DisasterPeice420 Vs. Optimal
 

Optimal's Rules:

10 lines
no crew
u drop first

juss set it u and drop the link i dont care who
u are dont even wait for me to respond juss set
it up and drop the link in here.

U MUST SET IT UP WIT MAH RULES

You Up' !!!! Trick

u read the rules u drop first smarty.................

"No Shit" Are You Serious' ... lmfao!!!!! .. Shit


Checcckin In!!!!!

Check It ... Don't Even Think I Need To Come That Hard

Optimal's Bitch Ass Is KO, On This Iron Mic,
Im The Heavy Weight Bitch, You 4 Divisions Light,
You Can't Deliver Shit, Your Hits Never Hurt Me,
Ill Cut Your Ass Up, Leave You Raw Like Eddie Murphy,
You Think You The Shit, Legit, You Think Ur Wits Quick,
This Optimal Faggot Faker Than Mille Vanilli And Pam Andersons Tits,
Listen Up Gay Boy, In Earnest This Is Quite True,
Ive Taken Lines From Battles In The Past, But Ill Pass When It Comes To You,
Your Lyrics Are Shit, Deep Inside You Aint Real,
Fuck These People And Their Votes, I Dont Give A Fuck How they Feel,

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Just For Expression

You Said It Urself, I Spit Rhymes Meant For The Stage,
You Call Urself a FreeStyler, But Still Know We Aint On The Same Page,

The only time niggaz like ya "spit" is after u "suck'em"
And the only way u get there votes is if u fuck'em

Lets go....

this bitch has a "motor" mouth and it ran outta "gas"
wit ur lines "stretched" farther than "ur thong up ya ass"
NO nigga...especially no bitch in tha game can see me
if u want to have a chance bitch learn how to spell enemy



you and ya boy vango can be victim to my lyrical ether
wit your rhymes that are more "generic" than "cabin fever"
Ya punches hit like slaps so i wasnt affected by ya windmills
I leave ur ass knocked "out of the game" tryna come back like "grant hill"
Let this be a lesson hoes can get ripped to when the try to get bold
and like ya battle against latinkitten ur gettin knock out cold

u had 12 lines so i had 12 lines.........


Lets go uppin 4 votes.............

Got battle. Good job to both. My vote goes to Optimal doe. He did throw a lot of shit backk at Disaster, which prolly helped 'em. Anywayz dat xplains my vote...

Plz drop and honest vote on me VS Killah Bwoy....

http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...692#post1286692

Thanx

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Yo Good battle on both parts.....

Disasters Best Line: "You Can't Deliver Shit, Your Hits Never Hurt Me,
Ill Cut Your Ass Up, Leave You Raw Like Eddie Murphy"

Worst Line: Your Lyrics Are Shit, Deep Inside You Aint Real,
Fuck These People And Their Votes, I Dont Give A Fuck How they Feel

and as for optimals........

Best Line: The only time niggaz like ya "spit" is after u "suck'em"
And the only way u get there votes is if u fuck'em

Worst Line: Ya punches hit like slaps so i wasnt affected by ya windmills
I leave ur ass knocked "out of the game" tryna come back like "grant hill"

Nice structure Diasaster and optimal nice punches..............Oh and by the way Diasaster never dis a voter!

I Vote: Optimal

Yo optimals has got my vote, he came back real hard against disaster piece and the thong up ur ass line...genius liked the link also u had decent structure and maintained a good flow throughout.

V/Optimals

thanx 4 ya votes.........still uppin................

i'm going to give this to optimal

he just came harder with metas and punches

no multis which i favor but nontheless


vote - optimal

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you voted for the wrong person in the poll.......its coo tho


UPPIN 4 Votes..............

agree^^^

disaster piece..ur shyt was nice...I know u could do hella better..this one just wasn't ur best....I don't even think u were tryin in this one??WHERE U???cuz u too good to loose to this guy!!!

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wtf ...you voted for the wrong person in the poll......why ya'll keep doin that


UPPIN 4 Votes..............

Yo Good battle on both parts.....

Disasters Best Line: "You Can't Deliver Shit, Your Hits Never Hurt Me,
Ill Cut Your Ass Up, Leave You Raw Like Eddie Murphy"

Worst Line: Your Lyrics Are Shit, Deep Inside You Aint Real,
Fuck These People And Their Votes, I Dont Give A Fuck How they Feel

and as for optimals........

Best Line: The only time niggaz like ya "spit" is after u "suck'em"
And the only way u get there votes is if u fuck'em

Worst Line: Ya punches hit like slaps so i wasnt affected by ya windmills
I leave ur ass knocked "out of the game" tryna come back like "grant hill"

Nice structure Diasaster and optimal nice punches..............Oh and by the way Diasaster never dis a voter!

I Vote: Optimal


^^^jus wot i think on this,,...pz

can y'all hit up this wiv an honest vote, thanx!
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123463

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damn imma have to give this to optimal..optimal ya shit was sick i was feelin that thong line..shit was ill...i was like..DAYUM nigga dun did it like dat lmfao..but that was str8 sick good flow n good metas

disaster...ur shit was sick..buit plz pm me tellin me wat u meant with that eddie murphy line i didnt get it...but ur ish wasc nice but u can do better..n nce flow

vote:op

optimal that was HOTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT TTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT TTTTTTTTTTTTTT!!!!

Flow - i was feeling Disaster's flow more, it was smoother

Punches - disaster, optimals punches were kind of weak, quote..
"The only time niggaz like ya "spit" is after u "suck'em"
And the only way u get there votes is if u fuck'em"

Personals - neither had many personals, so Tie

Multies - there was like 1 line of multis, and disaster had it, i'm a fan of multis and use them alot, and thats what i look for, i was disapointed

Vocab - neither had much complex vocab, it was lame, but Optimal got it

Originality - Disaster had more originality, i liked the pam anderson line



vote disaster


p.s. will ya girl suck ma cock??


hahahahha

1.

Metahs- tie
multis- opt
punchlines- opt
Creativity- opt
FLow- tie

My vote goes to opt becuz Disaster didn't come strong at all and i wasn't feeling the structure compared to opt's..overall it was an ok battle but OPTIMAL gets my vote


SB

(p.s. disater u need to check the bitch slapped section...)

SPOKENBLUNTLY

Yeah this was a pretty decent battle through and through... I think the only problem either of you have is the punchlines are still short of being bulletproof... I think Optimals punches had more consistency in landing and making enough obvious sense to get a little chuckle so Ima vote for Optimal.