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li vs. CREATE
10 lines max
no crew votes no hate votes no d/r votes no bitin |
aight atfter you check in then we both got 20 min.
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checked in....g'luck.....
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aight pce...brb....................................
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..............LIKE CHEAP BRAIDS IM SPLITTEN THIS KIDS WIG.............
i'll stick my dick in ur ear...& make sure u hear wat im cumnin wit// da way im electrifing dis crappy rapper u culd say im literally stunnin shit// he couldnt pen point his rhymes so he decided to spit on computers// kids still a virgin, viewing dp's pics is da only place he'll see a pair of hooters// fucked dis pussy up...like his pregnancy test i got him seen shit positive// breakin the laws you live... wit my intelectual manifested derogitive's// u just made a devistating sacrafice like when i was hung from the cross// its like your head to head with defeat the way i got you facing a loss// LI you could neva cumn hard...even if you was spitten erections// failed the lyrical inspections...follow da directions in de tutorial section// aight just a lil somethin off the top off the dome........pce... |
my verse
Okay okay….
Dog you’re a fake, cant play a playa, proved that in our crew thread… Asked to get back in, expected to be accepted, but got NO instead… Walks around like a top head, and his rhymes cant be messed with… But when it came down to votes, no one had you on their respect list… With a record like that, your rhymes don’t come close to your expectations… That’s why im goin for best emcee and topical, but you have no nominations… Spend your money on an education, ya need it more than a mic… This guys a dumbass, let alone his name, he cant spell mine right*… You’re a weakling, try all you want but you just can’t attack this… Now I understand why ya records good, cause you hunt for wackness… Explanation - check the poll cuz he forgot to put the . after I |
Close battle y'all
Create........man good drop you had some hard punches throughout the verse from begginnning to end, you had good structure an flow, but you lacked in the personals, vocab was tight, but multies was lackig, but besides personals an multies you had a hot verse, your opener was hot, an ya wordplay was real tight, closer was highlight of your verse, good drop man. L.I. you came hard too, it was exact opposite for you, you had good personals, but your punches were lacking, didn't really have any multies, vocab was good, flow was good, strructure was good, I got your opener but I din't like it, 2nd line was good, but closer was really weak, no disrespect man but ya lost this one in my opinon, good drop but a drop off from some of your other drops man. Vote: Creative |
^^ lol personals are punches....o well....and i did have multi's....anyways thanks for the honest votes...ima up this...
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yo, this was a tight battle. I do however think that L.I. took this by a slight margin. It was a HOT battle tough. Mad props to both.
CreaTiviTie, I think you had a very good verse. Awesome vocab usuage, and nice punches. You had many good hard hittin' punches too. I liked your verse. BUT, your flow was a little shaky in a few areas. Overall, I give you a 9.2/10 HOT verse. Nice drop, man. L.I., You had an awesome verse. You had pretty good vocab and some multi's, which is good. You also, had some nice hittin' punches. Your flow was also consistent throughout the entire verse. Also, the link shit, lol, made some of the punches really good. But I think you should cut down on them, cuz some people might be too lazy to look at them. But overall, I give you a 9.4/10 Good battle by both. v/L.I. |
Am I Allowed to vote?
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nah u cant poll....but feel free to leave feedback.......
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go ahead DV you can vote.............................
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aight chek it
Creativitie: Flow:8/10 Wordusage:8/10 Vocab:7/10 Creativity:7/10 Punches:8/10 Opener:7/10 Closer:7/10 Overall:52/70 comment:good shit you came hard wit the punches but it woulda been a eazy win if you had personals ya feel...nice vocab and wordplay// Fav/Line:closer L.I. Flow:8/10 Wordusage:5/10 Vocab:7/10 Creativity:7/10 Punches:9/10 Opener:8/10 Closer:7/10 Overall: comment:this wasnt a hate vote or anything like that...nice personals just didnt have alot of punches like Triple_N said...good shit overall...you've elevated.. Fav/Line:opener NiCe Personal v/creaTivitie |
Overall i have to say i enjoyed this battle.
CreaTiviTie: Good verse. Nice wordplay, good punches that was hitting hard, but some seemed forced. Flow was off and on thats what messed me up in yo verse. Since it was blindspit good stuff Overall nice drop. L.I: Also good verse, You had pretty Vocab was ok but good multis. Punches was dope u connected it with personals..smart. The only thang u beat Creative is u stayed consistent with yo punches. U was creative added links to make it personal. But overall I have to give it to you. Nice verse. V/LI CreatiVe U my dawg...but LI edged this one with betta personals my man. Ps: It Wont Let Me Poll Vote. |
closed closed closed OMG L.I ripped shit on dis 1 oh god
LI-nice ish punches was off da chain let alone by nice punches wit a creative flow bestline-Walks around like a top head, and his rhymes cant be messed with… But when it came down to votes, no one had you on their respect list… hott 2nd bestline-With a record like that, your rhymes don’t come close to your expectations… That’s why im goin for best emcee and topical, but you have no nominations… goddamn dat wass ill worsteline-none start 2 finish it was illmattic overall verse gets a 9.6/10 top flight motha fuckin security creative-descent shit but couldve stepped up cuz Li brought some ill shit 2 da table bestline-u just made a devistating sacrafice like when i was hung from the cross// its like your head to head with defeat the way i got you facing a loss// nice worsteline-none but still no match overall yo verse gets a 8.9/10 winner-L.I |
L.I. - Awesome spit man, hott flow.. and good personals, multi's and your punches was good.
Best Line - Walks around like a top head, and his rhymes cant be messed with… But when it came down to votes, no one had you on their respect list… Worst Line - NONE Creativitie - Good spit man, good flow.. good personals, awesome vocab.. and niice wordplay. Best Line - LI you could neva cumn hard...even if you was spitten erections// failed the lyrical inspections...follow da directions in de tutorial section// (niice closer) Worst Line - u just made a devistating sacrafice like when i was hung from the cross// its like your head to head with defeat the way i got you facing a loss// OVERALL - Close battle here, but I gotta give it to L.I. .. he came harder and his flow was hott, liked his personals and punches too. Creativitie your shit was good and awesome wordplay and vocab.. but your personals and punches wasnt as good as L.I.'s come wit some hotter personals next time VS L.I. or he gun rip you again. VOTE - L.I. RETURN THE FAV http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123911 |
L.I. - Hott flow-like the personals you used by using the links and shit to make ya point
Best Line - Walks around like a top head, and his rhymes cant be messed with… But when it came down to votes, no one had you on their respect list… Worst Line - I didnt really see a weak line in ya flow nice drop Creativitie -again another nice drop-nice word play and vocab Best Line - LI you could neva cumn hard...even if you was spitten erections// failed the lyrical inspections...follow da directions in de tutorial section// Worst Line - u just made a devistating sacrafice like when i was hung from the cross// its like your head to head with defeat the way i got you facing a loss// thats a nice line but it just doesnt hit hard enough OVERALL - Close battle, but I got to give it to L.I.-his flow hit harder and i was feelin it alot more-creative your puunches were nice just think they need to be a little more personal on this battle...props to both of yall vote=L.I. |
Weak Battle......
L.i I Wasn't Feeling Yo' Verse... If Your A Vet...... U Got 2 Show It In Every Battle..... (elevate.....create... I Like Your Punchlines....... L.i The Best U Came With Was Personals....... Breakdown... L.i-personals~ Create-punchlines~ Create-wordplay~ Create-structure~ ~elevate~.... Both Of You Got One Of The Best Record's On Here... With Those Verses... You Would've Got Merked By Newb's..... Honest Vote'....... |
^You`re Wack get the fuck out of here & go to frontlines.
You dont know what Elevated It Is Keep thinking you`re good. |
Personals PROVE a member is not a biter obviously you dont know that Kid Elevate Quickly . .
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can you vote...............^^^^^^^^^^
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M-section...
Shut The Fuck Up........... I Gave Him Personals'....... The Only Thing He Had................. Stop D/r Crew Members.... |
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