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MACKA vs. DELEON
u said u spittin first, so drop, ill hit it up within 20 minutes.
10 lines max first to 5 votes. |
Damn i told you to set this up like 38 mins ago-i got to go i'll drop my shit around 5-5:30
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shit, time zone'll fuck me up. sorry bout bein late settin it bro. ill spit as soon as i can. if ur gonna be a while, then ill b a while afta that, coz i got to go to bed soon. It's late over here.
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My Razor-is-Pressed, I made it Graze-through-your-Neck I'll Drown you Greater-in-Depths of a Lake-when-it's-Drenched While Erasin-my-Sketch, escaping Agents-and-Feds I'll have you Payin-your-Pledge with the Weight-of-a-Sledge You got a Date-with-the-Ledge, I'll throw you Straight-off-the-Edge I'll smash your Face-with-my-Benz untill your Angel-Ascends Then Staple-the-Ends like it's the Latest-of-Trends My Range-and-my-Lex are full of Paste-to-Inject Tripping till you're thinking you're in Space-like-a-Trek I'll take the Blade-that-I-Clench and Lay-you-to-Rest I'll break your Legs-with-a-Wrench and have you Hanged-from-a-Fence |
Man, Mackka is gonna fuckkin MURDER dat shit... Good shit doe homie... Jus sayin...
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(*(*(*ILLUMINATI*)*)*) Novus Ordo Seclorum ? can i get a dickrida^^^^^^^^
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damn, no fuckin punches. ah well, ill hav to take it easy on ur ass then.
My name’s like heroin, you shouldn’t take-it-in-vain(vein)// Snap your vertebrae, then when you come back, break-it-again// Make-you-feel-pain, shakin-your-“frame” like earthquakes-to-a-window// Lyrically rape your wife while my verse-makes-her-a-widow// Disturb your ethics, slice your bitch crew and serve the cervix-to-Leon// Claiming LD but not on the sig shows how many dicks-you-be-on//* Having kinky anal sex is the only time you “cum-with-hot-shit”// Say you gunning-with-clicks, but it’s clear you’re rubbing-on-dicks// You got no punches like a right-handed Jim Abbott while I smash-your-chest// You’ll regret trying to spit against me so you try and “catch-your-breath”// Look at the Lyrical Destruction Sig |
While both of you have a nice flow it was pretty easy to see a clear victor here.
Deleon- Your verse flowed mad nicely but you only had one verse I could even call a punchline and it wasn't super strong... You didn't use any personal insults/name play or anything I expect in a battle so Ima give you a 6 outta 10. Macka- Decent flow, I will assume you didn't come as hard as you could- Your punchlines actually existed, you mentioned his sig which adds a little bit of personalization to the rhyme....I think all in all it was a good verse so Ima give you 7 outta 10.... Macka Wins. |
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cant really vote on that shit man, me and 40 tight. if u got ne other battles tho, ill b happy to.
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c'mon, lets get some votes
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Deleon: Opening was plain. There weren't them hard hittin punches I expect to see in the battle. The thing I liked about your flow was the vocab and flow. It flowed pretty well and I liked it overall but you have to come harder at your opponenet using more punches to get at him or her. Good Flow though.
Macka: Good opening punchline. Flow and Vocab was decent. The reason I am voting for you because you actually got at him and showed him some punchlines. I like the line about how he claims one thing but his sig says something else. You had some pretty hot punches in there for taking it easy on him. Vote: Macka http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124224 (Please click on this link to vote for the battle that I was In!!!!) |
lopsided battle ^^^^ i smell d/r s dat U?????/
winner deleon all da way better flow and punches connected nice drop deleon bestline-I'll have you Payin-your-Pledge with the Weight-of-a-Sledge You got a Date-with-the-Ledge, I'll throw you Straight-off-the-Edge nice drop worsteline -none ur elavating day after day nice overall verse gets a 8.7/10 maca ok spit but dosent match 2 deleon bestlien-Disturb your ethics, slice your bitch crew and serve the cervix-to-Leon// Claiming LD but not on the sig shows how many dicks-you-be-on//* okk worsteline-Having kinky anal sex is the only time you “cum-with-hot-shit”// Say you gunning-with-clicks, but it’s clear you’re rubbing-on-dicks// sex linez lame dats how u lost overall verse gets a 7/10 neva use sex linez winner-deleon |
Deleon: the opening was aight and the flow was hard to stay up with at first, untill you got into it, but that takes off points right there, and alot of it didn't make sense, and the punches weren't that hard hitting
Macka: ya opening was good shit, and it hooked me, and the flow kept it aight, good multis and wordplay, structure was good as well. and just kept flowing the hole way though. nice. but ummmaaa havta Vote: Macka 1. p.s can ya'll vote on any battles with .\\assacre in it, like .\\assacre vs black sinzz and such. just look you'll see it. thanks and much appreciated... good battle |
Deleon: nice flow and rhymes that was pretty good but no punches dog and macka got some good punches nice flow and nailing it -Vote Macka
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damn, ok, some votes have been disqualified, so uppin for more i gess.
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its these fuckin newbs explained your votes so we dont got to wave um off
i'd rather have vets vote on this.....like choppa city did |
Deleon
Best Line... My Razor-is-Pressed, I made it Graze-through-your-Neck I'll Drown you Greater-in-Depths of a Lake-when-it's-Drenched Worst Line... My Range-and-my-Lex are full of Paste-to-Inject Tripping till you're thinking you're in Space-like-a-Trek MACKA Best Line.... You got no punches like a right-handed Jim Abbott while I smash-your-chest// You’ll regret trying to spit against me so you try and “catch-your-breath”// Worst Line..... Make-you-feel-pain, shakin-your-“frame” like earthquakes-to-a-window// Lyrically rape your wife while my verse-makes-her-a-widow// Macka-I Liked You Punches Personal And Structure But The Struucture Was Pretty Off Deleon..Loved YouR Verse But Didnt Have Any Personal's Your Structure Was NEat But I Guess Macka W0N ThIs...... |
Damn!guess going easy on a newb has come to bite me back in the ass twice
no more of that shit :nono: ...but on the real nice drop macka |
macka you didnt drop the vote i my battle so when you vote in it I will vote in this so till then........ya better poll
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Macka-alright stuff but came weak and hard
structure was ok but deleon's was better.......SImilies was ok so was the metas.....SImply work on the balance also the complexity..... Deleon-Came ok....but not that alright.....some was ok some was simply weak....structure was good similies need work metas was ok......Personals dont really know Complexity ok......Keep elevatin aight v.Macka |
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