Mad Dog Vs T-storm
 

Aight check it
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No d/r h8 unexplained votes or crew votes
Me 1st
Honest votes only (If u got beef then Blacklist them coz i want it fair)
I'll spit when u check in...

not a chk in
 

this aint a chk in.....u sed weve got till 2moz noon....that still stand????????????

That still stands i forgot to put that in soz

aight
 

ok...chck in...................spit wen ur ready....

Ha ha who da fucks dis man t-storm??? he dissed the DK Knights?!? Wot the fuck man ima let him feel this check and drop...

(Verse)
...Lyrical style 1st class like a drug and ima pump mega slugs into this fake thug/
Who thinks he can come into the RB club and diss the Dk Knight Thugs/
Are u on a death wish coz if u are then i can carry it out on command...Like a Genie/
Coz im thinkin u aint feelin us or me...here's my glock HA and rest for eternity/
And this aint self gloryfied...these are truthful words/
Quit while ur ahead T coz u know gettin beaten like a bitch hurts/
And whats wit the name t-storm???...u think u wild or sumthin/
Our country (England) hardly gets hardcore storms...actually im wonderin/
Does the T stand for tiny, tryin or trippin?/
Coz u gettin tiny fo tryin...and my PIMP hand make sure u gonn be slippin/
Cover yoself up in quarentee...coz yo wack rap disease is a worry fo me/
Tiny storm is jus a lil rain shower...he'll pass over in 8 lines u'll see/:laugh:
Im the biggest disaster that u'll probably ever see word is bond/
Oh except when u walked in on yo bitch and her ex Raymond/
Coz the truth is...EVERYBODY LOVES RAYMOND and yo bitch is willin 2 prove it/
But dont worry u wont be a virgin forever...1 day she'll give up the clit/
But ur gay...so u wont...ur gynophobic/ (gynophobic = fear of women real word)
I'd take u to a strip club...but u'd prolly run from it/
Pack yo bags and fly away the next day/
Collect call Raymond and tell him to flee the same way/ (Secret lovers)

Aight thats me done waitin on u...

Keystyled to Kanye West (Work it out beat so read it fast thats y lines are long)

dude that suxed wot did any of ya spit have to do wit t-storm??? t-storm u should be able to merk him now

ok
 

they call u mad dog..n ur crew they call dark knights/
i call u sad dog.. n ur crew do shit but bite/
fukin wit me...set u all on fire...im crazy-psycho-manic/
ur crew alarm bell ringin...t cumin up swingin...cause u all to panic/
ur shits so weak..u been in for colonic irrogation?/
dnt try to understand...u wudnt know the meaning of personification/
bitch ull never surpass me...coz im insubordinate/
u cudnt work that out...if i gave u a map n tha co-ordinate/
bitch u claim ur serious...i think your all delerious/
ma styles complex,convex n concave...ur styles straight played/
you rap like u ashmatic...my style pumps like im pneumatic/
you must b sufferin from amnesia?...coz i tie u up in mastic(tape)
u need to grow a brain...ur styles fucked n lame/
ma gran cud do beta...n ur shit cud do wit her zimma-frame/
so fuck u...first i merked jay-dogg...n now ima merk you/
whos next in line...i take out ya whole bitch-ass crew.

C'Mon people vote dammit uppin# 1

(Round of applause) I can't believe I'm doing this, but this battle was quite alright!!

"Are u on a death wish coz if u are then i can carry it out on command...Like a Genie/
Coz im thinkin u aint feelin us or me...here's my glock HA and rest for eternity/" - wasn't sure I was gonna like this line, but in the end I did - finished it well.

"And this aint self gloryfied...these are truthful words/
Quit while ur ahead T coz u know gettin beaten like a bitch hurts/" - this is just a good line

"And whats wit the name t-storm???...u think u wild or sumthin/
Our country (England) hardly gets hardcore storms...actually im wonderin/
Does the T stand for tiny, tryin or trippin?/
Coz u gettin tiny fo tryin...and my PIMP hand make sure u gonn be slippin" - all good solid rhyming, good continuity, I like it.
Shoot, I even thought the 'Everybody Loves Raymond' references were funny!!!

T-Storm
"ur shits so weak..u been in for colonic irrogation?/
dnt try to understand...u wudnt know the meaning of personification/
bitch ull never surpass me...coz im insubordinate/
u cudnt work that out...if i gave u a map n tha co-ordinate/" - liked this, man. Good put-downs & wordplay
"u need to grow a brain...ur styles fucked n lame/
ma gran cud do beta...n ur shit cud do wit her zimma-frame/
so fuck u...first i merked jay-dogg...n now ima merk you/
whos next in line...i take out ya whole bitch-ass crew." - A good finish, no doubt.

there were other good lines in there too, like the convex, concave/str8 played line.

However, only 1 person can get the vote, so mine goes to..
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Mad Dog! (Dang! Either Mad Dog has spat a good verse, or I'm drinking whiskey on an empty stomach again.... ain't no whiskey bottle around here, so it musta beena good rhyme! Props when and where they're due.)

One

... but apparently certain cats don't want my vote.... that's cool & the gang, chalé.... I thought you might have let that stuff go, but clearly not!

it's on you, bruv

votes plz!
 

upin^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
drop a vote n drop ur links.....wll return favour asap

i gotta go wiv t-storm basically i just liked his flow beta, punches from both y'all were pretty weak but both still elevatin, t-storm took it wiv beta personals n much beta flow, mad ain't nobody wanna be listenin to a kanye beat n readin stretched lines, change ya structure dawg...pz

v/t-storm

return fava on dis battle...honest vote plz
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123463

Uppin# 3..........................................

Ima go for T on this one. He had da better flow and punches. Good job to MAd Dog doe.

VOTE=T-STORM

Can ya'll return da favor and vote on my battle plz? Thanx... http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124000

the breakdown

Ha ha who da fucks dis man t-storm??? he dissed the DK Knights?!? Wot the fuck man ima let him feel this check and drop...

(Verse)
...Lyrical style 1st class like a drug and ima pump mega slugs into this fake thug/
Who thinks he can come into the RB club and diss the Dk Knight Thugs/
Are u on a death wish coz if u are then i can carry it out on command...Like a Genie/
Coz im thinkin u aint feelin us or me...here's my glock HA and rest for eternity/
And this aint self gloryfied...these are truthful words/
Quit while ur ahead T coz u know gettin beaten like a bitch hurts/
And whats wit the name t-storm???...u think u wild or sumthin/
Our country (England) hardly gets hardcore storms...actually im wonderin/
Does the T stand for tiny, tryin or trippin?/
Coz u gettin tiny fo tryin...and my PIMP hand make sure u gonn be slippin/
Cover yoself up in quarentee...coz yo wack rap disease is a worry fo me/
Tiny storm is jus a lil rain shower...he'll pass over in 8 lines u'll see/
Im the biggest disaster that u'll probably ever see word is bond/
Oh except when u walked in on yo bitch and her ex Raymond/
Coz the truth is...EVERYBODY LOVES RAYMOND and yo bitch is willin 2 prove it/
But dont worry u wont be a virgin forever...1 day she'll give up the clit/
But ur gay...so u wont...ur gynophobic/ (gynophobic = fear of women real word)
I'd take u to a strip club...but u'd prolly run from it/
Pack yo bags and fly away the next day/
Collect call Raymond and tell him to flee the same way/ (Secret lovers)

Aight thats me done waitin on u...


nice drop man...little stretced bust some funny lines you know...raymond was good...not enough personals but still a good drop...


okay now for tstorm

they call u mad dog..n ur crew they call dark knights/
i call u sad dog.. n ur crew do shit but bite/
fukin wit me...set u all on fire...im crazy-psycho-manic/
ur crew alarm bell ringin...t cumin up swingin...cause u all to panic/
ur shits so weak..u been in for colonic irrogation?/
dnt try to understand...u wudnt know the meaning of personification/
bitch ull never surpass me...coz im insubordinate/
u cudnt work that out...if i gave u a map n tha co-ordinate/
bitch u claim ur serious...i think your all delerious/
ma styles complex,convex n concave...ur styles straight played/
you rap like u ashmatic...my style pumps like im pneumatic/
you must b sufferin from amnesia?...coz i tie u up in mastic(tape)
u need to grow a brain...ur styles fucked n lame/
ma gran cud do beta...n ur shit cud do wit her zimma-frame/
so fuck u...first i merked jay-dogg...n now ima merk you/
whos next in line...i take out ya whole bitch-ass crew.


BORING...that styles played man...i wasn't feelin this at all...no personals really here either...at least nogood ones...that's the truth...no real funny disses...choppy flow too...you know it...go back and look...eventhough it wasn't stretched it still a sloppy flow...
played punches...and old style


vocab...mad cause storm was forcing big vocab and thats worse...
punch...mad cause he was funny
personal...storm eventhough it wasn't a very good one
flow...tie...cause they both stunk
extras...mad he made me laugh...

people need to learn a witty style...not a thesaurus style...that's just my take...later

v-mad

ima go wit t storm as well i just liked his flow better, good job though mad dog.
MY VOTE=T-STORM

honestly, i wasnt really feelin' this battle, but here it goes.

mad dog- no bro im not hating..........i just didnt dig it cutty. good attempt though, your improving.

t storm- you had some okay personals and decent vocab, but your verse lacked as well.

vote.............................................. ..t storm

you guys are both new to the site, so dont take criticism (good/bad) personal. good luck to both of you. keep on elevating. one.


s.v..........c.s.

Very Close Punches Where Eve...But Mad Dog had Better Flow

And Thiz personal Won It For Me

Does the T stand for tiny, tryin or trippin?/

structure= ok i think they both had good structure both need little work though, but i think storm just took it
vocab=i think storm definetly had better vocab all round he used much more complex words n rhymed them off good as well
multiples= i think madd had better multiples, even though they didnt hit very hard he still had better multiples.

overall i think storm took this one, but their wasnt much between them n they both elevated which was good but i give it to t-storm.
MY VOTE=T-STORM

Aight man keep the votes coming in uppin..........

ok first of all mad dog t-storm good battle, it was close because both did great jobs uhm the flow and the strcutre was both their for both rhymes which was good cause i hate reading shit that dont flow, could use some more multi's from both sides, but both of you two delivered with the punches but what took thi battle for t-storm were just that his hit a bit harder ....good battle guys

vote-t-storm
return the fav....vot on shifty -vs- pimp rawb its 4-2 for me maybe one of youre guys votes will make the dif

aight good battle boyz, was pretty tight...

Mad Dog,

This was some funny shit, liked the personals, alrite flow and structure (a few stretched lines), good punches, good verse. i liked this bit,

Oh except when u walked in on yo bitch and her ex Raymond/
Coz the truth is...EVERYBODY LOVES RAYMOND and yo bitch is willin 2 prove it/
But dont worry u wont be a virgin forever...1 day she'll give up the clit/
But ur gay...so u wont...ur gynophobic/ (gynophobic = fear of women real word)

Mad Dog 7/10

T-Storm,

Good verse, was more complex, good flow n structure, good punches and personals, i liked this bit,

ur shits so weak..u been in for colonic irrogation?/
dnt try to understand...u wudnt know the meaning of personification/
bitch ull never surpass me...coz im insubordinate/
u cudnt work that out...if i gave u a map n tha co-ordinate/
bitch u claim ur serious...i think your all delerious/
ma styles complex,convex n concave...ur styles straight played/

T-Storm 7/10

tight battle but ima have to giv it to T-Storm, better overall structure and i liked the more complex verse... Good verse though Mad Dog... stay up

Aight thanx all who voted so far keep it up uppin i want this battle closed soon (in my favour hopefully) its been good so far much props to t-storm too tight battle but lets get the votes comin in!!!!

i dont no for some reason i'm fillin mad dog a lil more
then prolly cause he had better disses.I think it was
equal in punches and mad dogg had a lil bit more flow
so my vote goes to mad dog.

My vote: mad dog

please drop an honest vote on this
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124043

T-Storm, you came wit it, but a little on the weak side as far as punches...your flow was nice...I followed you fine, but I couldn't connect on your lines. for instance...you said, "bitch ull never surpass me...coz im insubordinate/
u cudnt work that out...if i gave u a map n tha co-ordinate/" ok... i thought his was your best line. You S-T-R-E-C-H-E-D a little too much in this one. I've seen much better from you. I don't know if you jus didn't care or what....

Mad--- props to you dawg on how you put it down. your structure was a little off, but you punched hard as hell (thats why I give u the win). Your opener was good, it set the pace. your last few bars were weak. You didn't KO T-Storm, just dazed him a bit. That waz enuf to win though. Even a slugger gets tired of swingin' sometime. Good job. I guess now it's the quiet after the storm...


vote: Mad Dog