Killah Bwoy Vs Tay.G*SinCity*
 

lets go

10 lines
blind spit
no d/r crew botes or biting
good luck
no feedin

checkin in.........good luck........................

Aiight, consider this my checkk in. Good luckk cuzz...

Get Sparked N lit..Like A kid Drinkin Poison Im Droppin Venomous "Shit"-/
Get Raped Quick..Rymes N Ass re alike cuz dey both been stretched n ript-/
dis harmles bitch wil get cut N Split..On Sum Inocent frog expirement ish-/
Blew out his candles..anthrax on da cake So Consider this your last wish-/
Fire N Hit..Retire N' Quit..Cuz Like Iraq You'll never see a Victory Dance-/
Smack You back to your "past life"..This Bitch is "history", man-/
Like Your AV Shoot you up n' role out in a benz like 2 Pac Bitch-/
Even If You had "Juelz" In Ya Crew You Still couldnt be rich-/
You Get Burned Quick Like A Funeral hosted in the sun-/
Get Devour'd N' Throw'd ain dolmation but "dawg".. When you "see Spots run"-/



BLOW NIGGA

You Get Burned Quick Like A Funeral hosted in the sun

^^ hot line...wen u wear black u'll get burned in the sun

hey guys vote for the shifty-vs-pimp rawb on the front lines im up 4-2 youre vote might be the one that counts uhm ill vote on this battle when the other guy drops tight verse up their so far should be a good battle

Muuuurrrrddeeerrrr!!!
 

Good shit dawg!

Aiight lemme do ma thug thizzle...

Let's ggooooooooooooooooo!

I SPIT SUPREME wid 'GLANDZ~ENHANCED', & Like a GURL in BOYZ SCHOOLS U gettin 'OUT"MAN"NED~IN~CLASS'!!//
I'll Destroy u! 'Stab~&~Slash', Leave neckks slit & 'Crackk~Ya~Backk' then shove ya LEG in ya RECTUM so I can finally 'STAND~YA~ASS'!!// KO

I Retire-Nerds wid 'Smarter~Mixtures', U can see I “FIRE-BIRDZ” soon as my 'CAR~HITS~YA'//
Sigh-At-Jerks and 'Mark~Victims', 'BARZ~SLIT~YA' so SHARP I'll cut this ADOLESCENCE into THIRTEEN like 'BARMITZVAHS'!!// KO

Keep da ‘Fours-Bangin’ I ‘Distraught-Cannons’ at ya ‘Groin-Dammit’!! To keep this ‘Boy’s-Balls-Expandin’// (He only 14… Dickk and Balls aint grown yet! lOl… Checkk profile)
I’m ‘Warped-Man-&’ I’ll cut ya neck wid ‘Swords-Slangin’ but leave ya VOCAL ‘CORD-STILL-CLANGIN’ to say ya ‘THOUGHTS-IS-HANGIN’!!//

I’ll cut you from CHEEK to CHEEK & give you a ‘PERMANENT-FROWN’, Like gettin’ BRAIN while WACKKIN OFF I’m leavin this “JERK”-“DOWN”!!//
Ya whole ‘Verse-Is-Clowned’, Tay ‘Disperses-Rounds’, Void Prickks when Toys Spit, Leavin’ ya BACKK OPEN like ‘NURSES-GOWNS’!!// KO

‘Unloadin-Flame’ wid ‘Potent-Game’ to ‘Roast-This-Lame’, I’ll fold you in half til ya ass ‘Shoulder-Blades’!!//
Leave your ‘Emotions-Slayed’… And fuckk “SPITTIN” A “FLOW”…. This hoe jus got “OCEAN”-“SPRAY”d!!!!!!!//

Typo Error
 

SORRY YA'LL I LEFT SUM'N OUT OF DA 9TH LINE!!

Unloadin-Flame’ wid ‘Potent-Game’ to ‘Roast-This-Lame’, I’ll fold you in half til ya ass touches ya ‘Shoulder-Blades’!!//

^^What's in bold should be in there...

hey man you wanted my honest vote tay and i got to tell you ...yah broke the rules dud so you loose aoutomatically no matter how tight youre flows are and youre punches....how you ask.....you wrote ten bars ...the battle was set for ten lines...if you have the opportunity of ten bars tover someone who spit ten lines then its an unfair advantage for more personal hits and things like that so i gotta vote killah

^^Dat's Bullshit!!

You should be votin for who had da best verse not for who you think went over. If Killah got a problem wid my verse then dat's for him to confront.... NOT DA VOTERZ!!

Fuckkit, Killah, you can have dat vote cuzz... It's da only one u gonna get..

Ay Tay. Dawg you killed that shit. Your structure was kind of fucked up but
you still ripped it.
Ay Killa Bwoy take the boxing glove out of ya sig cause you got knocked out.

Vote-Tay.G

ttay g-.........your structure was fucked man..........and since that was fucked it threw off your flow and made it choppy........your had good punches and your metas where good.......keep elevating and work on your structure..........

killa bwoy-.......you need to elevate man......your structure was good but you need to work on your flow..........your punches are weak and you really went on about nothing........to me it was basically alot of filler lines........elevate......pc

v/tay-g.....

>my first battle<

^return favor

TAY YOUR LINES WERE LONG BUT YOU TORE IT UP. NICE VERSE KILLAW BUT HE TOOK IT TO YOU. ITS MAYBE B/C HE WROTE MORE. ANYWAY TAY YOU HAD A NICE FLOW, PUNCHES AND PERSONAL. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK ROOKIE. BE CONSISTENT. DON'T STRETCH YOUR LINES OUT SO LONG JUST TO MAKE APOINT THOUGH. AIGHT RETURN THE FAVA:http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123815

VOTE=TAY

kids fucked up he sed my verse was weakk hahah fuckin ass

well pa u wanted my honest...opinion and he came harder..he had MUCH more punchlines then u and his mulitie's were better..i've seen better from u killah...C'MON PA!!! lol still luv ya though *one*

SB

Aiight ya'll thanx for da honest votes... Method... Im finna vote on dat shit right now....

Got another battle if yall wanna peep a complete slaughter on a RB MC dat is undefeated...

http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...720#post1287720

TAY

BESTLINE:Keep da ‘Fours-Bangin’ I ‘Distraught-Cannons’ at ya ‘Groin-Dammit’!! To keep this ‘Boy’s-Balls-Expandin’// (He only 14… Dickk and Balls aint grown yet! lOl… Checkk profile)
I’m ‘Warped-Man-&’ I’ll cut ya neck wid ‘Swords-Slangin’ but leave ya VOCAL ‘CORD-STILL-CLANGIN’ to say ya ‘THOUGHTS-IS-HANGIN’!!//

I’ll cut you from CHEEK to CHEEK & give you a ‘PERMANENT-FROWN’, Like gettin’ BRAIN while WACKKIN OFF I’m leavin this “JERK”-“DOWN”!!//
Ya whole ‘Verse-Is-Clowned’, Tay ‘Disperses-Rounds’, Void Prickks when Toys Spit, Leavin’ ya BACKK OPEN like ‘NURSES-GOWNS’!!// KO

‘Unloadin-Flame’ wid ‘Potent-Game’ to ‘Roast-This-Lame’, I’ll fold you in half til ya ass ‘Shoulder-Blades’!!//
Leave your ‘Emotions-Slayed’… And fuckk “SPITTIN” A “FLOW”…. This hoe jus got “OCEAN”-“SPRAY”d!!!!!!!// DAMN DAT WHOLE SHIT WAS DA B-O-M-B- MURDER DATS WHAT IAM TALKIN ABOUT


WORST LINE:DER AINT NONE

KILLAH

BEST LINE:Like Your AV Shoot you up n' role out in a benz like 2 Pac Bitch-/
Even If You had "Juelz" In Ya Crew You Still couldnt be rich-/
You Get Burned Quick Like A Funeral hosted in the sun-/
Get Devour'd N' Throw'd ain dolmation but "dawg".. When you "see Spots run"-/You Get Burned Quick Like A Funeral hosted in the sun

^^ hot line...wen u wear black u'll get burned in the sun DAMN SON MURDER BOTH FROM BOTH OF YALL

WORST LINE: DER AINT NONE

DIS A BATTLE DIS WHAT IAM TALKIN ABOUT!

I HAVE TO GIVE DIS TAY DIS NIGGA HARD LOTS OF PUNCHES AND FLOWZ LIKED YO WORD PLAY DAMN IAM AMAZED/ YO TAY U READY FO DA TOXIC ACCEPT

TAKE A RISK BECOMING INJECT WITH DA LYRICAL DIEASE

KILLAH KA BOOM DAMN DOG U HAD PUNCHES AND FLOWZ BUT YO PUNCHES DIDNT HIT HARD MAN/ YO KILLAH GIVE TAY SOME PROPS PUT HIM IN YO CREW/ FO REAL HOMIE//

YO KILLAH I SEEN YO BATTLES MAN U GOOD MAD GOOD/ I THINK U HAVE A TWIN TAY AND KILLAH KA BOOM PEOPLE/ TAKE A FIRE AND MIXX WITH SOME GANGSTA TWIST AND WHAT U GOT UNTOUCHABLE/

ONE DIS DA TOXIC GIVE MADD RESPECT TO ALL MC NIGGAS ONE AND FEM MC

VOTE=TAY

ya tay u sick but dont stretch ya shit feel me u had 2 lines in 1 line u know but datz def sickness but shortin ya shit up like

im so sick thats y i got ur gurlfriend ridin my dick/ (stop)
not like
im so sick thatz y i got ur gurlfriend ridin my dick with that other chick she got licked quick she sucked my stick too wat u gon do (not like that) lmfao

Uppin for votes............................................

WEAK..you win
i say that you won..i like you avatar and your abs, they look tasty
can i have a bite, i guess yoiu can call me a biter. 10/10

n you sucked all over this aint a lolly ... pop hoe 0/10

return the favor, it is a hot battle of mines
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124208

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ooh-wop ur gay fa real well n e wayz

Tay g *Sincity* ya structure fucked uo u need alot of work on that i didint feel ur flow that much but u did good

Killah bwoy u did good i say u probly took it ya flow wasint messed up ya structure was good u took this

Break Down

Tay g

Flow 8/10 its was good
rhymes 8/10 the same
Structure 1/10 its was messed up u need lessons on that
Punches 7/10
Over all

24/40

Killah Bwoy

FLow 8/10 nice nigga
Rhymes 9/10 u did madd good this 1
Structure 7/10 thats where u killed him
Punches 7/10
31/40

Ok... As long as everyone is makin sure they keep da votes COMPLETELY HONEST it's all gravy.... PLEASE, NO D/R VOTES!!

Uppin this shit...

C'mon now ya'll... 1 more vote needed.............

Uppin again... Gotdamn ya'll vote on this shit plz...

Uppin for 1 more vote..............................

tay won dis battle because his punches seemed to hit harder because he hd exellent word play, stucture flow and rymes. The other guy didn't seem to make a better performance but both did well and continue to elevate. Would liek to battle tay after this vte is made because u diserve it.

vote tay