Uppin
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Herbs cannot vote here fuck outta here this ELEVATED
V/Gambino this is dusguting . . you`re structure was a messs verb you were making up words fuck i cant even begin to describe how wack you`re verse was YOU NEWBIES NEED TO GO BACK TO FRONTLINES SO VERB STOP BRINGING YOUR DICKRIDERS HERE. Gambino wasnt grreat but his structure punches & flow were much better your names toxic verbz so in this line...you cant say that I'm a liar... cause dog toxins can only burn.......but they never have any fire... that line was blah but it was the only good one i saw you need to elveate but you got the structure right. |
& always use at least 1 personal in a BATTLE or its suspicious you could have bitten that verse from anywhere..
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Naw B And Yo M I Didnt Bring Dem Newbies In Hurr Yo Man I Got Da Link In My Sig Homie
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^ Strange , Well if you start battling here you will see its completly different to frontlines. Check out the structure of previous battles.
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You got good rhyming just it looks wack because your structure is everywhere
Spul, L.I & Egnyma , creative have good styles. ------------------------------------------------------ ------------------------------------------------------ Is a normal struc. |
the BATTLE is strictly mine// battle TOXIC and get lynched with a
prickly vine// (well thats retarded)+your rhymes suck more than two faggots havin' sex in the sixty nine(3)(is gay lines played yet? i aint sure)// you ain't tough cuz you molest gay men(yet?)// I make U LOOK LIKE DEM HOMELESS KIDZ(so... where u goin wit this)//lung collapse and chest cave in// causin' so many nightmares even Wes 'cravin(4)(and this?) your only punches were things about what imma do to u and jazz, no wordpaly or punches on his name and stuff, thats what i call good punches, i've heard too much of the stuff u jus spit more of this-your freestyle is cheap, it don't make cents _____ so toxic your knocking on def doors....and dog no one hears you... this and the first few lines were good. cause dog toxins can only burn.......but they never have any fire... best line, nice punch on name.(personal) coulda been better relating it to how he spits or sumin. OH YEAH!......your on the road to riches!...but your car got side tracked... makes sence and all, but aint a punch really, if u woulda related it to him being poor in the line before or sumin, like "your punches blew ya paper everywhere, u were makin stacks"your on the road to riches!...but your car got side tracked. sumin to relate back like that. so its more of a punch. anyway this gambino characters i was feelin more, like ya punches and personals more vote that cat hit my battles up. http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124798 and the one in my sig. return honest like homes |
toxic didnt really like ya structure
kinda threw ya flow off flow-gambino multies-tie metas-tie punches-gambino personals-gambino gambino prettty much won it with this line dog you must be dumb! and thats the truth so your....bound to cry... so dont be mad! that your verse proves you can only count to five... ^^thats a great punch and personal v/ gambino |
bringin' shame to GAMBINO// fuck you up so bad you change your name to
nympho// as I rearrange your brain and temple// for spittin' lyrics that are plain and simple//(1) I'll have you chokin' soon like asthmatics smokin' shrooms// and discard your body parts with open wounds in broken ^^ I recognize that nympho line from somewhere..punches are thrown...but kinda filler-ish...up wordplay you winning! ha! thats obsurd....your wack.....and thats word.... cause the only thing you elevated was from a newb to a herb... dog you must be dumb! and thats the truth so your....bound to cry... so dont be mad! that your verse proves you can only count to five... ^^^ corny and weak opener...newb to herb?...blah...not creative at all Vote: Toxic...more complex flow ...cuz punches were about even |
causin' so many nightmares even Wes
'cravin(4)'// I wreck emcees neck and knees//reducin' life expectancies// so don't stand close or next to me// cuz battlin' TOXIC is deadly like an overdose of ecstasy// you're a prom queen going against a professional// fuck wit' TOXIC ( Ha ha ha) and get removed like one of Tom Green's testicles dat shit got me right there..flow off the hook..wordplay was on point...EXTREMELY close battle..jus feelin his lil more |
chea nice battle both emcees kame off good..but in battles i look for punches...or just a str8 diss wit personals...but ToXic i'd have da say u won this kuz u had sum sick punches and personals....GAM ya flow was nice but it was onda basic side nah mean,practice punches playa...
Punches:ToXiC Multis:ToXIC..even tho dey wasnt writen like multis should be wit da "-" i pointed dem out Opener:ToXiC FloW:TiE....BoTh WaS NiCe CLoSeR:ToXiC V/ToXiC StaY uP YaLL....Da KiD iZ GhOsT! |
i think Toxic got this one with great punches and flow
Gambino i think his structure was pretty good, but he lacked the punches V/Toxic |
damn, its elevated front lines, lol srry yall, ya still get my op tho
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aight i vote for gambino cause u had more punches and yours sounded more like a battle cause u concentrated on bustin on him. ur flow and creativity could use some work but good punches made up for it.toxic ur sounded like a freestyle that coula been written for anyone no real punches so i gota vote gambino
v/gambino drop a vote http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=128291 |
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I'm killing this bitch right?.........................................me toxicverbz.............
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im gonna vote for toxic because gambino isnt here anymore so he doesnt deserve the win
thats dope right :thumbup: vote: toxic |
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