MaRVOLOUSJ1009 Vs Jay_Dogg*VOTE*
 

aight umm 10-16 lines....
voter's explain ya shit or it wont count.....drop ya links when u vote on dis battle da favor will be returned...aight lets get it goin dunn check in and u said u wanted da drop first so

uppin yo whuts good nigga come da fukk on and stop bullshittin

checkin in sorry i took so long here goes.........

so you think you da sickest on dis site?/
from what ive read all your stuff is full of shite/
another pice of american trash steppin up to the mic/
youd be better goin on a hike/
it'd be a better way to spend your time/
i spit shit with a constant rhyme/
you better belive this battle will be mine/
has anyone even heard of marvolous?/
im bettin all his shit it harmless/
im like a train when i come through/
100 mile an hour straigh through you/
chocke you till your face turnes blue/
hide the body where no one will find it/
so now im done with MARVOLoUsJ1009/
imma let his spit his dumb ass rhyme/

u a no show???? stop brickin it man n just spit!!!! hahaha

i told u nigga dont fukkin take long....lets get it goin

Listen...dunny how u gon sit up here and say dude jay is type wack-
u "left" rb da come up with dat "week" verse & it took u "2 days" da "right"-
(right=write...week=weak)

i'll put da gun da his wig and run in his crib and kill jay dogg-
im recless i dont give a fukk about ya "pets" i'll even kill jay "dogg"-

did ya'll see dis niggaz bar's?? duke is nonsense-
u wouldn't have a "good shot" if "j vs j" was a "shootin contest"-
(marvjay,jay dogg...get it)

grab ya vest and ya heat,cuzz u gon be dead left in da street-
u in studio's? nah only time u was in da "booth" u was confessin da "preist"-

i could load from hip prick,i dont wanna hear about da hoe's dat dis kidd get-
if u had a album u'll neva see platinum u a keep goin "gold" like a "fish stick"-

i could tell u dont know marv,but dunny u trash y u go so hard??-
u should "serve drinks at a gay club" cuzz all u spit is "homo bars"-


GON....every line was punch ....vote ppl

upiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn...vote ppl drop links it will be returned and no bullshit votes either

Jay-Doggs verse was way to simplistic for my tastes. Look at a line like this:
"another pice of american trash steppin up to the mic/
youd be better goin on a hike/"

Going on a hike? Come on, thats just too weak.

MarvelouJ's verse was much much better. It actually had real punches and real metas... you can tell he has much more experience than Jay-Dogg. Sorry if this isn't much of an explanation but it's so obviouse to me that MarvelousJ won I dn't know how else to say it.


http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123621

aight goodlookin dunn....uppin 4 more votes....lets get dis shit closed 2day ppl

Can you drop an honest vote on my battle... the link is in the post I made above. Thanks.

uppin 4 more votes ....................................

Jay_Dogg needs a bit more complex lines. site-shite / time-rhyme.. that hike line is a good example, it doesnt make much sence

MARVOLoUs had some punches

Vote: MARVOLoUs, because Jay_Dogg's was just too simple. It rhymed and all, but you gotta add some more complex stuff

Could someone return the favor please http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123649

marvolous no doubt.

j dogg-your verse was simple and very weak work on your vocab it was very simple....u had no punches u were just tryin to rhyme which is whack

mar-u won but u still need to improve......u had a couple of metas and some good punches but u still need some work

v/marvolous

mar got this wit ease he ame alot harder than dude in punches a
nd flow a his disses was nice. jay dogg was ight he needs to work
on his disses more and make his lines longer plus he had no hard punches.

Vote: mar

once again jay dogg u need to eleavat badly really badly um break down

jay dogg best line =none
worst line=so you think you da sickest on dis site?/
from what ive read all your stuff is full of shite/
another pice of american trash steppin up to the mic/
youd be better goin on a hike/
it'd be a better way to spend your time/
i spit shit with a constant rhyme/
you better belive this battle will be mine/
has anyone even heard of marvolous?/
im bettin all his shit it harmless/
im like a train when i come through/
100 mile an hour straigh through you/
chocke you till your face turnes blue/
hide the body where no one will find it/
so now im done with MARVOLoUsJ1009/
imma let his spit his dumb ass rhyme/
--this wanst a line it was ur whole damn rap


marv best line=grab ya vest and ya heat,cuzz u gon be dead left in da street-
u in studio's? nah only time u was in da "booth" u was confessin da "preist"-

worst=i'll put da gun da his wig and run in his crib and kill jay dogg-
im recless i dont give a fukk about ya "pets" i'll even kill jay "dogg"-

ok marv just merked him jay dogg plz eleavte before u wanna battle again cuz marv flow punches and open close was better thats y he gets my vote