Jay_Dogg vs SUPERVILLAIN
 

aiight man

10 lines max
House rules
no freepostin
you spit first

aiight ill spit first seen as your scared!!!

supervillin aint shit to me aint no villan tough enough for the dogg/
mother fuckers 23 and still got a head as thick as a log/
so its up up and away, lets all go n save the day/
from this villan my god why dont we all pray/
yeah right shut the fuck up this guy is a joke/
i hope his face dont go red and he starts to choke/
as soon as he sees this shit the bitch ill have a stroke/
im like cryptoninte that kills superbitches on the spot/
put your body in the yard n let it rot/
anotherone on ma list of bitches that aint hot/

"GODDAMMIT YOU NEUTERED BITCH...........STOP TRYING TO HUMP C.S.'S LEG!!!" (YELP!!!) "YOU FAGGOT YOU!!!" lets do this......


u made a fatal error enterin' this "prizefight"...your "weak punches" are empty//
think dog...your not in the "limelight", in hindsight, your only "green with envy"//

when it comes to "the eatery"...c'mon, "i'll easily chomp u"//
im the "mutated canine in the hulk", your "the dog in legally blonde 2"//

im not a "dog catcher"...more like a "hammer", 'cuz i simply "pound puppies"//
switch it around backwards, "my flows" like the "rivers intensity", so i "drown guppies"//

obviously, u got alot of "issues", so let me "cancell this subscription"//
dog dick looks like the tip of lipstick, u prick, i hope your girl knows what she's missin//

please dont "provoke pain" or i may just have to "pull ya choke chain"//
i'll engulf "flames"...and have you "gourmeted" on overweight "chinese folks plates"//

(fuck it, weak verse.......sorry. im keyed..........its my birthday, sue me.)

s.v. dangerous

.......like i said, im keyed.

also......jay, i didnt know you posted as soon as you did. my bad. i wouldve posted sooner if i knew you were waiting.

nice spit.

s.v. the kingpin

its cool man i was tryin to spit on 3 dif battles at the same time n happy b/day man was mine on monday there. lets get votin on this

vote
 

this is tite so ima break it down....
jay dogg
structure-kept it simple but easy to read 7/10
personals-werent that hard but were personally aimed 7/10
punches-had lots but cudve hit harder-7/10
wordplay-rhymed very well but simple6/10
flow-simple n effective-7/10

supervillan
structure-gud but stretched 6/10
personals-sum attempted-but they were a bit off 6/10
punches-lots there but not 2 hard 7/10
wordplay-ok he had gud wordplay..more complicated words 8/10
flow-different to jays,but not more effective 7/10

overall woz really tite
ima give it 2 jay-coz he equalled supervillan wit less linez
n to say he woz in 3 battles at once he done gud

ayo, jay dogg got bested on this one fo sho... SuperViilains Punches were alot better than jay's and hit harder. SuperVillain had better structure and it had more complexity.

worst line:

so its up up and away, lets all go n save the day/
from this villan my god why dont we all pray/

sorry man but this is whack...

Best line:

u made a fatal error enterin' this "prizefight"...your "weak punches" are empty//
think dog...your not in the "limelight", in hindsight, your only "green with envy"//

solid opener...

my vote - SuperVillain

aiight thanx dawg lets get more votes

jay.......happy late b/day cutty.

bignekz........thanks for the vote.

storm.......just so you know, jay and i spit (a 10 line verse each) the same amount of lines. lol.

s.v.

uppin' for some honest votes battlecats!!!

s.v. dangerous

im a vote supervillain on this one. he ripped jay dogg completely. jay dogg u seemed to have went really lightly where as supervillain juz tore it up.
vote = supervillain

thank you for the input my friend...........uppin' for more honest votes!!!

s.v.

uppin for some more votes Holla...................

Supervillan Took Thiz Easy Wit Complex Punches Hay Dog Was Too Simpel U Need To Come Alot More Complex
Supervillain Came Nice Wit his Punches And Flow Where as Jay Dogg Was Straigth Boring

jaydogg.....c'mon man step up ur game....ur shit is really really basic....u're just writing about garbage....spit some punches man......i dont really know what else to say to u....that verse was really weak......

villain......some advice...u NEED to stop with the quotes.....do not make every single one of ur punches that type of wordplay....u need to be versatile...u can have a few lines like that......but,not in every single punch......feel me? it was becoming too repetative....n i dont find those types of punches to be too hard hitting......u know what i mean? nothin blew me away in ur verse punchwise...but it was a lot better than jay's...u spittin on a higher level,u can tell by the vocab at all..but u need to work on ur punches.....stop quotes...holla

jaydogg u really need to elavte badly cuz super just merked u dogg with his killa rap

u made a fatal error enterin' this "prizefight"...your "weak punches" are empty//
think dog...your not in the "limelight", in hindsight, your only "green with envy"//

when it comes to "the eatery"...c'mon, "i'll easily chomp u"//
im the "mutated canine in the hulk", your "the dog in legally blonde 2"//

im not a "dog catcher"...more like a "hammer", 'cuz i simply "pound puppies"//
switch it around backwards, "my flows" like the "rivers intensity", so i "drown guppies"//

obviously, u got alot of "issues", so let me "cancell this subscription"//
dog dick looks like the tip of lipstick, u prick, i hope your girl knows what she's missin//

please dont "provoke pain" or i may just have to "pull ya choke chain"//
i'll engulf "flames"...and have you "gourmeted" on overweight "chinese folks plates"//

^^ that wasnt that good but still good enough to merk jaydogg
super ur flow punches and everything else was just better thats y u get my vote