Terror vs Lyrical KILLAH
 

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Ight

Poeple votin you Rookie when im really The Rookie-Above-You//
If poeple payed attention they would know i can Rip-Right-Through-You//
Your Punches Hit softer then Leaves hitten the Ground in Autum//
Ur Flow is Like a Toddler and Mine is More deadly Then Sadam//
Hitten u like a Boxer u are Gettin Verbally "Checked" In this Match-Up//
Your Flow is Flatter then a "Wrecked" Bike U need a good Patch-Up//
U r a Killer,U kill for a Vote in ur Battles verse Little N00bs//
Ima leave u Racked up more then a New set of Silicon Boobs//
Ur Flow is Still in Grade School and mine got Lyrically Excelled//
So many ways to Murder u on The Mic can i be more Detailed//
I Just Left your Ass Danglin "Right Thur" like you was a Played-Out Chingy//
Tryin to keep ur head above Saliva,When u cant evan Flow with a Dingy//
(Float)

there

Float was supposed to be under Flow but there.

ayo..checkit...check it...

There’s no flame in your name... my spits already turn your punches to mist.../
I take no offense to your diss, like a venom less snake all you do is hiss.../
Terror your rhymes are too long and boring, forfeiting woulda save some time.../
It's like your verse was written on your belt..the way you're waisting rhymes.../ (get it? WAIST)
Do the fucking math, Terror ain't ill...he's just a fuckin' liar.../
He the type to have hot sex with himself daily by lighting his cum on fire../
You Pussy, Reaching Your Period, You At The End Of The Line.../
Every Verse You Drop Is A Cry For Help Like You Venting Your Mind.../
Ha terror, your lyrically challenged, no talent, more grammitical errors than ya IQ.../
Bitch, stop rhyming and stick to high pitch bitch shouting like DJ CLUE.../
I ripped out ya spine, maybe that's why I held back.../
Just cuz u sellin ya ass to fags, don't mean u've dealt crack.../
Ya Might As Well Vanish Like Clouds Do When Everybody On This Board Doubts You.../
Terror i'd Hit You With A Ton Of Personals...But Nobody On This Site Gives A Fuck About You.../


holla atcha boy!!!!!!!!!!

hurry up in drop

Bitch, stop rhyming and stick to high pitch bitch shouting like DJ CLUE.../
How do u know how i sound lol anyway

Uppin

i dont know it was like ummmmmmm wut is that word shit ummm i think it is infering well uppin for some votes nice drop home boy

Good battle, but i have to go for lyrical killah on this one, he had harder punches, more personals and multis, so im going to have to go for him
my vote=killah

plz vote here we need some votes--------> http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124072

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plz if ur going to vote plz explain the vote well so we dont have no d/q votes

Lyrical Killah:
Flow:8
Structure:10
Punches:8

0v3rAll:26

Terror:
Flow:7
Structure:9
Punches:7

Overall:23


vote: Lyrical Killah

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Terror

Poeple votin you Rookie when im really The Rookie-Above-You//
If poeple payed attention they would know i can Rip-Right-Through-You// Not feelin' at all...

Your Punches Hit softer then Leaves hitten the Ground in Autum//
Ur Flow is Like a Toddler and Mine is More deadly Then Sadam// Stil no

Hitten u like a Boxer u are Gettin Verbally "Checked" In this Match-Up//
Your Flow is Flatter then a "Wrecked" Bike U need a good Patch-Up// Decent

U r a Killer,U kill for a Vote in ur Battles verse Little N00bs//
Ima leave u Racked up more then a New set of Silicon Boobs// Eh aight

Ur Flow is Still in Grade School and mine got Lyrically Excelled//
So many ways to Murder u on The Mic can i be more Detailed// Decent

I Just Left your Ass Danglin "Right Thur" like you was a Played-Out Chingy//
Tryin to keep ur head above Saliva,When u cant evan Flow with a Dingy// NO
(Float)

Not feelin' ya verse, ya need to work on ya punches and wordplay...
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There’s no flame in your name... my spits already turn your punches to mist.../
I take no offense to your diss, like a venom less snake all you do is hiss.../ Decent one

Terror your rhymes are too long and boring, forfeiting woulda save some time.../
It's like your verse was written on your belt..the way you're waisting rhymes.../ (get it? WAIST) LOL, that was pretty funny

Do the fucking math, Terror ain't ill...he's just a fuckin' liar.../
He the type to have hot sex with himself daily by lighting his cum on fire../ Aight, not really feelin' cum lines...

You Pussy, Reaching Your Period, You At The End Of The Line.../
Every Verse You Drop Is A Cry For Help Like You Venting Your Mind.../ Aight

Ha terror, your lyrically challenged, no talent, more grammitical errors than ya IQ.../
Bitch, stop rhyming and stick to high pitch bitch shouting like DJ CLUE.../ LOL, aight

I ripped out ya spine, maybe that's why I held back.../
Just cuz u sellin ya ass to fags, don't mean u've dealt crack.../ Not feelin'

Ya Might As Well Vanish Like Clouds Do When Everybody On This Board Doubts You.../
Terror i'd Hit You With A Ton Of Personals...But Nobody On This Site Gives A Fuck About You.../ Pretty good finisher

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Pretty easy to call, Lyrical KILLAH won this...his verse was more well-rounded and complex........keep elevatin' tho, both of ya's...........~1ne~

Vote: Lyrical KILLAH

ill vote on this tomorow lookin at these unexplained votes im sure it still be open

terror

flow-7
struture-8
punches-6
personals-6
opener-5
closer-6

LK

flow-8
struture-7
punches-6
personals-6
opener-5
closer-7

close battle both of you.....but Lyrical killah took this just barly

v/LK

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ok honest vote here.......
terror- ur verse was ight......ur flow was good,your structure was ok,nice punches......but next time try and be a little more creative with ur verse...a lil more wittieness

LK-ur verse was nice.....u had nice flow,punches,your structure sucked tho....
but ur verse u were more creative with ur verse tho...so i like that shit...

punches:LK
flow:LK
structure:terror
creativity: LK

v/LK

Ok Uppin This Cuz We Had Mad D/q Votes Plz Explain Votes Well

Terror verse to me was just plain need to work on your flow structure and get better punchlines to grab someones attention

Lyrical his verse was good not great but between the both he had better flow and structure and much better punchlines

Vote LK

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this goes to lyrical killa, had better punchlines and he flowed better. he also had sum nice multis, over all 6/10

for tha other guy wich ill save tha imbaressment and not typer ur name, u need to work on punchlines and multis, overall 3/10

ok here we go
flow-it was their for both of you two the flow was good
structure- but killah's structure was a bit better which made his flow a bit better
multi's- important part of a battle to me, a good use of multis can really make the difference and i thought killah took that aspect of the battle also
punches and personals-both came hard with the hits but in the end lyrical killah took those too, but in each of the categories it was close either way just killah took it a bit further
so my vote is gonna go to lk
return the fav and vote the shifty-vs-pimp rawb on the front lines peace

Lyrical Killa got this fa sho. His punches were a lot more witty. Punches win battles, so I'm givin it to him. Good job to both MCz doe... Plz return da favor wid an honest vote on my battle... Thanx...
http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...692#post1286692

VOTE=LYRICAL

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wut the fuck this is bullshit i won this battle 8-0 but know they going to d/q 5 of my votes iight ppl if ur going to vote explain that shit well

Flow....Killa took this he flowed better cuz he didn't strectch his lines an his syllabales were pretty much even throughout
Multies...Killa took this hands way more multies terror had none in his verse at all
Punches....Killa came way harder wit the punches his opener shut down terror's whole verse
Personals....Killa actually had some only a few but terror had none so kill takes it
Vocab.....Killa had much stronger vocab in this one, terror's whole verse was basic throughout need to evelate there seriously man
Wordplay....Killa took this too damn this is getting old but another cateogory to killa, terror was completely out classed him here
Overall...killa had a way more polished an experienced verse than terror, obvious ly terror was not ready for this type of battle
Vote: Killa

There’s no flame in your name... my spits already turn your punches to mist.../
I take no offense to your diss, like a venom less snake all you do is hiss.../
^Nice Use Of Multies' ..!! & Creative Opener...

Do the fucking math, Terror ain't ill...he's just a fuckin' liar.../
He the type to have hot sex with himself daily by lighting his cum on fire../

^Weak Punch.. Not Feeling It'.....

Ya Might As Well Vanish Like Clouds Do When Everybody On This Board Doubts You.../
Terror i'd Hit You With A Ton Of Personals...But Nobody On This Site Gives A Fuck About You.../
^Nice Creative Closer Aswell...!!


Checckit Checck Checck

Poeple votin you Rookie when im really The Rookie-Above-You//
If poeple payed attention they would know i can Rip-Right-Through-You//
^Weak Opener' .. Playa...!! Shame Shame Shame..

Ur Flow is Still in Grade School and mine got Lyrically Excelled//
So many ways to Murder u on The Mic can i be more Detailed//
^Nice Punch' .... Its Heated' ..!! :)

I Just Left your Ass Danglin "Right Thur" like you was a Played-Out Chingy//
Tryin to keep ur head above Saliva,When u cant evan Flow with a Dingy//
(Float)
^ Creative Closer!!!

Vote: LK