.:VA:. vs Proffessor DS
 

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no:d/r, crew, hate, bitin, recyclin

aight its due in 1 hour...............................

ya niggaz need t a hurry up n battle

im shaken tha proffessor with'a TRAIN-wreck...
i'LL check'em on tha play-deck, given him crossed ankles and a sprang-neck...
elbow to this D.ameS.-chest...knockin him breath-less.
iM rest-less on tha court and my skillz is unlimited and test-less.
iM breast-less , but im not playin WNBA like this "jo-wanna-man"
you do, like JOwanna can, double datin with an ugly-man,...
this verse is endin and im "skippin-2-my-LOO".
iM spittin-thru-a-crew,... puttin a killen-on-this-JEW.
its like a holocaust wen i spray, and to survive you gotta be a skinny pail hoe.
im endin this with'a 1-0 on my record, swing a shovel at yo' dome witha fatal blow.

wers this NO-SHOW at??.............................................. .

Here it goes i had to eat some mexican so chill....

My rhymes come through like a hurricane/
Jumblin yo brain, make u mentally insane/
thinkin u can take this playa u just strait tripin/
Cause my rhymes are rippin, makin it look like u stripin/
If u talkin bout jugs lets talk about yours/
ur drip so low they bigger than whats in ya drawers/
Its time to J' this foo leave him on the floor/
Beggin to suck my dick as i walk out da door/
If u wanna talk about endings well this is the big boom/
well u knocken um' out w/ shovel when i jack ur skinny ass w/ a broom/

reall quick like and sorry about the wait just new to the site and didn't realize we had a battle

punches - professor DS, i felt his more and they overall more hard hitting

vocab - proffessor DS, he had more complex vocab, i wasn't really feelin VA's

Multis - None Really, so I gave it a tie

Structure - VA. his structure was more thought out.

opening line - P DS, i was feeling the mental line


vote - Proffessor DS





aight yo can you guys vote on my battle. i'd appreciate it.

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124304

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all right this was a really close battle .:Va:. - u had some pretty good punches and a nice overall flow professor DS- most of ya punches hit pretty hard and a rippin flow this shit was really close my vote - Professor DS

no see im gonna take this battle the other way their were mutli's used and all in va's rhymes, and the rest i saw as a tie so i think va took this one just by an inch if that

hey guys return the fav shifty vs tayg cincity on the front lines please

thanx, i wud but i dont got 100 posts, ill hit up one your battles some time wen i do. uppin #2

Aiight Va landed some pretty good punches but there was wack filler.
Proffesor came hard but with no personnals, but good flow.

Vote-VA

Return da favor (in ma sig)

thanx man, uppin #3..........................................

IIght, I have been votin all day and No one has been returnin the fav.. so hit this battle up
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123911
And I will return the fav RIGHT AWAY!.. thx

i dont have 100 post , btu vote and weni do ill look u up.. uppin #4

Cmon Vote On This Shit Its Tied Lets Get It Done
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aight last uppin , hit this up,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

uppin come on people

.\\assacre you was dick rhydin hard nigga, va's vers eis way better than professor's. va had a better structure and better punches. his verse was more lyrical and look like it had more thought. im not votin 4 him vuz he's from va but his verse seemed better to me. but you both need to step up. return the fava

vote=va

aight........holla at 'em, lookin for votes and links ppl/ legit

VA
Flow 7/10
Rhymes 7/10
Structure 6/10
Punches 7/10
Humor 6/10

Proffesor
Flow 6/10
Rhymes 7/10
Structure 6/10
Punches 6/10
Humor 6/10

v/ .:VA:.
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YO PLEASE RETURN THE FAVOR... http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=128356

Alright, I think VA had much more complex lines, his flow was less choppy and the punchlines were harder... example...
this verse is endin and im "skippin-2-my-LOO".
iM spittin-thru-a-crew,... puttin a killen-on-this-JEW.
Nothing spectacular but it had a good flow, and held more weight than Professors lines... Vote VA...

one more vote, man this battle was like a month ago... damn i sucked.. uppin for 1 more vote

a yo ima hav to give dis to VA he lead in punches,flow,structure, n rhymes professa took erything else lol (nothing) so obvoiously ma vote goes to Va but good shyt tho professa keeep tryin u'll elevate