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CJ vs. Phat Mic
time to get sonned bitch
5-10 bars No d/r hate or crew votes NO FEEDING OFF MY SHIT And I will spit in a lil' bit. ~CJ~ |
ok...check. but i'll spit in 6th or at home, so at arownd 3
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Phat Mic, I think you don't put in the work, You be acting real lazy,
Your bars got more stretch marks than a woman that had a baby. Actually, answer honestly, is there anything you do well, Just tell someone and have them type it, we know you can't spell. You already know that Ill Spits and my name is synonomous, Shoulda kept that alias 'cause on here you are anonymous. Want me to start it of, that's ok you'll never see me afraid, And you can go to Hawaii, I know I'll still neva see you laid. You claim you're fuckin' godly? Quit hangin' on Chrit's nuts, The pictures you paint? you a Starvin' Artist, here's a few bucks. Think you got skills, goin' is gettin' rough, but a diamond is forever, Forever witout skills, beat Jay, yeah the day right after neva. |
im batleing this bitch to prove he had a chance
having his pathetic lyrics will have you hung off da branch all william hung like no lyrics no beat and just no flow and like delion get blowed off da band that no shows quick to step but in the end you'll get creamed jerk off with sanitizers is the only way to cum clean Jay you just a pawn here, I know I got you crew shook Cuz face it, Dating George will never give you the W...Bush This shit is just practice so consider that fear is a factor I admit that I put I.P.'s in check like angry internet hackers no need to know bout ya private life we know ya crews unheard thinks he's a young gun but have u heard of a murderous Blue bird(jay) Ya gonna see it, dat dudes ripped and appauled as if a condom snaped dip da head of a pen in bloodz of poets and still couldn't apply skill on ya raps done lets get some votes... |
uppin for the votes...
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aiight, this was a tight battle. Both of y'all came hard, but I think Phat took this one in the end.
CJ, you had a pretty good verse. Your punches were alright. You really didn't have any hard hittin' ones, except for your opener. Your flow was alright too. It was a little shaky in a few spots. Your opener and closer was tigh though. I give you a 7/10 overall. Phat, you had a very good verse. i liked it. You had some nice hard hittin' punches. I like the William Hung one and the Bush one. Both were hot. Your flow stayed consistent for the most part. You also had a pretty good opener and closer. Good job. I give you a 8.5/10 v=Phat |
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Aiyo...
Phat Mic: 6/10 I Wasn't Feeling To Strucure Nor The Flow, But I Felt A Few Punches, Sum Just Didn't Go Well Do To Word Usuage. Work On Dem Metaphors and Punches. Nice Dope. Countree Jay: 7/10 I Felt Yours More and I Acutally Got The Personals That You Included In There Cause I Know Phat Mic Pretty Well. Metaphors Were Alright and I Loved The Line Bout Him Riding Chrits Nutz LOL..Newayz..Nice DRop Cuz. Props To Both, Stay Dope! Vote - Countree Jay ~R~ |
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i think CTJ took this one....phat your verse wasnt all that good...and the line about comin clean wit sanitizers is really played out come more original...creativitie makes a verse alot harder and CTJ had the creativitie...and also a good peronsal decent punches good flow and structure and decent meta's...phat u had a couple good punches and good wordplay...not much more to your verse...structure was a lil off didnt flow too well...but overall good verses from both
CTJ:7/10 Phat Mic:6/10 vote:CTJ |
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~CJ~ |
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nice shit cj u had a hot verse uppin this 4 ma boi
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~CJ~ |
Phat Mic, I think you don't put in the work, You be acting real lazy,
Your bars got more stretch marks than a woman that had a baby. PRETTY GOOD THERE ..JUST WORD IT BETTER Actually, answer honestly, is there anything you do well, Just tell someone and have them type it, we know you can't spell. PERSONAL NO PUNCH You already know that Ill Spits and my name is synonomous, Shoulda kept that alias 'cause on here you are anonymous. PERSONAL Want me to start it of, that's ok you'll never see me afraid, And you can go to Hawaii, I know I'll still neva see you laid. AFTER THE EXPLANAITION ITS FUNNY LOL You claim you're fuckin' godly? Quit hangin' on Chrit's nuts, The pictures you paint? you a Starvin' Artist, here's a few bucks. OK EXCEPT THE FEW BUCKS PART Think you got skills, goin' is gettin' rough, but a diamond is forever, Forever witout skills, beat Jay, yeah the day right after neva. KINDA FUNNY THE WAY ITS WORDED __________________ im batleing this bitch to prove he had a chance having his pathetic lyrics will have you hung off da branch OK,BUT I'M SURE HE'S HEARD EVERY TREE LINE IN HISTORY all william hung like no lyrics no beat and just no flow and like delion get blowed off da band that no shows DONT LIKE ANY DA BAND LINES quick to step but in the end you'll get creamed jerk off with sanitizers is the only way to cum clean CUM LINES ARE PLAYED Jay you just a pawn here, I know I got you crew shook Cuz face it, Dating George will never give you the W...Bush LOL THIS IS UR BEST LINE This shit is just practice so consider that fear is a factor I admit that I put I.P.'s in check like angry internet hackers OK WORD PLAY...BUT I THINK I'VE HEARD IT BEFORE no need to know bout ya private life we know ya crews unheard thinks he's a young gun but have u heard of a murderous Blue bird(jay) ? DIDNT GET IT....I KNOW WHAT A BLUE JAY IS BUT,,, Ya gonna see it, dat dudes ripped and appauled as if a condom snaped GAY dip da head of a pen in bloodz of poets and still couldn't apply skill on ya raps ....DONT LIKE IT COUNTREE,U HAD A MORE CONSISTANT VERSE,U HAD MORE PERSONALS I THINK..PHAT MIC,U HAD THE W BUSH LINE THAT WAS OK N THE INTERNET HACKERS,SEEN SIMILAR CONTENT...BUT THE CUM LINES N SOME OTHER LINES WERE REALLY WEEK.......U SHOULD TRY TO BE MORE CONSISTANT.......EVERYTHING ELSE,FLOW N WHATNOT WERE ABOUT EQUAL....SO I'M GOING ON THE CONSISTENCY THING HERE SO VOTE COUNTREE |
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~CJ~ |
cj-Nice spit....You murked it with the
similies..Punches was tight and had some multies Personals was good and took it..I liked it nice drop Phat mic-Came close but not close enuff...You had the metaphores but was lackin a few things to be in there. very close battle..CJ Had a nice flow and spit.. Overall-Close battle But I think CJ took this becuz his personals and similies..Nice spit from both.. v/Cj Return the favor please http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=129056 I kindof Murked him with the personals but it was my easiest drop |
opener:mic....ill punch, cj i seen somethin like that line in one of soul skripts verses
closer:cj punches:mic flow:cj vote:mic had the better punches and metas in the battle, the only line i was reall feelin from cj was his closer, mic had a couple of em like the opener,the bush one...so yea... vote:mic can yall return the favor.... http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=128990 |
CJ drop or Raw Material
Phat Mic, I think you don't put in the work, You be acting real lazy, Your bars got more stretch marks than a woman that had a baby. WOW REALLY NICE OPENER 8.5/10 Actually, answer honestly, is there anything you do well, Just tell someone and have them type it, we know you can't spell. NOT THAT GOOD AT ALL 7/10 You already know that Ill Spits and my name is synonomous, Shoulda kept that alias 'cause on here you are anonymous. UMM ITS OK 7/10 Want me to start it of, that's ok you'll never see me afraid, And you can go to Hawaii, I know I'll still neva see you laid. ITS WAS DECENT AT BEST 7.5/10 You claim you're fuckin' godly? Quit hangin' on Chrit's nuts, The pictures you paint? you a Starvin' Artist, here's a few bucks. NOT FEELING AT ALL 6/10 Think you got skills, goin' is gettin' rough, but a diamond is forever, Forever witout skills, beat Jay, yeah the day right after neva. 7/10 NOT THAT GOOD 7.1/10 Phat Mic im batleing this bitch to prove he had a chance having his pathetic lyrics will have you hung off da branch OK OK...THAT WAS NOT A GOOD OPENER 6/10 all william hung like no lyrics no beat and just no flow and like delion get blowed off da band that no shows WHACK IN MY OPINION 5/10 quick to step but in the end you'll get creamed jerk off with sanitizers is the only way to cum clean I ACTUALLY GOT THE PUNCH 7/10 Jay you just a pawn here, I know I got you crew shook Cuz face it, Dating George will never give you the W...Bush THAT WAS FUCKIN GIMP 5/10 This shit is just practice so consider that fear is a factor I admit that I put I.P.'s in check like angry internet hackers 7/10 ITS A DECENT BAR AT BEST no need to know bout ya private life we know ya crews unheard thinks he's a young gun but have u heard of a murderous Blue bird(jay) UMMM NOT FEELING 6/10 Ya gonna see it, dat dudes ripped and appauled as if a condom snaped dip da head of a pen in bloodz of poets and still couldn't apply skill on ya raps NOPE BAD CLOSER PERIOD. 6/10 5/10 VOTE CJ |
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