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Raphael 05-13-04 08:16 PM

Lyrical havok vs Mc Murder
 
aight heres the rules...
no d/r
no biting of course

basically house rules

5-10 lines aight...blind spit in 20

Win given because MC Murder was caught biting
-Cprogress

Raphael 05-13-04 08:17 PM

checkin.....time starts once you check in aight

:.Faceless.: 05-13-04 08:20 PM

hahah MC you gettin merkd;)

Raphael 05-13-04 08:23 PM

um...are you gonna be a now show...coz i just wasted 3 credits on a herb

mc murder 05-13-04 08:24 PM

Call me the ~“cleaning man”~ as I get rid of the ~“excess grout”~ and ~slay this “scrub”~
And with his ~spleen in hand~ im gonna clear his ~chest out~ like vick’s ~vapo rub~--1
~Shocking-this-d.i.k.e~, had him ~talkin-in-fright~ I tried raping LyriCal HavoK , but it ~brought-him-delight~
Bring this match to a close, ~locking-it-tight ~Throwing 'stones at Tyson' is the only way you ~“rocking-the-mike
My ~heat-smack~ and stuff you in a ~street-crack,~ Snatch your legs, ~eat-the-fat~ and hand you your ~feet-back~
~Heed-that~, make steaks with your limbs, now youre really “off the ~meat-rack......

Raphael 05-13-04 08:25 PM

prolly searchin his notebook for anything that might get him a vote...hey flash dont you hate it when people act hella tough then wit it comes down to a battle they turn cold turkey haha

Raphael 05-13-04 08:26 PM

o"~"k haha i guess ill key something up against eminems notebook...ha...

:.Faceless.: 05-13-04 08:44 PM

Havok's Verse due to the fact he is having problems posting

i'll make u take death as its handed like `recieveing pictures` of the 'devil'...
and put more "Sickness" 'under ur skin' then AID's Infested dick posted under your nable// (location: under your skin)
u got the best HEAD-GAME EA and Sega Sports rival with you...i warned you not to fuck wit me by sending him OPEN BODY BAGS so he could c what he was Getting Into//(that was enough..)
but ima keep going~~
Son You Betta KEEP SHIT CLEAN, Cuz I'll HEAT THIS BEAM//
BEAT THIS TEEN And Leave Em Unda Da Hood Like Da Engine On A V-SIXTEEN"!!//

oh well...it was weak but enough

:.Faceless.: 05-13-04 09:01 PM

sorry i didnt do it the way he asked

i'll make u take death as its handed like recieveing pictures of the devil//
and put more "Sickness" 'under ur skin' then AID's Infested dick posted under your nable// (location: under your skin)

u got the best HEAD-GAME, EA and Sega Sports rival with you...i warned you not to fuck wit me by sending you OPEN BODY BAGS so u could c what u was Getting Into//(that was enough..)

but ima keep going~~

Son You Betta KEEP SHIT CLEAN, Cuz I'll HEAT THIS BEAM//
BEAT THIS TEEN And Leave Em Unda Da Hood Like Da Engine On A V-SIXTEEN//

oh well that was weak but enough to merk this newb

:.Faceless.: 05-13-04 09:03 PM

my vote goes to Lyrical Havok becuae his verse was better

havok......better punches......................didnt really like your structure and it kinda made your flow a little bit choppy and hard to read.............you had a good personal in there and that was prolly what wun it for you

MC..............structure wasnt good.............threw off your flow jus like Havoks..............you deffinly need some work on your punches and personals........you need to reword your shit so it hits harder and is more effective

Raphael 05-14-04 11:00 AM

uppin 4 votes

Optimal 05-14-04 11:08 AM

lyrical havok got this wit ease he had better punches,
structure and flow.Mc murder u was tigh but ur structure
and ur punches was way off u need to work on them.

Vote: lyrical havok

Best lines:(LH)Call me the ~“cleaning man”~ as I get rid of the ~“excess grout”~ and ~slay this “scrub”~
And with his ~spleen in hand~ im gonna clear his ~chest out~ like vick’s ~vapo rub~--1

(MM)Son You Betta KEEP SHIT CLEAN, Cuz I'll HEAT THIS BEAM//
BEAT THIS TEEN And Leave Em Unda Da Hood Like Da Engine On A V-SIXTEEN"!!//

*Tay.G*SinCity* 05-14-04 11:10 AM

Hot battle... HArd to decide... Ima go wid Murder doe... He seemed to stay more persistant wid his flow & punches...

VOTE=MC MURDER

Plz return da favor and put down an honest vote on my battle... Thanks...

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Optimal 05-14-04 11:11 AM

please drop an hoest vote on this http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...811#post1286811

Raphael 05-14-04 05:26 PM

uppin 4 votes

-O- 05-14-04 05:40 PM

waddup, this was a good battle, both yall came str8...Murder your structure was a little hard to follow, but ya punches was decent..the Rockin the mike line was nice..

Havok- yours was nice too, but It seemed ya lines was a bit lengthy, I had a hard time gettin ya flow... ya punches were ok and ya structure was ok..

Ima hafta go with Murder strictly cus of the "mike" line...
good battle tho

Vote= Murder
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Raphael 05-14-04 09:00 PM

uppin 4 vets to vote

mc murder 05-15-04 11:30 AM

Needin More Votes Plse .............................................

mc murder 05-15-04 12:16 PM

Needin More Votes Plse .............................................

White Craca 05-16-04 08:32 PM

yo this shit wasnt even close lyrical havok took it away from the first line he dropped no hate but the truth lyrical havoc - good flow and some pretty good punches
mc murder- ok punches and a good flow vote- lyrical havok

Da Vinci 05-16-04 08:41 PM

Well I gotta say that both came hard but I didn't really find that Havok had enough punches to win, he had some good ones but needed more. Murder you had some nic epunches but take this because you threw more. Both of yall ha nice multi's and personals. Both of you had flow, and everything else was up to par, it came down to punches that thwe only area where you weren't even. Vote Murder

Da Vinci 05-16-04 08:42 PM

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FlowIntelligent. 05-16-04 10:02 PM

Mc Murder took this battle and i dont see how anyone could vote for lyrical havok...no beef lyrikal but that was your worst verse ever...jus garbage...MC had a hotter verse...hott wordplay and multies only bad thing about his verse was the structure but besides that everything else was pretty hott...lyrikal i think u underestimated your opponent and came half assed in this battle

vote: MC murder

~!1!~

Enhance 05-17-04 07:47 AM

Mc Murder won this
Lyrical havok verse was wack murder came with harder punches and he had better multis and his flow was better i guessing but his structured needed working on it hink lyrical havok is wack overated he did have some decent punches but he proven that he isnt as good as he says he is but this was one sided on my eyes.


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