~dawgfatha_13{vs}lyrical KILLAH~
 

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chekin in..........................................

ayo
Bitch you call yoself lyrical killa but you aint a killa
Maybe you a killa but a killa of newbie Dealas
Mothafucker your vocab aint up to date
You shoulda caught up 50 yeard ago,you kinda late
But I cant force ya to be sick
Cause I know youll just ignore and suck dick
Imma make sure you dont grabe the upper hand
Kick you off dis site's land
Cause you an embarrasment to rap
But I dont choose when god chooses to create crap
So think about what I drop
For dis verse I got major props

Ok that was wack ass shit but I dont care.No beef dogg

check in....

yo..checkit.checkit....

Dawg say you can beat me? well I say you’re a bitch that lies.../
Everyone knows Im gunna crush TV like pissed fat guys* …/
Dawg in a day I've got more wins than yours double-doubled…/
No loss, count 'em: one, two, wait! Go back a couple…/
Aw fuck I don messed up and battled a n00b again…/
HOLD UP EVERYBODY !! oh I see...hes Canadian…/
Cant even understand ur rap to know wut to say to u…/
If anyone ever told u can rap they were just playin u…/
This dawg had visions of a win, but it was just a dream…/
Cuz he only comes hard with asain porn and masturbation cream…/


my lowest lvl and i steal merked u :laugh2: :laugh2:

i messed up on this line. Everyone knows Im gunna crush ur TV like pissed fat guys* …/

ok break down

old snoop cd lol your opener made me wannna go to sleep seriuosly no hate but man shit was wack brah coulda used killa a few more times maybe and your closer wack again it was a self glorification closer them always arent good to use in a battle and the rest of your verse was basic to me nothin stood out just workin on wordplay creativitie and way better punchs that make your verse go from a 2 to a 7 atleast

k1llah your opener was nice had creativite and the punch was ok and your closer wasnt that good and blah blah blah you know whats wrong with it and since yo usaid it was your lowest i dotn even feal like goin threw that shit for a break down

vote k1llah kid

man both were wack so i think u shood redo that shyt

uppin for some more votes

Upping For Some Votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Upping For Some Votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!

O Lyrical Killah U Pm Me Askin Fo A Battle// Yea I'll Battle U

You're fucking wack.


A'ight...this wasn't the greatest battle...but in all honesty, I think Killah took it...he just had better punches, better flow, the works. dawgfatha, your verse was wack. No hate, just my opinion.

Vote- Lyrical Killah

Hit this up...thx...

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123889

ok nice but easy win 2 killa he murdered dawg heres y

more creativity more punches betta flow and betta verse

dawg-add sum punches make sum ppl laugh and better worplay add more words in line but dont stretch it eitha

bestline-Bitch you call yoself lyrical killa but you aint a killa
Maybe you a killa but a killa of newbie Dealas

not 2 good but betsline

worsteline-alot

overall verse gets a 7/10

killa

bestline-Dawg say you can beat me? well I say you’re a bitch that lies.../
Everyone knows Im gunna crush TV like pissed fat guys* …/

beat him wit dat

winner-killa

yo thx for the honest votes Upping For Some Votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!

lyrical killah took it with better punches and flow and structure
it was not the greatest battke but my vote goes to lyrical

plz vote on this battle http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124072
it needs some votes

upping for some votes

No need to really explain, Killah took this battle with ease......dawg, juss keep battlin' and uppin' ya ish..............~1ne~

Punches: KIllah
Complexity: Killah
Flow: Killah

Vote: Lyrical KILLAH

alright this is how i see it

dawg-your verse was wack................structure could use alot of work..........your

punches need to be rewored so that they hit harder...........as well as your

personals........your flow was a little choppy just because of your structure but you just need to keep elevating man



LK-.......your verse was okay but i have seen you do better..........your structure was

on point in doing that it made your flow onpoint as well and easy to read and

follow............your punches hit the target and stuck and the wording for them was

good enuf for this battle.......keep elevating i would like to see more of your shit