~Sac King (vs.) Kryogenix ~
 

yo aight dis be da rules:

no prewritten
no crew votes or dik rider's votin
cant vote wit anotha name
no bitin raps/flows'
rap is 8-15 lines

good luk'

:shoot: :huh:

Im checking into this
I will be posting my verse soon

Kryogenix aint shit just some chump witta gay name
He aint into rappin just lookin for some easy acces to fame
He will neva win a battle when he usin’ his shit
Because all he knows how to do is ride dick
He aint no emcee just some fuckin pranksta
He aint a koo rapper but raps like a cracked out cranksta
Ya’ see you should a stayed back at blackplanet where you can lie and say u got skill
But now u funna prove everyone wrong dat you could be a sick scientist but yo flows would neva be ill’
Imy raps will include deez’e interlude’s and intermissions’
I wish yo ass had an open mind and some fukin time to chill, stop and listen’
In rappin I be in it to win it while every emcee is a critic
Cuz’ u swear up and down dat u got da dopest lyrics’
Im tired of hearin dis so its time to show and tell when I find your lyrics on a cd like what the hell’ my rhyme well swell and u can tell when im on stage’ cuz every time I write a rhyme I grace da page’//

For kids too lazy to look at his profile
Birthday:
June 5, 1989
Age:
15
Biography:
just spittin flowz
Location:
Sac town




Sac King cant rap, hes a newb, so he better act it
But he cant even do that right.........
........................Like fat people trying to backflip....

And it's funny, that this kid's battle record is his age!
Well then that means Sac King..........
...........................is about to have another birthday!

My punches connect straight to your face....
...................................as if they were underlined!.
Sac left Webster completely stumped......
.................Because his wackness was Undefined!....

King Talk as much knowledge as a fuckin Mime!...
And like failed subjects and topics.........
.............................Sac King is Never Mind!.......


Im still trying this new style
thats 8 lines Btw
I hope the voters understand my structure

Im not explainging any of my punches
if you dont understand them
then dont vote!

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Aiight Sac Kings structure towards the end was fucked up
But so was Kryogenix's

Overall Sac King came hard but he didn't land shit
Kryogenix had more personals and flowed better.

Vote-Kryogenix6/10
Sac King-4/10

^^on what basis did you cast your vote on?
dont come and give me unexplained voted
and I ad very decent structure BTW
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pretty weak battle generally. Kryo had a few decent punches. Sac King was just plain wack. Kryo's rhyme scheme was very simple and pretty boring, but he didn't hav to do much to win this battle.
vote - Kryogenix

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good battle, nothin real special, both had aight flow but i liked kryogenix punches better....
props to kryo on the websters dictionary line that had me rollin....

vote-kryogenix

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Kryogenix's punches hit harder then sac king's and his metaphors were better. i wasn't really feelin sac king's and it has hard reading kyro's verse. but overall kryo had the harder verse

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Sac King cant rap, hes a newb, so he better act it
But he cant even do that right.........
........................Like fat people trying to backflip....

This was the best bar of the battle... I think Sac needed to come with some more complexity and some hard punchlines- The whole verse you wrote lacked in any good wordplay or punchlines... Your structure got all screwy at the end, I just think it was a weak verse in general and your gonna need to come harder next time. Kryogenix.. I dont really like the way you structured your verse to make every bar the same length like that- but your punches were much harder, you had a much better grasp of how you wanted to go about writing this verse and you had a few good punches which ultimately made this battle one sided.... My vote goes to Kryogenix. Good luck people please return the favor.... http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=125808