Lyrical havok vs beyond Logic
 

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Murderin This Rap-Wanna-Be-Faggot, Typin Ya Verse In fUcKEd Up fOnt Is The Only Time Ya Creatin Lyrical-Havok/ 1
I’ll Break Ya Arm Off N Stick It In Ya Eye So You Can See ‘How I Write’/ Havin Ya Period Is The Only Time This Virgin Pussy’s Flow Tight/ 3

I’ll Knock Ya Down To The Sand So Ya Can ‘LICK-SHELLS-BITCH’, This KID-REPELS-CLIT/ 4
Ya CELLS-SPLIT I Eat Hell Just To SPIT-HELL-ISH, I’m Battlin This BITCH To EMBELLISH-MY-RECORDS/ 5
I’m Jumpin This Kid Like A King On CHECKER-BOARDS/ WRECK-YA-WHORE While My METAPHORS-TORE-YA-CORE/ 6

HAVOC’S-WACK, How You Goin To ‘Serve’ Me When Ya Can’t Even Make EASY-MAC/ 7
Ya Must Be Handin Out FREEBIES-JACK, Every Time Ya See ‘Pussy’ This Boy Becomes A QUEEZY-‘CAT’/ 8

15 min exactly

Like skyscrapers, their ain't no toppin' me, like the lottery you gotta Fall Lucky//
I'll make your fleet retreat cause your Complete Arsenal couldn't defeat A Small Country//

Ya style cant be savored, you couldnt have flavor if i appointed your glands//
Your verses are like invisible periods because theres no point man//

Wording on you is wasted, because every bar you key is just the basics//
your hated and tighter on dicks than a jail full of high positioned probation anklets//

I serve herbs with quickness, but battling fags like this is random//
when he spits a show, the crowd sits down because no-one can stand-him//

if u were beyond logic then you shoulda known what i touch turns to gold//
i got blister flows, his magazine is just a cover up cuz i tore him through center-fold//

haha my bad 2 min over......well anyways lets get some votes on this

uppin 4 votes

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beyond you tookthis battle b/c of punches and multiples. your strucure was good.havok you did your thing but this over powered you with the punches. keep writtin though. return the fava:http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123395

vote=Beyond

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look people lets get some vets in here to vote, these noobs dont know what to look for and im not questioning ur talent BL just the voting

Nice Battle ....
But I Thought Havoc Edged It Out ......

Lh-
Flow-8
Structure- 7....a Lil Stretched...
Punches...8
Personals-7

Bl-
Flow-7
Structure- Giraffe.......6 Lol..
Punches-7
Personals-7

Do The Math.....
Vote-lh

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uppin

uppin 4 votes cmon now

yo my vote goes to beyond, he had way better punches and multis, plus i think he was better overall
vote goes to beyond

return the favor at http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124072
we need votes

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how many votes we goin to?

haha wow look at all the newbish votes here.....only 2 worth the tyme reading is mine and $$upreme's

Lh-
Flow-9
Structure- 8
Punches...8
Personals-7
opener-8
closer-7
47/60

Bl-
Flow-5
Structure- 6
Punches-6
Personals-8
opener-5
closer-6
36/60

v/LH

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hit this up please.... me vs Killer Emcee

uppin

nice spit for bothl....But beyond take this becuz of better flows......even though structure was not that good......Both need to work on similies metaphores.....and balance to keep this up.......Thats really all I have to say is becuz of the flows he took this

yo my vote goes to beyond, he had way better punches and multis, plus i think he was better overall vote goes to beyond it just sounded betta den da otha cat

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Beyond Logic didn't have what it took on this battle... Lyrical Havok clearly beat him with wordplay, metaphors, content in the verse and struc was better too... It's blatently obvious. Lyrical is lookin superior here. please return the fav http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124310

Beyond Logic
Flow = 6
Punches = 7
Multis = 9
Metas = 3
Structuer = 0
27/50 . .
Erm pretty weak you`re veres was like a noobs you were just using multis with no punches you`re structure was poor you still need mad elevation . . i dont know what site you came from but they way weak.


Flow = 8
Punches = 7
Multis = 0
Meta = 0
Structure = 7
22/50
Again another very weak verse no multi`s used no metas either structure was ok i dint see much hard punches although you need leveation also i can see your suffring on creativty alot

uppin for votes since this battle got fucked up...

Lh-
Flow-6
Structure- 7
Punches...8
Personals-7
opener-6
closer-7
41/60

Bl-
Flow-7
Structure- 6
Punches-8
Personals-8
opener-7
closer-6
46/60

*Very good battle between both emcee! This battle could have went either way! But I thought Logic came out on top this time!

Vote:Beyond Logic

uppin for votes

Aight Yo...

Flow - Logic, Havoc Had A Good Flow But I Think Logic's Flowed A Little Better. His Multi's And Rhyme Scheme Is What Did It.

Punches - Logic, I Felt Like Havok Was Forcin the Punches, And Logic's Weren't The Best But I Still Liked Them More.

Personals - Tie, Both Had Okay Personals.

Creativity - Tie, Yall Was Both About Equal Wit The Creativity. A Coupled Played Lines And A Couple Original Lines In Both Verses.

Structure - Tie, You Verse's Were Barred Off The Same Way. Both Of You Had good Structure.

Overall - BEYOND LOGIC Gets The Nod Because His Verse Was Hittin Harder. I Felt Like His Lines Was Connecting More Then Havok's Were. Good Battle From Both Yall. Keep Workin And Stay Up. One.

Logic

Murderin This Rap-Wanna-Be-Faggot, Typin Ya Verse In fUcKEd Up fOnt Is The Only Time Ya Creatin Lyrical-Havok/ 1

A LiL Strecthed But That Is A Brill Personal Punch To Start Things oFF

I’ll Break Ya Arm Off N Stick It In Ya Eye So You Can See ‘How I Write’/ Havin Ya Period Is The Only Time This Virgin Pussy’s Flow Tight/ 3
Damn...Nice Punchlines
I’ll Knock Ya Down To The Sand So Ya Can ‘LICK-SHELLS-BITCH’, This KID-REPELS-CLIT/ 4
Ya CELLS-SPLIT I Eat Hell Just To SPIT-HELL-ISH, I’m Battlin This BITCH To EMBELLISH-MY-RECORDS/ 5
I’m Jumpin This Kid Like A King On CHECKER-BOARDS/ WRECK-YA-WHORE While My METAPHORS-TORE-YA-CORE/ 6
Structure A LiL Off Put Multis And Pucnhes is Hot

HAVOC’S-WACK, How You Goin To ‘Serve’ Me When Ya Can’t Even Make EASY-MAC/ 7
Ya Must Be Handin Out FREEBIES-JACK, Every Time Ya See ‘Pussy’ This Boy Becomes A QUEEZY-‘CAT’/
Hot Again

LH

Like skyscrapers, their ain't no toppin' me, like the lottery you gotta Fall Lucky//Nice Intro line
I'll make your fleet retreat cause your Complete Arsenal couldn't defeat A Small Country//Ok

Ya style cant be savored, you couldnt have flavor if i appointed your glands//Played
Your verses are like invisible periods because theres no point man//Niceish

Good Flow And Aiigth Pucnhes So Far

Wording on you is wasted, because every bar you key is just the basics//ok
your hated and tighter on dicks than a jail full of high positioned probation anklets//nice

I serve herbs with quickness, but battling fags like this is random//
when he spits a show, the crowd sits down because no-one can stand-him//nice

if u were beyond logic then you shoulda known what i touch turns to gold//
i got blister flows, his magazine is just a cover up cuz i tore him through center-fold//aiight


Vote=Logic...he Gets It For Better Personals And Punches...Allow He Has To Imrpove On His Structure

LH...Has To Improve On Personals And Punches A Lil'