wayne vs XxToXiCXxVeRbZ
 

rules
who ever loses is banned from the site
5 votes win
3 blow out aka ko
no d/r
no crew votes
votes must be explain
no bull
bars-- dont matter
lets go
today the 12
deadline 13th of april 12:00 am

Oooooooooooo Look Its Wayne Back// U Betta Have Some Good Flowz Cuz Dis Yo Last Day Anyone Gots Something To Say Befo He Goes

bitch my name is wayne bbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbitch

Who Spitting 1st How Many Lines O Foget It Iam Going To Spit Some Hot Bomb Ass Shit To Get Rid Of U Boiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

just check in bitch you go first just go before the deadline i gone merk this guy

Yo Its 15 To 20 Lines
No D/r Votes
No Crew Votes
No Unexplain Votes
No Feeing Each Otha Rhymes

i'll leave ya splattered organz outlined in -chalk-//I KNOW U prayING 2 god they'll make it out -un-harmed-/soon as u act -wreCcless- i'll snatch ya -neCclace- ' leave u -"un-charmed"-///(1) niggaz like "Dagame" gotz distorted -perception- of -perfection-/dis niggaz starin' @ da mirror askin' whoz da best n' all he Cz is my -reflection-//-infestation- of -complication-/i'll discard dis nigga "Degame" without -consideration-/dis nigga wuzz done b4 he started like a birth -complication-/// TALING ALL DAT SHIT// TIME TO PUT AN CORK IN IT//You're in for it
My sins are horrid explore it - cause death is torrid
You'll be dead for it - endure it
Morbid cold like Nordic
The hydrochloric - pour it
Onto your arm, it's all so much it melt the skin right off it
Right to the bone - forfeit

U DYING Ubleed and die in the palm of ma hand and ill make u cry be4 u die / i will put u in pain n give u a stain to contain in ur under ground cemetary to keep for eternity.

i'll leave ya splattered organz outlined in -chalk-//I KNOW U prayING 2 god U make it out -un-harmed-/soon as u act -wreCcless- i'll snatch ya -neCclace- ' leave u -"un-charmed"-///(1) niggaz like "Dagame" gotz distorted -perception- of -perfection-/dis niggaz starin' @ da mirror askin' whoz da best n' all he Cz is my -reflection-//-infestation- of -complication-/i'll discard dis nigga "Degame" without -consideration-/dis nigga wuzz done b4 he started like a birth -complication-/// TALING ALL DAT SHIT// TIME TO PUT AN CORK IN IT//You're in for it
My sins are horrid explore it - cause death is torrid
You'll be dead for it - endure it
Morbid cold like Nordic
The hydrochloric - pour it
Onto your arm, it's all so much it melt the skin right off it
Right to the bone - forfeit

U DYING Ubleed and die in the palm of ma hand and ill make u cry be4 u die / i will put u in pain n give u a stain to contain in ur under ground cemetary to keep for eternity.

SORRY HAD TO MAKE A FEW NOTIFACATION// NOT DAT MUCH DOUGH LOL


VOTE VOTE VOTE UPPINNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN

this look like prewritten i spit how many bars i wont/ pre written nigga

Nigga It Aint Pre-write U Want To Do It Ova I'll Be Glady To Bomb Yo Ass Again

im sorry for the free posting but um like i think this battle started yesterdat and he says u must spitt before the 13 of april and that was last month ahahah

Sho Was Nigga Yo Close Dis Fuckin Battle Man Yo Iam Out And Next Time U Spit 1st

hey wayne why havent you fucking spit yet?dis is a ban battle and you dont show your ass?wtf?comon or you gon lose by noshow bitch

awwww shit man.... what the fuck happened to ur ears
really.. just up and left when they heard me come near?

like dogs to scared cats, have pussies dashin in fear
might have to call animal control, to get him back in here

smashin actors for there captions fake lines with no actions
dippin like a divin competition yet ur just reLAPSin

ya whole crew couldn t equall a fraction of my drastic spittin
like wells with no water, all ur fluids be dramatically missin.

my styles kinda like jerkin cuz im gettin ya off like exits,
then imma leave ya stiff like viagra son til ya dont exist

rapin you and your crew as im blazen these crafted mastered messages
have you destructed over my hysterical savageness in lyrical passages

your flows are like rollercoasters with no motion lackin commotion
im smackin you assholes boasten and i'll burn ya like toasters..toasten

im ferocious with lyrical potent notions for wannabe votin coaches
couldn t knock me out with punches if ya slippin me sleepin potionscome on

you don't belong on RB..with tractors behind ya, you still couldnt push me
this Kids soft and cuddly...i heard his name in disneys Monsters INC

tox, your own words Fail you...thats why you FeeD off Rejection
You need this Flow to Survive like blood types and Intravenous Injections

Notice your fans Pullin the Shades down in Broad daylight

Like Forgettn Yeast While Bakin You Aint Neva Gettn Ya Cake-Up
so like 3lw this a break up

Call this battle one side ..like i'm battlin a one legged kid on a kickstand
You ain't never gonna be hot...thats a positive...you won't need any FANS lol

You really want fans? Only fans you'll ever See will rotate on your ceiling
Like blind priests with nerve disease touching alter boys...One HAS NO FEELING

now this the last stand?he banned like his man(lostchild)

Wayne u lost this sorry to say ur flow n Structure was fuckin ugly as it can be

XxToXiCXxVeRbZ ripped him man u ripped him dogg shit vote gos ta u

Break dOwn

Wayne

Flow 6/10
Rhymes 5/10
Structure 3/10
Punches 7/10
21/40

Toxic Verbz

Flow 8/10
Rhymes 7/10
Structure 7/10
Punches 8/10
30/40 good shit u ripped him man

ok,heres the breakdown

XxToXiCXxVeRbZ:real hot verse,good wordplay,your flow had me wondering at times,your structure couldve had more time spent on it i think.
best line:dis niggaz starin' @ da mirror askin' whoz da best n' all he Cz is my -reflection-//-infestation- of -complication-/i'll discard dis nigga "Degame" without -consideration-/dis nigga wuzz done b4 he started like a birth -complication
good lines,but rough flow and structure.i liked it because you had alot of the same words rhyming almost perfectly.
worst line:You'll be dead for it - endure it
Morbid cold like Nordic
The hydrochloric - pour it
very short,doesnt really fit in with the rest of the long lines,but its pretty decent
work on:you need to work very hard on your structure,no doubt about that,um your flow could use some smoothing up,but apart from that,your fine.
overall vote: 8.5/10

wayne back:ok,right from the beginning it was obvious your verse wasnt up to toxics,you had better flow,less personels,but some good disses,and your bars were pretty decent too.
best line:tox, your own words Fail you...thats why you FeeD off Rejection
You need this Flow to Survive like blood types and Intravenous Injections
thats a good personel,good structure,um pretty good wordplay,real good line
worst line:im ferocious with lyrical potent notions for wannabe votin coaches
couldn t knock me out with punches if ya slippin me sleepin potionscome on
this line has good strucure and flow,but its sucks hard.i mean,it barely rhymes,or im just too blind to notice the rhyming.
work on: your wordplay and disses.
overall vote:6/10

FINAL VOTE: XxToXiCXxVeRbZ

reasonm for vote:he just had the upper hand.except for his flow and structure,he beat you in everything.

Uppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

Dont Sleep On Dis Shit// Yo Its Life On Dis Shit//

damn
 

toxic and ya god damn d/r voters, yo wayne took this easily he killed it. toxic, what the fuck was that, not a single decent punch in the whole shit, you just basically told him what you'd do to him if ya wasn't a lil internet bitch, and told him to pour acid on his arm.

wayne, nice verse. this line killed it
tox, your own words Fail you...thats why you FeeD off Rejection
You need this Flow to Survive like blood types and Intravenous Injections
and yo nice structure and flow, as toxic had no structure i dont know what the fuck that vote was before this. u had some hot punches and have got the concept of a punch too. nice spit

vote wayne

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ calling us dickriders????????hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha hahahahaha.hotter verse?pretty harsh.but w/e man

dawgfatha_13 he got tox on his respect list so you kno he a dickrider
look at the votes dickriders no real votes

yo
 

sorry toxic but this newb gotya.....................
wayne ur structure woz beta,beta flow easier to follow
toxic ur structure woz fucked n ur rhymes didnt make sense
it woz way ova-complicated
wayne urs was more basic but punched rite on target...keep it up kid

vote-wayne back

ayo drop by -O- vs. NightRida i think i won the battle but people ae saying i copied Lloyd Banks or some shit but i didn't i need some votes holla back 1

dont free post bitch

punchlines- wayne
metas- wayne
vocab- wayne
disses- wayne
creativity- wayne

vote- wayne

lmao hey guys wayne is bribing me 2 vote for him lmao im goin to vote truthfullt

punches-tox
flow-tox
overall-tox

my vote-toxic

bitch i ask you to vote bitch not dickrider if i brib you post the pm bitch he next

dickrider^^^^^

multis-toxic
flow-toxic
opener-toxic
closer-toxic
metas-toxic
personals-none
punches-toxic
vote-toxic

Sorry daaawg, I dont think there was any competition for Toxic's shit wid what u dropped. Good job to both MCz doe and congrats to whoever wins...

opener:toxic
closer:toxic
creativite:wayne
punches:tie
structure:toxic
flow:wayne

so with decent punches,structure,closer,and a nice opener i would have to say
toxic gets this battle.......THIS IS AN HONEST VOTE!!!

V/TOXIC